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The Shiki Monthly Kukai

Haiku Comments -- First Annual Kigo

Eighth Place -- 8 Points

cloudy sky -
every sunflower looking
in another direction

Tomislav Maretic
aug2003
(0,2,4) = 8


This is an interesting image since it seems that sunflowers are pretty consistent in facing the sun. It also implys the disorder that results when a strong focal point or leader is missing. I like the levels of meaning in this haiku.

DeVar







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