haikuworld: The Shiki Monthly Kukai (First Annual Results)

The Shiki Monthly Kukai

Haiku Comments -- First Annual Kigo

Tenth Place -- 6 Points

row of coral bells
a hummingbird
rings each one

OwenB
feb2003
(0,2,2) = 6

This one is one of my most favorite haiku in the list. It's plain beautiful. The hummingbird takes the nectar from each coral bell flower, flying from one to another and as if ringing each little "bell." It's a very poetical way to say that the hummingbird visits each bell flower.

Zhanna P. Rader

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