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The Shiki Monthly Kukai

September 2008 Kukai

Dear Haiku Friends,

Here are the results for the September 2008 Kukai, wherein our Kigo subject was "Autumn" and our Free Format subject was "Rock or Stone".

Congratulations to April Serock, winner of our Kigo section and to Devika Menon, winner of our Free Format section!


The haiku are listed in order of total points received from voters. The numbers reflect the number of voters who gave the haiku either three points, two points, or one point -- followed by the total points for all votes.

Those who were given less than three points and who requested anonymity in such a case are so noted.


In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point points were cast for this poem by the other participating poets.

(214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.

Voters comments are in italics below the respective poems.

August 2008 Results
Kigo Theme:
Autumn
Free Format Theme:
Rock or Stone

First Place – Twenty-eight Points
autumn
the sky grows bigger
by one leaf

April Serock
(2,5,12) = 28 Pts

A beauty. Something we've all experienced but this makes me feel that I'm seeing it for the first time.

A nice shift of perspective.


Second Place – Twenty-four Points
autumn . . .
a spider takes over
the watering can

sheila windsor
(1,5,11) = 24 Pts


Third Place – Nineteen Points
autumn chill —
the church fills
with the smell of mothballs

Jacek M
(2,2,9) = 19 Pts

autumn breeze
a dragonfly skims sunlight
off the pond

Keiko Izawa
(1,5,6) = 19 Pts

a field
of faceless pumpkins...
Autumn begins

ed markowski
(0,3,13) = 19 Pts

I like that phrase, 'faceless pumpkins', for Jack O' Lanterns-to-be.


Fourth Place – Seventeen Points
autumn dusk
an old man bends
to the earth

Melissa Spurr
(0,5,7) = 17 Pts


Fifth Place – Sixteen Points
autumn
trees undressing
leaf by leaf

Frances McCarthy
(0,5,6) = 16 Pts

An interesting reversal.


Sixth Place – Fourteen Points
autumn evening
a phone call from the friend
who lives alone

Bill Kenney
(0,2,10) = 14 Pts

Simultaneously brings to mind the coziness of friendship and the cool shiver of loneliness.


Seventh Place – Twelve Points
late autumn
a lone aspen leaf
resists the wind

Warren Gossett
(0,3,6) = 12 Pts

I like the word resist used here.


Eighth Place – Eleven Points
leaves raked
a boy jumps
into autumn

Roberta Beary
(1,1,6) = 11 Pts

I love this image. It's full of life - a timeless story, beautifully told.

So well crafted... just seven words yet rich in image and motion.

lazy river
a few poplar leaves drift
toward autumn

polona
(0,2,7) = 11 Pts

A beauty. Something we've all experienced but this makes me feel that I'm seeing it for the first time.

Ah . . . such a gentle poem. Lazy and drift . . . wonderful.


Ninth Place – Ten Points
autumn dawn
a chimney belches
its swifts

Barbara Snow
(1,3,1) = 10 Pts

a granddaughter
leads her through the corn maze
autumn deepens

tom painting
(0,3,4) = 10 Pts

autumn rain —
a tattooed man sells
permanent markers

Israel Lopez Balan
(0,3,4) = 10 Pts

autumn lingers
my father's coat still smells
like him

Earl Keener
(0,3,4) = 10 Pts


Tenth Place – Nine Points
crisp autumn morning
a deer sips at the blue lake —
artist paint is dry

Rebecca S.
(1,2,2) = 9 Pts

morning fog and
faint light from the bakery
early autumn

Boris Nazansky
(1,2,2) = 9 Pts

autumn fields
a few wisps of mist
in the stubble

Jan O'Loughlin
(0,1,7) = 9 Pts

autumn night
we lose ourselves
in the corn maze

Beth Powell
(0,1,7) = 9 Pts

Hadn't heard of 'corn maze' before. Interesting concept and a well formed haiku.

Autumn evening
the hoot owl tires
of answering me

Terri L. French
(0,0,9) = 9 Pts

Serene, almost teased sentiment, making the best of the last few moments of summer.

The dependable call-and-response breaking down... feels very autumnal.


Eleventh Place – Eight Points
Dad's wedding ring
begins to loosen . . .
autumn rain

Alice Frampton
(0,2,4) = 8 Pts

autumn sunshine:
she finds a dime
in the grass

Raquel Bailey
(0,2,4) = 8 Pts

early autumn rain
the darkening beach
all mine

Jon Baldwin
(0,1,6) = 8 Pts

autumn air
the koi fish rise
in my shadow

Harvey Jenkins
(0,1,6) = 8 Pts


Twelfth Place – Seven Points
like an autumn leaf
first night in my new flat
even the moon has moved

Hermione
(1,2,0) = 7 Pts

I love this unusual comparison.

for a pinch of grain
koi splatter the pond
in autumn colors

Michael McClintock
(0,2,3) = 7 Pts

more rain
and a kitchen cricket —
autumn songs

Shelley Krause
(0,2,3) = 7 Pts

There is something cozy about these sounds.

Love the combination of sounds in this one and the contrast of the wet/dry imagery.

autumn walk —
in a colourful forest
a grey couple

max verhart
(0,0,7) = 7 Pts

long autumn evening
the musty smell
of old book

Dorota Pyra
(0,0,7) = 7 Pts


Thirteenth Place – Six Points
the bell buoy
barely a silhouette —
august fog

Carol Raisfeld
(0,2,2) = 6 Pts

You can feel the ocean cool.

I opened the door
and autumn
blew rain in my face

helge t.
(0,2,2) = 6 Pts

no autumn yet
this autumn

Robert Ertman
(0,1,4) = 6 Pts

This one was the one I felt compelled to read aloud to my partner, and the one that stayed with me all week.

words unspoken
in the chillness of the evening
autumn leaves

Fred Flohr
(0,1,4,) = 6 Pts

Autumn rain —
the smell of trees
turning

Marylouise Knight
(0,1,4) = 6 Pts

autumn equinox —
we agree to split
the child support

Mauree Pendergrast
(0,1,4) = 6 Pts


Fourteenth Place – Five Points
ripe peaches
and six geese overhead
...autumn rising

Jeff Hanson
(0,2,1) = 5 Pts

these autumn mountains —
even a ghost
would leave prints...

Kurt R. W.
(0,1,3) = 5 Pts

unfolding autumn —
a stray cat quietly sits
at the front door

Origa
(0,1,3) = 5 Pts

autumn equinox
shadows slant from the trees
at new angles

Catherine J.S. Lee
(0,1,3) = 5 Pts


Fifteenth Place – Four Points
a long drive —
autumn leaves
in hot pursuit

Sunil Uniyal
(0,2,0) = 4 Pts

now in a small box
the ring that hugged my finger —
Autumn came too soon

Betty Kaplan
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts

tumbling down
the mountainside
tie-dye autumn

Darrell Lindsey
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts

Autumn passing —
Last leaf on a bare tree
Captured by the wind

James Sawers
(0,2,0) = 4 Pts

autumn wind —
the lower clouds outrun
the higher ones

Isabelle Prondzynski
(0,0,4) = 4 Pts

autumn sun
a rainbow ...
no, two

og_a
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts

A perfectly caught moment.

another argument ~
a dry autumn leaf
rolled up tight

Paul Hodder
(0,0,4) = 4 Pts

The spirit becomes weary of conflict. We close ourselves off even when doing so might portend a sort of psychic falling and death, what the alchemists call negredo. In the long run closing off may also lead to spring, a psychic rebirth.

turkey feathers
on grandma's hat
autumn funeral

Meggy
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts

so much season
in the reedy voice
of the cricket

Paul O. Williams
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts

waltzing golden birch
in autumn evening dress
starry night jewels

Jon Espen Vassbotn
(1,0,1) = 4 Pts

in the space
between summer and autumn
purple flowers

carol pearce-worthington
(0,0,4) = 4 Pts

morning haze
a seaplane lifts
into autumn

Susan Constable
(0,0,4) = 4 Pts

the silence
in the shadows
autumn dusk

Sjs
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts

autumn dampness
the deep-fried scent
of the tavern

Jennifer Corpe
(0,0,4) = 4 Pts

autumn freight
cold rails groan louder
in the dark

ruthanne
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts

Autumn
fading colors of leaves
nothing but naked trees

Watpliwy
(1,0,1) = 4 Pts


Sixteenth Place – Three Points
autumn colours —
do you remember
our first kiss?

Daniela Bullas
(0,1,1) = 3 Pts

Autumn is my life.
Not quite spring, not quite summer.
But never winter.

Tanja Cilia
(0,1,1) = 3 Pts

Autumn rain
picking colors from the tree
I color my hair

Ben Gieske
(0,0,3) = 3 Pts

I feel autumn
even in the kiss: a cold nose
and warm lips

Tomislav M.
(1,0,0) = 3 Pts

All is dwindling
Shorter days...and years
Autumn closes in

Mary E. Gray
(0,1,1) = 3 Pts

autistic woman . . .
autumn comes hard
in spite of her song

Bill Pauly
(0,1,1) = 3 Pts

autumn morn
a loon calls across
the placid lake

Meredith Cavalieri
(0,0,3) = 3 Pts

autumn chill
the young geese try out
running on water

Marlθne Buitelaar
(0,1,1) = 3 Pts

deep into autumn
browsing through online albums
to keep the room warm

Cristian Mocanu
(0,0,3) = 3 Pts

doe prints
where she stopped
for an autumn wind

Dan Schwerin
(1,0,0) = 3 Pts


Seventeenth Place – Two Points
the last rose
in a garden going wild
autumn distress sale

Garry Eaton
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts

she cannot climb
the steps anymore —
autumn gets in her way

anonymous
(0,1,0) = 2 Pts

bird watching —
the autumn leaves
in the silent air

anonymous
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts

Uncalled guest,
the autumn wind
flings the gate open

Vasile Moldovan
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts

A butterfly shivering
last days in autumn —
shadows and dust.

Ashi
(0,1,) = 2 Pts

autumn stalks the hills
wearing sun as a disguise
summer is the prey

Deirdre Godwin
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts

autumn —
caterpillar
to butterfly

peter
(0,1,0) = 2 Pts

autumn rain
a collage of
wet maple leaves

anonymous
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts

autumn mornings
I walk with
renewed vigour

Ruth Powell
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts

autumn harvest...
above the grass
squirrel tails sprouting

anonymous
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts

mooncake festival —
just two floating lanterns
of autumn lovers

renaye lo
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts

autumn decay
a broken leaf blower
behind the shed

Garry Gay
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts

ants lose
their way in the cracks . . .
autumn leaves

Mary Davila
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts

autumn light —
even the shadows
take on warmth

anonymous
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts


Eighteenth Place – One Point
first month
of autumn
— cicadas

miriam chaikin

autumn wine —
the ripest berries
on the vines

bre

Straight lines, Natures temple,
I know you are the one.
Autumn is a God.

Shannon Skillman

autumn ballet
Chopin's waltz
drifts out the window

Shernaz Wadia

touching a dragonfly
touching a faded daylily
early autumn

Bruce Ross

autumn rain —
inside the dusty husks
shiny sweet corn

Lin Geary

yearly reminder
summer has come and has gone
the cool autumn breeze

todd eddy

Autumn apples
rot beneath bent trees

Yositaka

the leaves rustle.
hammock swings.
autumn winds.

Jozuah Darksong

before winter's snow
autumn's magic touch
Indian summer

Edward

slowly droplets slide
down the rusty spokes--
autumn drizzle

DeVar

that autumn night
on my bedroom window
branches knocking

emile molhuysen

almost autumn
a hockey puck
in the petunias

Neil Moylan

Must be a Canadian! It's never too early to start playing street hockey. And the sounds hockey/puck/petunias are lovely.

autumn dusk —
the air threads floating
over the field

Miorita

Autumn
reveals her
true colors

1bodhisattva

autumn begins —
on the same green branch
the first yellow leaf

vishnu kapoor

in my autumn days
recollecting how old dreams
vanished like blossoms

Philip Ashton

between autumn storms
blue wildflowers
cupping the last light

Marilyn Hazelton

autumn harvest
the crescent is reaping
moorlands

Iga

autumn coolness...
how father expects
he'll go

anonymous

autumn —
the terminal velocities
of reds and yellows

Mike Montreuil

autumn 's feast —
our glasses raised
to different thanks

Wendy Kabiri


Nineteenth Place – Sorry, no points this time.
chill in her voice
and cold, withering stare,
autumn becomes her

if

silent trees
autumn
for the cicadas

Bill Hudson

With roaring winds
the trees wave all night:
autumn in courtyard

R.K.Singh

autumn coming...
a girl with golden hair
turns into the wind

Josh Wikoff

after their visit
autumn stays behind
with golden leaves

anonymous

bright fall foliage
nirvana for leaf peepers
until next autumn

Jyothirmai Gubili

autumn leaves
and sunset reflected in
mountain lake

Jim Applegate

7th of September —
the first glimpse of autumn
on a web-cam

Laurene Post

Autumn gale
flies in the face of the moon
wind-blown spindrift

Janice Hornburg

awaiting autumn
I surrender to the
burning sun

Elena Naskova

hurry woolly bear
this autumn path's too damp
for butterflies

andrea

Summers glow
within autumn shadows
sleeping seedlings

Tina

autumn wind all leaves on the bend

Magdalena Banaszkiewicz

Blue jays call
tall trees wave their arms
autumn noise.

Trevor Camp

fading autumnscape
flashes by
unfolding new canvas

cire

Autumn —
the sunny south..
still green

terrytip

autumn sweaters
cede the closet shelf
to folded shorts

gourdman

a color explosion
warms the cooling air--
autumn mardi gras

Pearl

autumn festival
on her neck again
last year's amber

john tiong chunghoo

autumn
around the corner
baby peek-a-boo’s

Agnes Eva Savich

voices and footsteps
again on the sidewalk
autumn follows

deanna tief

children chase minnows
in the almost-dry creek ...
autumn heat

Bridget Cougar

autumn light —
I fling the bee's stinger
to the ground

jt

autumn pond
some of the ripples
begin at the surface

Joyce Clement

summer plants erect
then...falling, falling...autumn
drops them down ‘til spring

dragonfly

autumn moves —
a last mow of the lawn
before snowbirds fly south

jim swift

more starts
I guess tonight —
autumn breeze

Reza-Iran

forest walk —
eyes and pockets filled with
autumn mosaics

Dejan Pavlinovic

early autumn heat —
with the waxing moon
a moonflower unfolds

jill

autumn's harbingers —
first bronze leaf curls on the tree
cravings for soups and stews

Hazel A. Witherspoon

bank teller
using the ATM —
autumn rain

Gene Doty

trees careen in
the air current —
autumn parking

Lech Szeglowski

autumn hillside
curves onto river
train through sky

anonymous

autumn storm—
air conditioner
silenced

LGD

autumn starts
my vacation ends
Labor Day

gillena

Warm autumn evening
poems made easy —
scribbles on paper

George Hazard


First Place – Twenty-five Points
drought year —
only the shape of water
on the stones

Devika
(0,7,11) = 25 Pts

Nicely captures the way we seek water ceaselessly during a drought.


Second Place – Twenty-two Points
family dog
the weight of the stones
upon his grave

Melissa Spurr
(1,5,9) = 22 Pts

Simply stated, but says all that it needs to.


Third Place – Eighteen Points
endless night —
between the stepping stones
the other half of the moon

Elena Naskova
(3,3,3) = 18 Pts

A bit of a puzzle as to exactly what I'm seeing, but the atmosphere wins my vote.


Fourth Place – Fifteen Points
graveside
the comfort of
a smooth pebble

Paul Hodder
(0,3,9) = 15 Pts


Fifth Place – Thirteen Points
worn soft
by the movement of time
the heart of stone

Bill Hudson
(1,4,2) = 13 Pts


Sixth Place – Twelve Points
filling the hole in my path a stepping stone

Josh Wikoff
(1,2,5) = 12 Pts


Seventh Place – Eleven Points
mountain brook —
a wagtail advances
stone by stone

Isabelle Prondzynski
(1,1,6) = 11 Pts

tinder and flint stone
all I have under the moon
and this loneliness...

Cristian Mocanu
(0,4,3) = 11 Pts


Eighth Place – Ten Points
foggy night
a new opal
on my finger

Meggy
(1,3,1) = 10 Pts

weathered granite —
just a few
letters

Dorota Pyra
(0,3,4) = 10 Pts

Imbued with both the certainty and mystery of death.

country road
deep in the deep leaves
old headstones

Bruce Ross
(0,2,6) = 10 Pts

dry river bed
a fawn licks the color
from a rock

Susan Constable
(0,2,6) = 10 Pts


Ninth Place – Nine Points
limestone cave
our hands reach out to
stalactites

andrea
(1,1,4) = 9 Pts

moonless night
the sound of a skipping stone
sinking

ed markowski
(0,3,3) = 9 Pts


Tenth Place – Eight Points
pine tree standing tall
how many rocks did you crush
reaching for the sky

todd eddy
(2,1,0) = 8 Pts

summer's end —
driveway stones
no longer sharp

Shelley Krause
(1,0,5) = 8 Pts

Barefoot days perfectly defined. autumn wind —
the marble buddha
so quiet

Israel Lopez Balan
(0,1,6) = 8 Pts

still palm warm
the beach pebble
you gave me

Jon Baldwin
(0,1,6) = 8 Pts


Eleventh Place – Seven Points
Here I am standing
between a rock and the sea;
Will I climb or swim?

Tanja
(0,2,3) = 7 Pts

new headstone
a ragged gentleman
sharing his moonshine

selwyn
(0,1,5) = 7 Pts

forevermore
two spiders cavort
in amber

Meredith Cavalieri
(0,1,5) = 7 Pts

summer drought —
the river rocks
that holed our canoe

Mike Montreuil
(0,1,5) = 7 Pts

This rueful realization conjures up a whole scene.


Twelfth Place – Six Points
hidden in limestone
leopards lurk in shadows
of a ruby —

ARW
(2,0,0) = 6 Pts

my grandfather
rubbing his feet with a stone —
evening bath

Paul Omondi
(0,2,2) = 6 Pts

a beach pebble
only for a moment
in a little hand

Dejan Pavlinovic
(0,2,2) = 6 Pts

still pond
our skipped stones ripple
into sunset

Catherine J.S. Lee
(0,2,2) = 6 Pts

crushed gravel —
his mother-in-law's voice
over the phone

DeVar
(0,1,4) = 6 Pts

Although I think this would be stronger in first person, it's still very evocative.

alone in a field
the great stone
made of moonlight

Neil Moylan
(0,0,6) = 6 Pts

I liked the contrast of mass and light here.

among the crows
a scattering
of apricot stones

Warren Gossett
(0,0,6) = 6 Pts


Thirteenth Place – Five Points
"John + Brad"
nothing is in stone
any more

Origa
(1,0,2) = 5 Pts

Saddened by its death
the child makes a grave with stones
for the butterfly.

Laurie A. Szpot
(1,1,0) = 5 Pts

Entering
the brotherhood of boulders
I put on a green cape

Jon Espen Vassbotn
(1,1,0) = 5 Pts

Lovely in illustrating the process of 'going to the pine to learn about the pine'. We stop rolling and hunker down relating to the boulders beneath their moss.

a pebble thrown
into the mountain lake
circles of the sky

Tomislav M.
(0,2,1) = 5 Pts

funeral evening
her rose-quartz angel
plays with the light

sheila windsor
(0,1,3) = 5 Pts

fall classic
a boy throws stones
through the tire swing

tom painting
(0,0,5) = 5 Pts

Love the double resonance of "classic" here & the visual of the boy's throwing.

flash flood
the agate resumes its journey
to the sea

Edward
(0,0,5) = 5 Pts


Fourteenth Place – Four Points
skipping stones
father and son
bonding

Betty Kaplan
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts

third try
his stone skips farther
than mine

Roberta Beary
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts

I picture a father with his son, who is growing up much too fast.

rapid stream —
we cross holding hands
stone after stone

Jeff Hanson
(0,2,0) = 4 Pts

the poet's choice...
to skim a stone
or throw a rock

Laurene Post
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts

long day —
a fishing rod attached
to a stone

Kelvin Mukoselo
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts

breakwater
bird droppings cover
the jagged rocks

Carmel Lively Westerman
(0,2,0) = 4 Pts

His sharpening stone
an anchor for cobwebs

Yositaka (0,2,0) = 4 Pts

I really admire the imagery in this haiku and it's very tight construction. The word 'anchor' for me symbolizes the stability of the world which remains in 'his' absence (for whatever reason) and which clearly (if also ephemerally) attaches the world of man to the broader world of nature.

scotch over rocks
songs by the stones
good times gone

cire
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts

I appreciated seeing a different kind of rock, and it has a mellow, autumnal feeling to me.

meditation stone —
to crickets
I am just another obstacle

jt
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts

staring at us
from the rock
two round spots of a butterfly

john tiong chunghoo
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts

meadow orchids
on a limestone bed
an ancient road

Marlθne
(0,1,2) = 4 Pts

This image stayed in my mind.

anniversary —
finding a heart-shaped stone
on my path

Pia Sosua
(0,0,4) = 4 Pts

first ray of light
behind the stone cottage —
a rooster raises his head

jill
(0,0,4) = 4 Pts

a stone
on the edge of rock
hides an avalanche

Iga
(1,0,1) = 4 Pts


Fifteenth Place – Three Points
house of salvation
colorful stained glass windows
shaped like old gravestones

if
(0,1,1) = 3 Pts

The child is soft
and smells warm —
he is a stone in my arms

Aalix
(1,0,0) = 3 Pts

a cricket chirps —
September equinox
at Stonehenge

Daniela Bullas
(0,0,3) = 3 Pts

mountain pass
a crumbling rock cradles
fossil shells

polona
(0,0,3) = 3 Pts

night waves storm
the stillness
of barnacled rocks

Frances McCarthy
(0,0,3) = 3 Pts

the stone is
of natures grey —
the name is yours

Tina
(0,1,1) = 3 Pts

ornamental stone
the car salesman
continues to smile

Harvey Jenkins
(0,1,1) = 3 Pts

alone again
at a picnic table
of stone

Alice Frampton
(0,0,3) = 3 Pts

his name etched
on a black
granite wall

1bodhisattva
(0,0,3) = 3 Pts

So cold, so dark, so strong, so brave, so fragile, so final.

my mother cooking
on three-stone hearth —
sooty chicken

Lucy Nyambura
(0,1,1) = 3 Pts

I would have preferred "on a three-stone hearth" for natural rhythm; otherwise, loved it.

Lovely - I think this haiku is full of heart and soul.

spring!
in the rock garden
even the stone blooms

Magdalena Banaszkiewicz
(0,0,3) = 3 Pts

pressed into the mud
frond of an ancient palm tree
fossilized in time

Deirdre Godwin
(0,1,1) = 3 Pts

megalith tomb
boulders deeply immersed
in memory

max verhart
(1,0,0) = 3 Pts

ferocious heat —
now the orange and white
swirled in this rock

Paul O. Williams
(0,1,1) = 3 Pts

dry river
a new pebble
to my stone garden

Jacek M.
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

museum stop —
a green flint cuts
through time

Earl Keener
(0,0,3) = 3 Pts

dry creek bed . . .
priest leading the boy
down to the millstone

Bill Pauly
(0,1,1) = 3 Pts water
over rocks
unsung melody

renaye lo
(0,1,1) = 3 Pts

after his death
coral and turquoise litter
his workbench

Gene Doty
(0,0,3) = 3 Pts


Sixteenth Place – Two Points
between the washout behind
and the rock slide ahead
fresh blacktop

Garry Eaton
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts

rocks displayed
on the laboratory table —
geography lesson

James Bundi
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts

rainy afternoon...
hailstones falling
from a dark sky

Patrick Wafula
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts

that stony silence —
scar tissue
in a granite heart

Pearl
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts

late in the night —
at the mill stone
the last grain

Miorita
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts

fading gold paint
on her name carved in marble.
September day.

dsnake1
(0,1,0) = 2 Pts

polished moonstone barefoot cool

Beth Powell
(0,1,0) = 2 Pts

I really appreciate well done one-line haiku. I'm also fond of moonstones, and this captures an important aspect.

late summer...
the limestone bluff singing
with sparrows

Carol Pearce-Worthington
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts

little stone —
hold it for
feeling of exist

Reza- Iran
(0,1,0) = 2 Pts

the day of our divorce
the diamond ring
on her finger

Sjs
(0,0,2) = 2 Pts

trying the meds
down shore all of them
smooth stones

Dan Schwerin
(0,1,0) = 2 Pts


Seventeenth Place – One Point
Back and forth
The tide chafes against the rocky shore
Lamenting something...

James Sawers

hidden stones
the reflection of puffy clouds
in the puddle

anonymous

granddad's millstone
idle in my garden
full of memories

anonymous

Familiar names
carved in stones
makes me feel old

Ashi

demolished
sandstone buddhas —
intact in my mind's eye

Jyothirmai Gubili

hot afternoon —
a lizard crawling under
a rock

Harrison Mwangangi

jobless boy
collecting ballast —
dusty quarry

Abraham Muuo

under the rock
lies a dead snake —
bush fire

Solomon Kilelu

Your rock-hard heart
Aimless patterns
In the Zen garden

Mary E. Gray

embedded sea shell —
in a rock brought home
from the mountain top

Marylouise Knight

stone gray dragonfly
so weary from a long flight
rests upon a rock

dragonfly

Glass beach
she gathers shiny stones
in a pickle jar

Garry Gay

on tour:
billions of dollars
of Moon rocks

LGD

A beach
a forgotten name
engraved in a sandstone

Watpliwy


Eighteenth Place – Sorry, no points this time.
near dry creek bed
minnow's silver bellies
rubbing river rock

Terri French

Very unusual and provocative.

tombstones
etched with cornstarch
brushed with memories

Ben Gieske

Quite alone
a rock climbing a mountain-
Sisif's

Vasile Moldovan

once we prayed alone
up in the sacred mountains
they've built homes of stone

ca zer

tall sailing ship
becomes sandstone butte
in soft morning mist

Jim Applegate

stone
mother's last letter
sunlit

anonymous

"wear a good coat"
written on the wind-wheel
fixed to the headstone

Michael McClintock

extended family —
dusting a stone block for
my age mates

David Caleb Mutua

water falls
over the slanting rocks—
cool spray

Isaiah Okware

beside the rock
where I rest
a foot-worn hollow

Barbara Snow

a stray stone
hits my shin —
road repairs

Mary Kaleche

Buddha smiles
tranquility reigns
stone garden.

Trevor Camp

lizards warming
their bodies on the rocks —
hot afternoon

Onesmus Mutua Kyalo

tea table
nasturtiums cascade
hand stacked stone wall

gourdman

gate post —
of native rock
unseen purpose

terrytip

end of hike —
her pockets bulge with stones
for coloring

Agnes Eva Savich

rocks-stones-sand
lifecycle for centuries…
I love beaches

emile molhuysen

skimming stones
from crests of waves
then the plunge

Ruth Powell

starry night —
even in dark fails to hide
its precious stones

vishnu kapoor

tracing a butterfly
carved into rock —
caterpillar

Mary Davila

morning light —
masking shadows under
tide-turned stones

jim swift

the Tai Hu rock's holes
a butterfly fills one

Jennifer Corpe

in the black of night
strangled sobs waft toward heaven
as he rocks asleep

Hazel A. Witherspoon

the stony path
micro pools reflecting light
now the rains

gillena

love 60 –
pebbles on the tennis
court

anonymous

round flat stone
counting the skips to the next
plunk

Lin Geary

Beach rocks
drab coins surf-polished
to gemstones

Janice Hornburg

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