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The Shiki Monthly Kukai

Haiku Comments -- First Annual Kigo

First Place -- 26 Points

winter rain
one flowered umbrella
at the funeral

Carol Raisfeld
jan2003
(1,6,11) = 26


People anticipated the rain, and they took their umbrellas (black ones, of course) with them. Still someone who was, perhaps, too young or/and who hardly knew the deceased (or did not know him/her at all), took the only umbrella he/she had, or, probably, didf not even think about the color. One flowered umbrella among all the black ones is quite noticeable. It may also mean that someone was even glad that the person died. It may also mean that there is some other side of life that's rather cheerful. That umbrella might even have looked like a flower growing close the black dirt of the dug out soil.

Zhanna P. Rader

This one is intriguing, it seems thoughtless since a funeral should be all in black. It is very human to notice this flowered umbrella. Has natural grief caused a woman to overlook convention and with the necessity of common rainy weather brought her only [inappropriate] umbrella, or does she flaunt her widowed status? It has a jaunty "life goes on" attitude that would be talked about later behind hands. There's a short story or a movie in here.

Andrea Gradidge

This onr shows how a simple observation can turn a somber occasion into something brighter and more hopeful--that life continues even though someone we care about has passed on.

Cindy Tebo

This is immediately striking visually and leads the thoughts onwards from the sadness of death to the gaiety of flower patterns; one could imagine quite a drama in the contrast between the different types of umbrella at this occasion

Florence Vilén







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