First Place -- 19 Points
open windows
a lullaby sung
in Cantonese
Andrea Gradidge (ushi)
Jul2003
(1,7,2) = 19
comments
Second Place -- 13 Points
in my shadow
I see more deeply
into the water
Nancy Smith
Feb2003
(2,3,1) = 13
comments
Third Place -- 10 Points
her last canvas --
the artist captures
a fading sunset
Rosa Velt
jun2003
(0,4,2) = 10
comments
moving day
echoes in a house
no longer my home
Kate Creighton
jan2003
(0,2,6) = 10
comments
Fourth Place -- 9 Points
old desktop
the principal looks for
his initials
Jim Mullins
Aug2003
(0,3,3) = 9
comments
sketchpad --
sunlight inches
towards the fly
Martin
jun2003
(1,2,2) = 9
comments
winter night
an empty train disappears
into falling snow
Pamela Molhuysen
mar2003
(1,2,2) = 9
comments
sidewalk café -
an alley cat licks
spilled latte
Darrell Byrd
May2003
(1,2,2) = 9
comments
Fifth Place -- 8 Points
dried clay on his hands
the potter
rolls a cigarette
w.f. owen
jun2003
(1,1,3) = 8
comments
summer breeze ~
the clink of empty swings
circles the schoolyard
Deborah Russell
Aug2003
(1,2,1) = 8
pencil shavings--
the student's tongue
curls and uncurls
DeVar Dahl
Jun2003
(2,0,2) = 8
comments
Sixth Place -- 7 Points
garden sculptures
children strike poses
near a sunlit wall
Allen McGill
May2003
(0,2,3) = 7
comments
cobblestone alley
his cane
knows the way
w.f. owen
apr2003
(1,1,2) = 7
comments
summer music --
pebbles being carried
in and out with the tide
Rosa Velt
Jul2003
(0,2,3) = 7
comments
bicycling
through plum blossoms --
a sudden gust
Carole MacRury
mar2003
(0,2,3) = 7
Seventh Place -- 6 Points
cooler nights -
the curve of your back
nestled in mine
Carol Raisfeld
sep2002
(0,1,4) = 6
comments
light rain
the moving van
pulls away
Linda Papanicoulauo
Mar 2003
(0,2,2) = 6
comments
on the book cover
the same name
over and over
C. Lee Robinson
Aug2003
(1,0,3) = 6
the widow's house
window by window
lights go out
Carol Raisfeld
jan2003
(0,2,2) = 6
comments
on grandma's brass lamp
three generations
of fingerprints
Cindy Tebo
oct2002
(0,2,2) = 6
boundary waters
the cry of the loon
by my canoe
Deborah P. Kolodji
mar2003
(0,1,4) = 6
comments
spring rain --
we bicycle through
the scent of violets
Hortensia Anderson
mar2003
(1,0,3) = 6
cooler days
a fallen leaf twists
on a strand of web
Sue
sep2002
(0,3,0) = 6
Eighth Place -- 5 Points
campfire shadows--
pine smoke flavors
the pork and beans
DeVar Dahl
Feb2003
(0,1,3) = 5
comments
village heat--
a donkey's ear twitches
out of its hat
Martin
nov2002
(0,1,3) = 5
comments
autumn leaves -
children crowd around
the fallen nest
Carol Raisfeld
dec2002
(0,0,5) = 5
comments
Ninth Place -- 4 Points
first grader's scream
a pet snake
at show and tell
Carmel C. Lively
Aug2003
(0,1,2) = 4
October night
the neighbor's bug lamp catches
nothing but snow
OwenB
oct2002
(1,0,1) = 4
daybreak --
windows across the valley
turn rose gold
Hortensia Anderson
apr2003
(0,2,0) = 4
comments
summer garden--
frog and stone bathed
in moonlight
Sheila Windsor
May2003
(1,0,1) = 4
howling wind
an abandoned nest clings
to the moon
Rob Scott
dec2002
(0,1,2) = 4
comments
first school day
he hides his glasses
in the pocket
Tore Sverredal
Aug2003
(0,0,4) = 4
Tenth Place -- 3 Points
band practice night
the board approves a quote
for soundproofing
Andrea Gradidge (ushi)
Aug2003
(0,1,1) = 3
heatwave
the painful sound
of violin practice
Celia Crook
Jul2003
(0,1,1) = 3
comments
writing his name
with a lot of screeches
the new teacher
Emile Molhuysen
Aug2003
(0,0,3) = 3
comments
open house
laughter spills out
on the porch
Carmen Sterba
Jan2003
(0,0,3) = 3
comments
Sunday morning
in the steeple's shadow
virgin snow
Carol Raisfeld
feb2003
(0,1,1) = 3
comments