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The Shiki Monthly Kukai

February 2008 Kukai

Dear Haiku Friends,

Here are the results for the February 2008 Kukai, wherein our Kigo subject was "Early Spring" and our Free Format word or phrase was "Night Life".

Congratulations to Tom Painting, winner of our Kigo section and to Petar Tchouhov, winner of our Free Format section!


The haiku are listed in order of total points received from voters. The numbers reflect the number of voters who gave the haiku either three points, two points, or one point -- followed by the total points for all votes.

Those who were given less than three points and who requested anonymity in such a case are so noted.


In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point points were cast for this poem by the other participating poets.

(214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.

Voters comments are in italics below the respective poems.

February 2008 Results
Kigo Theme:
Early Spring
Free Format Theme:
Night Life

First Place -- 47 Points
early spring
all night the pond ice
shifts its weight

tom painting
(6,8,13) = 47

The first contractions have just begun to be felt, but the groaning and heaving, the struggle and drama of full-blown labour are yet to come. How quietly and precisely the poet has pinpointed the exact time (this night) and place (the depths of this pond) of spring's beginning.

For me, this really captures the season. Love the sounds, movement, and emotion it evokes.


Second Place -- 30 Points
early spring
green at the heart
of an onion

j cully
(2,6,12) = 30

Onions? Of course, of course.

The humble onion, though having been taken far from its home in the earth, nevertheless hears the call of Mother Nature and faithfully responds in its little "heart"! The use of the word "heart" in an unsentimental way expands the dimensions of the haiku brilliantly.


Third Place -- 24 Points
early spring
her wrinkled fingers
sort seed packets

Yositaka
(1,1,19) = 24


Fourth Place – 21 Points
early spring
the hatless
scarecrow

Lech Szeglowski
(0,3,15) = 21

Brings a smile. Even the scarecrow senses warmer weather!


Fifth Place -- 19 Points
early spring the crossing guard's smile

w. f. owen
(1,4,8) = 19

No more standing out in the dreary cold for kids keeping their heads buried in collars - both may bloom with smiles.

Such an elegant haiku - a story made out of six plain words and containing great mystery and drama. From where to where is the crossing? Who is crossing? Why? We come to see that the "crossing" in the poem is the moment at which the guard undergoes a "conversion", within himself, from winter to spring. We are led to feel the power of nature's rhythms and the responsive power of hearts. Six-word poems don't come any more power-packed than this!

early spring  —
fresh twigs line
an old nest

Melissa Spurr
(0,3,13) = 19

"ever-returning spring," concisely and concretely caught.


Sixth Place -- 15 Points
a stray dog
going my way
early spring

Bill Kenney
(1,3,6) = 15

A lovely carefree feeling to this haiku, which goes so well with the season. Full of deep simplicity.


Seventh Place -- 12 Points
the sound of water
as you move through it
early spring

Josh Wikoff
(1,2,5) = 12

I can both hear and feel this... nicely done.


Eighth Place -- 11 Points
the soil splits
above a daffodil
early spring

gourdman
(0,3,5) = 11

early spring
we try to grow
a little apart

George Hawkins
(1,3,2) = 11

A poignant haiku. The season of rejuvenation also brings its own sorrow.

early spring
the butcher
wears a daffodil

Helen Buckingham
(0,3,5) = 11

february
winter turns into spring
and back

max verhart
(1,1,6) = 11

early spring
a fresh crop of rocks
in the vegetable garden

Jim Swift
(0,2,7) = 11


Ninth Place -- 10 Points
early spring…
my heart too
is thawing

john tiong chunghoo
(1,1,5) = 10

my daughter's
first valentine
~ early Spring

Paul Hodder
(1,1,5) = 10


Tenth Place -- 9 Points
early spring
my sightless cat sniffs
a remembered path

Barbara Snow
(1,2,2) = 9

rinsing celery
from rib to heart
early spring

Joyce Clement
(0,1,7) = 9


Eleventh Place -- 8 Points
fawn's footprints
circle snowdrops
early spring

Harvey Jenkins
(0,2,4) = 8

early spring
the wind-chime and icicle
drip… in unison

Terra Martin
(0,3,2) = 8

early spring . . .
the frayed swing rope
feathered with frost

Ron Moss
(0,1,6) = 8

the weeds get a head start early spring

the weeds
get a head start
early spring

Susan Constable
(1,0,5) = 8

I prefer the one-breath format.

early spring breeze
the clothesline all in
baby shirts

Petar Tchouhov
(0,2,4) = 8

frost
cradled in the crocuses~
early spring

Kate Creighton
(0,2,4) = 8


Twelfth Place -- 7 Points
A fly
wakes suddenly?
early spring

Vasile Moldovan
(1,1,2) = 7

girl in pink
dangling from the monkey bars —
early spring

CPW
(0,0,7) = 7

I much like blossoms from bare boughs.

"dangling" gets it just right.

Very visual -- love the "pink", "dangling", "monkey" -- beautifully expressed.

early spring —
squirrels run in circles
around the stop sign

Marylouise Knight
(0,1,5) = 7

passing me
her perfume
early spring

Neil Muscott
(0,2,3) = 7

Pleasure, heightened by transience.

early spring
another handwriting
in my signature

Jerzy
(0,2,3) = 7

plum blossoms
stuck in my hair ~
early spring

Keith A. Simmonds
(0,2,3) = 7


Thirteenth Place -- 6 Points
early spring
branches breathe
with the wind

Agnes Eva Savich
(0,2,2) = 6

I find this a rather curious haiku and actually aren't entirely sure what it mean in real life. Still somehow it seems true that branches, seemingly dead in winter, begin to breathe as their leaf buds begin to swell in spring, while dead boughs, being stiffer, do not.

thwacks
from the sandlot
early spring

Alice Frampton
(0,1,4) = 6

early spring
a vase of pussy willows
on the kitchen table

Carmel Lively Westerman
(0,0,6) = 6

Rubber boots
caked with
early spring

Elaine Fields
(0,2,2) = 6

raindrops
surf the windshield
early spring

ruthanne
(0,1,4) = 6

early spring
kites in the sky
adding colors

kala ramesh
(0,2,2) = 6

early spring ~
a sudden softness
in my wooden flute

Li Ree
(0,1,4) = 6

early spring garden
in the earthen pot's bottom
a dead butterfly

Dorota Pyra
(1,1,1) = 6

early spring —
morning papers now
makeshift umbrellas

Shelley
(1,1,1) = 6

Vivid and original.


Fourteenth Place -- 5 Points
early spring  —
red noses bloom
all across campus

Laurene
(0,1,3) = 5

early spring thaw
places where the dog went
all over the yard

andrea
(0,1,3) = 5

Ok, I admit it, my first thought was of paw prints. I like it that multiple (mis)readings of this are possible.

early spring
only snow in the trees
blossoming

rob scott
(0,1,3) = 5

early spring sun?
sound of his voice
is still cold

Vanja Nikovic
(0,1,3) = 5

early spring —
the blackbird's first song
still short

Tom M.
(0,1,3) = 5

the smell of mud
from the half frozen creek
early spring

DeVar
(0,1,3) = 5


Fifteenth Place -- 4 Points
early spring —
my three year old tries
mamma's high heels

vishnu kapoor
(0,1,2) = 4

This warming sun.
And how the snow glitters
as it vanishes.

Horst Ludwig
(1,0,1) = 4

early spring
an orange bow saw
hangs in a tree

Keith Heiberg
(0,1,2) = 4

Lightning
jigsaws the dark  —
early spring

Marilyn Hazelton
(0,1,2) = 4

cruel early spring —
scattered on frozen snow
a red bird's feathers

jill
(1,0,1) = 4


Sixteenth Place -- 3 Points
crying newborn
calls early spring
into the house

Aalix Roake
(0,1,1) = 3

my grandma
wears a red geranium
early spring again

Don Basilio
(0,1,1) = 3

early spring
a sea breeze rocks
the infant's cradle

Gautam Nadkarni
(0,0,3) = 3

early spring weather
the wreath out on the mail box
sheds its needles

Edward
(0,1,1) = 3

darker ? lighter
an earthworm retreats into
early spring soil

Mark Hollingsworth
(0,1,1) = 3

fading memories
the early spring rain
washes out the snow

Elena Naskova
(0,0,3) = 3

early spring walk
a sunray
from puddle to puddle

Jacek M.
(0,0,3) = 3

early spring
there next to the snow shovels
pots of daffodils

doris kasson
(0,0,3) = 3

early spring —
another 3 inches
to shovel

LGD
(0,0,3) = 3

early spring —
my teenaged daughter's cellphone
never stops ringing

sanjuktaa
(0,1,1) = 3

stacks of firewood
marked half price
early spring

Laureen McHugh
(0,0,3) = 3

early spring —
out of the snow
snowdrops

Betty
(0,0,3) = 3

in the city park
green beer bottles
 —early spring

Piotr Mogri
(0,0,3) = 3

a chat with old friends,
early spring snow turns to rain
and then back again

j. blain
(1,0,0) = 3

early spring night
slowly thawing the moon
in silent lake

Boris Nazansky
(0,1,1) = 3

nursing home visit
outside early spring
inside dead of winter

Roberta Beary
(0,0,3) = 3

I read this one as I picked the last page off the printer and thought, "I bet that makes my final list." And so it did.


Seventeenth Place -- 2 Points
early spring —
some jacarandas bloom
before others

Israel Lopez Balan
(0,0,2) = 2

early spring
cleaning the golden typesetting
my parent's tombstone

Emile Molhuysen
(0,0,2) = 2

bright daffodils
in steamy hothouse glass
early spring

April Serock
(0,0,2) = 2

colder than Christmas
in my overcoat pocket
shred of daffodil

mechaieh
(0,1,0) = 2

early spring
they return to their back yards
barking dogs

Bill Hudson
(0,1,0) = 2

early spring
on faded heather blooms
a hint of pink

anonymous
(0,1,0) = 2

crocus maiden-white
wisp of snow's kiss
early spring

Ben Gieske
(0,1,0) = 2

early spring moonrise
the tuba player
with gusto

Francine Banwarth
(0,0,2) = 2

early spring
stretching to reach the sun
paperwhites

Judith Gorgone
(0,1,0) = 2

within
desire's labyrinth
early spring

anonymous
(0,0,2) = 2

our last hope for rain
fading with the end of March
early spring sunshine

mek
(0,1,0) = 2

parked car
dusted by early spring
the neighbor's plum

Deborah P Kolodji
(0,0,2) = 2

early spring
the ghost owl's call
answered through the mist

Beth Powell
(0,1,0) = 2

early spring?
the groundhog sees
no shadow

anonymous
(0,0,2) = 2

early spring —
a cross country ski track
now a gentle walk

anonymous
(0,1,0) = 2

early spring
our new baby
smiles

Lynne R.
(0,0,2) = 2

early spring ~
New patch to
my trouser

Reza-Iran
(0,1,0) = 2

a robin hunkers
in the sudden snowfall
early spring

Catherine J.S. Lee
(0,0,2) = 2

early spring —
freed of ice, the brook
regains its sound

Zhanna P. Rader
(0,0,2) = 2

early spring
a bathing swallow
splashes the sky

RaV
(0,0,) = 2


Eighteenth Place -- 1 Point
eight ravens new nests
contradicting the hedgehog
 —early spring

bre:^)

bouncing
from the duvet
early spring light

anonymous

a bud of grass
bows by the chapel door
early spring

anonymous

trees in bloom outside her window,
she marvels at her budding breasts —
early spring

Leslie Montgomery

early spring
frost flowers spreading
up the window

Earl Keener

a Daffodil nods
at strapped Clogs
in early Spring

Rebba

early spring-
the firm smooth skin
of a cherry tomato

anonymous

early spring
wakening days
shed light on cobwebs

Frances McCarthy

she sweeps the kitchen
wheelchair trails garden mud
early spring

assu

snowdrops
gliding downhill-
early spring

Dejan Pavlinovic

early spring
billowing white clouds -
crabapples bloom

Tanya Dikova

As in heaven, so on earth.

Morning walk,
deer tracks in the snow.
Early spring

Trevor Camp

early spring —
the booming call
of a bullfrog

anonymous

early spring morning —
what the sun and mist are up to
I do not know

Jon Baldwin

early spring
she wears again the tulle dress
from the night they met

anonymous

no morning frost
on the windshield
early spring

Meredith Stern Cavalieri

early spring —
the first voices
of peepers

peter

sparkling river
in early spring - liquid sunshine

anonymous

half-open bud
the spreading yellow
of early spring dawn

Jennifer Corpe

the magpie's nest
visible in the oak tree
early spring

Marian Burke


Nineteenth Place -- 0 Points
shamelessly March's
yellow dandelions
unhinge early spring

Ed Higgins

early spring
all the stars fade
in and out

Bruce Ross

clear day after rains
children bounce on pogo sticks
early spring

Bridget Cougar

pink poui blossoms
first week of February
early spring

gillena

our volcano
skirted by mists —
early spring style

Jan O'Loughlin

early spring;
wind plays tune on icicle
leaves of birch tree

anonymous

Snow on Candlemas eve,
February 2nd
Brings early spring

Ashi

sorbet slush
shovel scrapes on sidewalk
early spring

Steve Rojcewicz

no crocuses yet
and barely any snowdrops
early spring is late

Deirdre Godwin

Sun's light lasts longer
Hint amidst crunch of snow that
Early spring comes soon

Philip Mizener

Early spring snow falls
Cascading beauty whispers -
he moves close to me.

athorneburg

unable to sleep
with carousing spring peepers —
early spring night

P. O. Williams

curtains drawn —
a robin sings
of an early spring

Mike Montreuil

Seeing ghosts of geese
The Early Spring Squadron's
V for Victory

Jon Vassbotn

early spring
old leaves' shivering
accompanies new songs

Marlène

bird early spring —
every day to come
singing

Jacek K

bright early spring days
then winter returns: cold rains
polish our suntans

Sandra Friedlander

muddy boots
and anticipation:
early spring

Ruth Powell

Poinsettia drops leaves
out there beneath this snow
bulbs wait for early spring

Jeanne Jorgensen

treetops moving
in every direction —
early spring

Ami

early spring —
a snowdrop appears
from the putrid leaves

miorita

a tawny owl calls
from the snowdrop woods —
early spring

Sara Winteridge

performance review —
but I see
the first jacaranda

D.M.

early spring?
dog piles blossom
on snowbanks

anonymous

early spring —
awakening to the chirps
of a nestling

anonymous

early spring —
pulling the new curtain
a guest on my window

maria

early spring
coffee blossoms look of
snow on the mountainside

shanna


General Comments:
So many great haiku to choose from!

A refreshingly large number of entries managed to avoid the clichés so easily associated with this kigo.

I just wish i had more than 6 pts to give...there are so many good ones, it's difficult to make up one's mind.

The submissions this month show why I dislike generic kigo like 'early spring' -- too many poets used an early spring kigo along with the kukai phrase. That's a technical violation called a 'double kigo.' It would be much better to let us suggest the phrase by using early spring kigo. That's how the Free Format kukai worked, and it worked well.




First Place -- 27 Points
full moon
the call girl calls me
angel

Petar Tchouhov
(4,4,7) = 24

This one is well-nigh inexhaustible in its implications.


Second Place -- 24 Points
nightlife…
removing
his wedding ring

Carol Pearce-Worthington
(1,5,11) = 24

True to the mark in that wincing way.


Third Place -- 23 Points
nightlife district
a star falls
unnoticed

Elena Naskova
(1,7,6) = 23

Uncluttered and yet for me the most resonant on several levels in this kukai.


Fourth Place -- 20 Points
sleepless —
headlights drive shadows
across the ceiling

Jon Baldwin
(0,6,8) = 20

I'm sure this is something most of us have experienced. Like the use of 'drive' here.

3am feeding —
a light in the bar
across the street

Alice Frampton
(1,7,3) = 20

Of the feeding-the-baby entries (and there were a lot), this is the one that successfully integrates the nightlife theme.

A great contrast, well-observed, and concisely stated.

I liked the wistful comparison between adult drinking and nursing the baby.


Fifth Place – 19 Points
grey city morning ~
the pole dancer's
sensible shoes

Paul Hodder
(1,5,6) = 19

from jazz to blues
the bottle and I
half drunk

Francine Banwarth
(2,1,11) = 19

A clever play on words.


Sixth Place -- 16 Points
night life
the abrupt stop
of a cricket's song

kala ramesh
(2,2,6) = 16


Seventh Place -- 14 Points
phone number on a napkin
left at the bar -
closing time

David Grayson
(1,1,9) = 14

Hope springs eternal in the empty glass.


Eighth Place -- 13 Points
retirement party
all the guests gone
by midnight

Susan Constable
(1,2,6) = 13

Of course, back when I was much too young to think of retirement, "gone" was a word of many meanings.


Ninth Place -- 12 Points
empty night club —
a dance of daddy long legs
on the ceiling

Jacek M.
(1,3,3) = 12

Interesting - a waltz perhaps. Beautiful contrast -- the empty night club and the dance of the insects!

city dusk
the rhythm of cicadas
and high heels

j. blain
(0,4,4) = 12

The similarity of sounds combined with the differences in source make this interesting.


Tenth Place -- 11 Points
lonely night —
she still smiles
on the billboard

Israel Lopez Balan
(0,1,9) = 11

walking home
dancing shoes in her hand —
dawn approaches

bre:^)
(0,2,7) = 11

I can see the shoes dangling, swinging... the last little bit of dance.

stand-up
the laugh
      that. . .
           doesn't . . .
                    come . . .

Bill Kenney
(1,1,6) = 11

Nice form that conveys even more meaning.

truckstop
her late shift ends
under neon

tom painting
(1,0,8) = 11

trembling flashlight
a final heave and our herd
has one more heifer

andrea
(1,2,4) = 11

Unusual with the flashlight establishing that this is part of nightlife.

Wordier, maybe, than I would usually go for, but the image and feel won me over.

I like the emotion indicated by 'trembling'.


Eleventh Place -- 10 Points
nightlife —
red neon and drizzle
on the slick street

Carol Raisfeld
(0,3,4) = 10

A vivid picture with the modifier 'slick' hinting that city nightlife may be more dangerous.


Twelfth Place -- 9 Points
nightlife —
the pillow can't talk
and I don't

Emile Molhuysen
(1,1,4) = 9

dark moonless sky —
alone with her memory
widower's night-life

vishnu kapoor
(1,1,4) = 9

Siliconed stripper,
Why will you not accept my
Counterfeit money?

Conrad Sienkiewicz
(2,1,1) = 9

moist dusk pink neon flickers OPEN

Josh Wikoff
(1,1,4) = 9

I like the phrase 'moist dusk'.

loud blasts
from an espresso machine
the slam poet

Deborah P Kolodji
(1,2,2) = 9


Thirteenth Place -- 8 Points
the bar closing
a businessman alone
with his briefcase

Neil Muscott
(0,3,2) = 8

stormy night —
I turn the last page
of my old diary

Vanja Nikovic
(1,1,3) = 8


Fourteenth Place -- 7 Points
last call
the neon beer signs
flicker off

JM Thompson
(0,0,7) = 7


Fifteenth Place -- 6 Points
At midnight
not one sound…
only an owl

Vasile Moldovan
(1,1,1) = 6

cornfield mice
dancing with the moon
fox-trot

Ben Gieske
(0,2,2) = 6

night alley
on a discarded canvas
a ballerina twirls

john tiong chunghoo
(0,2,2) = 6


Sixteenth Place -- 5 Points
full moon
the rock concert
fills my chest

Agnes Eva Savich
(0,0,5) = 5

late night snack
she hides the
candy wrappers

Carmel Lively Westerman
(0,0,5) = 5

we stop our bikes
on the crest of the dark hill
Orion's sword

assu
(0,1,3) = 5

coming home —
in the deep black sky
one star

Marylouise Knight
(0,1,3) = 5

solo concert
in the opera house-
stray nightingale

Dejan Pavlinovic
(1,0,2) = 5

two old dancers
recapture lost dreams ~
night life

Keith A Simmonds
(0,1,3) = 5

I appreciated the simultaneous marking of presence and absence.

neon stars . . .
a street walker's stilettos
in a lonely salsa

Ron Moss
(1,0,2) = 5

Plop ~
Another frog
In deep night

Reza-Iran
(0,1,3) = 5


Seventeenth Place -- 4 Points
a barfly —
in tight black spandex
rubbing reddened eyes

Ed Higgins
(0,1,2) = 4

midnight train
calls to the black river
fog between them

April Serock
(0,1,2) = 4

I love the damp darkness of this one.

barfly…
the playing
of the rain

Helen Buckingham
(1,0,1) = 4

street light
the same homeless man
follows my husband

Audrey Downey
(0,0,4) = 4

birds sleep on branches
while the feeder is emptied
by a deer

gourdman
(0,1,2) = 4

stirring shadows
play hide and seek
with the moon

Rebba
(0,1,2) = 4

lullabying
wakeful child
nightlife

Frances McCarthy
(1,0,1) = 4

Dark moths
flicker against neon
beautiful fools

Yositaka
(0,1,2) = 4

under spring's full moon
nocturnal eldritch creatures
bid me join their dance

Deirdre Godwin
(1,0,1) = 4

cold moon
through a tear in the shade
night life

Raffael de Gruttola
(0,2,0) = 4

nursing and sleeping
waking to nurse again-
quite the "night life"

Leslie Montgomery
(0,1,2) = 4

the weaverbird
returns to its nest —
nightfall

Christopher Kavita
(0,2,0) = 4

wolf pack howls
inside my snow cave
I shiver

Ruth Powell
(0,1,2) = 4

night club
through the cigarette fumes
smooth jazz

Dorota Pyra
(0,0,4) = 4

nightlife:
air raid sirens,
close and distant

Earl Keener
(0,1,2) = 4


Eighteenth Place -- 3 Points
itch…
mosquitoes' nightlife
on my skin

Tanya Dikova
(0,1,1) = 3

fevered dreams —
the clock beside the pirate
shows 1:15am

Laurene
(0,0,3) = 3

I adore line 2.

Swing Dancers Twirling
To Joyous sounds of the band
defy winter night

Philip Mizener
(0,1,1) = 3

street restaurant —
shrieks of laughter spill
into the night

Isabelle Prondzynski
(0,1,1) = 3

dimly lit
the rise and fall of sheets —
Intensive Care

Sara Winteridge
(0,1,1) = 3

blues club fever~
she undoes one more button
as he chews ice cubes

Kate Creighton
(0,0,3) = 3

day's end —
mom and dad
snuggle on the loveseat

Mary Davila
(0,1,1) = 3

laughter —
the bar dog goes outside
with a smoker

Ami
(0,1,1) = 3

strains of jazz
between
slices of gold moon

Devika
(0,0,3) = 3

mating ritual…
moths flock to the neon sign
flashing nightclub

Nancy Smith
(0,0,3) = 3


Nineteenth Place -- 2 Points
evening zocolo
the vendor's balloons
up and down

Bruce Ross
(0,0,2) = 2

slow moving lights
combines work the night
grain falls into dark hoppers

Harvey Jenkins
(0,1,0) = 2

neighbors party:
i slide deeper under
my eiderdown

miriam chaikin
(0,0,2) = 2

lonely night —
let me be your
teddy bear

Norsto
(0,1,0) = 2

with a cigarette smoke
with jazz under fingers
i see the moon

Piotr Mogri
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dead of the night
in the widow's garden
cats on heat

max verhart
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now and then
outside my bedroom window…
a tiny clink

Barbara Snow
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celebrating
the New Year all night —
Russian party!

Zhanna P. Rader
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take five —
past the open door the smokers'
red hot glow

anonymous
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funky beat
the echo of the bass line
in my chest

RaV
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Twentieth Place -- 1 Point
night life —
an owl on a spree
catching rats

Gautam Nadkarni

Odd smell
leaving the bar late …
fresh air

Horst Ludwig

county line roadhouse
the noisy bull frogs drown out
her backseat moans

Edward

Cautious fox
raids the
hen house

Elaine Fields

new moon
the night life
much more ominous

Bill Hudson

cat walk
the lure of her
leopard skin shoes

Judith Gorgone

night out —
looking for familiar faces
in a foreign town

majka

winter ceilidh
the Irish fiddlers drink
Jamaican rum

Beth Powell

shooting star
passing across the dark sky —
what a surprise

Peter Wambua

croaking of frogs
coming from our garden —
dark night

Pius Mwangangi

night life
fantasies
in tendrils of steam

shanna

neon lit pavement
click on stiletto heels
on hard concrete

dsnake1

croaking of a frog
next to my bedroom window —
full moon

Vera Ndehoya

the mosquito
bites my leg —
night life

Jackson King'oo

night life
the beckoning swish
of a cats tail

paula fisher

home-town
the chemical works' lights
as pretty as the stars

Lynne Rees

the sweet scent
of flowers from the garden —
night breeze

Ogonji Zacheus

restaurant's sizzle
melting an ice cube
in the mouth

Jerzy

invisible crickets
compete in song —
nightfall

Titus

quietly smoking
in midsummer darkness
deserted ashtray

Marlène Buitelaar

jazz notes spiral
in the sweltering dark
rainbow neon

Catherine J.S. Lee

the baby's bottle
at three in the morning
oh the nightlife

DeVar


Twenty-first Place -- 0 Points
In front of the mirror
wearing the too tight dress
remembering

anonymous

a drunken woman
talks nineteen to the dozen
such is nightlife

Don Basilio

the MC's voice —
searing through the music
calypso tent

gillena

sleepless night…
alone with the stars and
ten thousand cicadas

sanjuktaa

milk-sticky fingers
changing diapers
blind

ruthanne

in lights cloud nine
underneath two pigeons
pressed together

Terra Martin

what a grind
they sigh
girls night out

doris kasson

lover's impulse
sequins and snow mingle —
paris cabaret

anonymous

In bright arclights
eyes yearn to see again
the inky darkness

Geethanjali Rajan

Clear sky is nightlife for frosty stars.

Ashi

katydid —
our whispers too
above the din

George Hawkins

somewhere in the dark
apparently for love
cats' urgent yowling

P. O. Williams

the off-key busker
paid in subway tokens
cool breeze

Keith Heiberg

guitar riff draws in
passersby
moths to the blues

Laureen McHugh

a notturno from her cello…
the only way I can see
fireflies

Li Ree

walking to work —
only the moon on sky
accompany him

miorita

careful of her high heels
she steps into the bus —
hot date

Mike Montreuil

croaking of frogs
in the dam —
silent night

Naomi Nyambura

seriously
reading a storybook —
night life

Mutua Kyalo

the moon and stars
shining brightly in the sky —
cool night breeze

Peter Nguribu

mewing sounds
from the back alley
nightlife!

Betty

night life —
a snow plow and a shovel
dipping

Tish Davis

howling for his
feline love to come play
back-alley night life

anonymous

not wanted
on yet another Inn
expanding my search

Jon Espen Vassbotn

plans for a freeway
through quaint clubs and coffee shops
everything moves north

Jeanne Jorgensen

night life —
i move the chairs to lay down
my mattress

Caleb Wothes

a night wedding
passing in my dream —
the alarm clock sounds

Mary Wambui

mosquitoes biting
every part of my body —
a long night in a refugee camp

Jedidah Nduku

half-smile
of the moon in the twilight —
the bat's cry

Patrick Wafula

torn shadows
in the lights of street lamp the
night life

Jacek K.

arts under the stars —
a singer-songwriter yawns
while poets read

anonymous

studying
beside the tin lamp —
night time

James Njoka

my legs shake with fear —
the laughter of hyenas
in the darkness

Anne Wairimu

scent of fried fish
from our neighbor's house —
supper time

Onesmus Kyalo

under kiosks —
street boys spend the
night sleeping

Gladys Kathini

the watchman
reporting for duty —
night time

Sebastian

darkness —
the city's twinkling lights
and night music

Emily Wanga

An owl calls,
someone is awake.
We don't sleep.

Trevor Camp

night life noises —
the quiet after the swoop
of a snowy owl

Jim Swift

waiting up
for my wife --
Valentine's half moon

anonymous

twilight at the pond first one then another then many spring peepers

anonymous

light Strip —
evening the pocket
I recall my back number

Lech Szeglowski

too much tequila
unaware
I drink the worm

Meredith Stern Cavalieri


General Comments:
My unabridged dictionary gives only one definition for nightlife: "Social activities or entertainment available or pursued in the evening." It's too bad that so many of this month's entries evaded the challenge of this theme, retreating instead to the safer, more familiar territories of nature and domesticity. (Full disclosure: I'm a city boy.)


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