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The Shiki Monthly Kukai

April 2009 Kukai

Dear Haiku Friends,

Here are the results for the April 2009 Kukai, wherein our Kigo subject was "April Fools" and our Free Format subject was "Fence/Wall".

Congratulations to Carol Raisfeld, winner of our Kigo section and to Francine Banwarth, winner of our Free Format section!


The haiku are listed in order of total points received from voters. The numbers reflect the number of voters who gave the haiku either three points, two points, or one point -- followed by the total points for all votes.

Those who were given less than three points and who requested anonymity in such a case are so noted.


In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point points were cast for this poem by the other participating poets.

(214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.

Voters comments are in italics below the respective poems.

April 2009 Results
Kigo Theme:
April Fools
Free Format Theme:
Fence/Wall

First Place – Twenty-seven Points
April Fools
sending the kids to buy
elbow grease

Carol Raisfeld
(1,6,12) = 27 pts

Of all the practical-joke haiku, this one best tickled my own funny bone.


Second Place – Twenty-five Points
april fools
the sting of a prank
decades old

Roberta Beary
(3,5,6) = 25 pts


Third Place – Twenty-four Points
April Fools
the lake ice
still looks safe

Edward
(2,4,10) = 24 pts


Fourth Place – Seventeen Points
April Fools
teenagers twitter
under the cherry tree

Harvey Jenkins
(0,3,11) = 17 pts

Love the way modern life sneaks in here with a pun.


Fifth Place – Fourteen Points
sonny’s tomcat
gives birth to kittens
April fools

Gautam Nadkarni
(1,4,3) = 14 pts


Sixth Place – Thirteen Points
April Fools
caught by the forsythia
my new umbrella

j blain
(1,2,6) = 13 pts


Seventh Place – Twelve Points
April Fools
storm clouds blackening the sky
drop only their scent

Tom Genovese
(2,2,2) = 12 pts

april fools in our squabble the skylark passed by

sheila windsor
(1,3,3) = 12 pts


Eighth Place – Eleven Points
April Fools —
I peek at my
retirement portfolio

Paul David Mena
(0,2,7) = 11 pts

the crow's flight
a little sideways
April Fool

Joyce Clement
(1,1,6) = 11 pts

The crow as jester is perfect here!

April Fools . . .
my best umbrella
full of holes

Bill Pauly
(0,5,1) = 11 pts

a sudden kiss
as we walk in the rain
April Fools

ARW
(0,4,3) = 11 pts


Ninth Place – Ten Points
April fools day
the baby learns
lemon juice

Jon Baldwin
(1,3,1) = 10 pts

may I help you?
an April fool answers
the store’s parrot

Susan Constable
(0,3,4) = 10 pts

vibrating the spider's web
a leaf stem-
April Fools

Leslie Montgomery
(0,2,6) = 10 pts


Tenth Place – Nine Points
april fool
a cuckoo smuggles in
the summer

_kala
(0,2,5) = 9 pts

April Fools morning
a patient in the mirror
practices a smile

Dorota Pyra
(0,1,7) = 9 pts


Eleventh Place – Eight Points
falling
for the pick-up line
an april fool

tom painting
(0,3,2) = 8 pts

April Fools,
a whispered promise
to leave his wife

Laurene Post
(0,2,4) = 8 pts


Twelfth Place – Seven Points
April Fools —
a foot of snow
on the parked cars

Patrick M. Pilarski
(0,2,3) = 7 pts

robin's song
an April Fool awakens
with a smile

Audrey Downey
(0,2,3) = 7 pts

April fool
the lilacs covered
with frost

Earl Keener
(0,2,3) = 7 pts

April Fools —
opening day fish stories
bigger and bigger

Catherine J.S. Lee
(0,2,3) = 7 pts

April Fool's Day
an urchin in the playground
calls me father

Jacek M.
(0,1,5) = 7 pts


Thirteenth Place – Six Points
the cobra moth
folds its wings
April Fools!

Garry Eaton
(1,1,1) = 6 pts

dazzling sunshine
in cherry bloom showers
April fools

Keith A. Simmonds
(0,3,0) = 6 pts

April Fools,
he asks again
"will you marry me?"

Bre
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

April Fool’s gale...
cherry-petal pink whitecaps
on the Potomac

Janice Hornburg
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

New spring
same old truth
I'm still the April Fool

Tina
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

april fools
the dog
growls at me

polona
(0,1,4) = 6 pts

clear sky
we set out without raincoats
April Fools

Elaine Riddell
(0,1,4) = 6 pts


Fourteenth Place – Five Points
April fool —
my friend borrows money
never to return

~ Lilian Otieno
(1,0,2) = 5 pts

April Fools
the computer worm
that wasn't

Bruce Ross
(0,2,1) = 5 pts

April Fools —
the coroner's corpse
snickering

aom (tim)
(0,2,1) = 5 pts

Silk flowers
in daffodil leaves
April Fools

gourdman
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

frost
on two lips…
April Fool’s

A. Bodhi
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

April Fools
the hare
trying to recolour

Hermione
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

April Fools . . .
his shadow
makes its move

Francine Banwarth
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

April Fool's
Canada Geese on the lawn
with a decoy

andrea
(0,1,3) = 5 pts


Fifteenth Place – Four Points
April Fools —
bat making a blind date
to a mole

Virginia Popescu
(1,0,1) = 4 pts

first to sign for
tango lessons
such old April Fools

Barbara Snow
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

April Fools Day
she tells him she thinks
she's pregnant

Carmel Lively Westerman
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

breakfast
outside with the robins
April Fools

Beth Powell
(0,1,2) = 4 pts


Sixteenth Place – Three Points
being dated
by another man...
April fool

Patrick Wafula
(1,0,0) = 3 pts

leader has
fulfilled his assurance —
april fool

Sunil Uniyal
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

April's first gust
swirls white —
the blown plum shakes

Don Holt
(1,0,0) = 3 pts

told that Jesus
had arrived at Mount Kenya —
April fool

~ Nelius Wangari
(1,0,0) = 3 pts

snowflakes
dot the shovel’s dust
April Fools

Ann Schwader
(1,0,0) = 3 pts

April Fool’s Day
he proposes
marriage

Carolyn Coit Dancy
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

April fool —
a fake invitation
for lunch

~ Peter Nguribu
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

the fifteenth
post office, long lines
of April fools

Frederick Gier
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

April fools
an empty whiskey bottle
under her bed

Elena Naskova
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

laughing old monk
re-enlightened
as aprils fool

Jon Espen Vassbotn
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

April Fools
my grandma was too heavy
for the trampoline

selwyn
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

local zoo —
Mr. Lion receives calls
from April Fools

Origa
(0,0,3) = 3 pts


Seventeenth Place – Two Points
Today, sure,
my new year starts, too, —
April fool.

Horst Ludwig
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

early tulip
mantled by late snow
April Fools

if
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

April Fools must cry;
Life's a tragi-comedy...
April Fools can't laugh.

Tanja
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

Loki shapeshifting
Moods from dark scowl to laughter
April’s foolish pranks

Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

April Fools —
a robin confronts
the frozen lawn

John Soules
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

a red paper squid
on the back of his gray suit
April Fool's Day

anonymous
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

April Fools'
my granddaughter arrives
a day earlier

Ella Wagemakers
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

April
Warm days comes early
Fools no one

James Sawers
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

April Fools
a darkened marquee
wrong tickets

James M. Thompson
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

April snow
the weather person
plays the fool

anonymous
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

April Fools —
lonely rain cloud
over picnickers

Dejan Pavlinovic
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

butter
in the ice cream carton
april fools!

Don Baird
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

still cold
amongst the daffodils
April Fools

Terry O'Connor
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

a blue crocus
pokes up through the spring snow—
April fool!

Paul O. Williams
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

April fool
her tears dry up
in the spring sun

Tore Sverredal
(0,0,2) = 2 pts


Eighteenth Place – One Point
he thinks it's a prank
when she tells him she's pregnant
April fools day

Bill Hudson

april fools
watching snow melt
early birds without worms

Linda Pilarski

April fools
the crocuses fondling
the snow

Kate Creighton

an e-mailed joke —
first reason for laughter
April fools day

gillena

yellow daffodil
rooted in snow
April Fools

April Serock

April Fools Day
concocting salty coffee
for Dad

Stella

April Fools
weevil resistant
spaghetti trees

André Surridge

In the realm of clouds
scent of april fools linger
sky is the limit

Erling Larson

April Fools
we pack up our U-haul
and drive

Ruth Powell

blooming red bud
fiery flames in pools below
April Fools

Ben Gieske

early morning
birds chirping outside
April Fools

natalia kuznetsova

The prankster
dead . . .
no April Fool.

Alexis Rotella

I wonder . . .
what is George Bush doing
this April Fool's Day

Christopher Herold

April Fools
the hunter stops
in the rabbit trail…

meow

yesterday a robin
now footprints etched in snow
oh, how April fools

gerry

what a fool —
my mother sweating from
a race that never was

~ Catherine Njeri Maina

bright April fools
the callow beans bloom red
between late frosts

Frances McCarthy

Childhood
punchline:
April Fool!

Gene Doty

april fools
grasshoppers are playing
on the crossroads

Krzysztof PL

three phone calls
three politicians —
April Fools

Marylouise Knight

april fools day
the sparkle of a purple crocus
turning white

anonymous

special mass
April Fool's Day
singing Christmas Carols

Barbara Campitelli


Nineteenth Place – Sorry, no points this time.
G20 summit —
celebrating April Fools
a day later

Nelson

late frost
covers the bearded iris
winter says: "April Fools!"

Terri French

April Fools
flight to mars sans
booking fees

Terra Martin

April fools —
tearing the comeback note
from my ex-girlfriend

Nana Fredua-Agyeman

April Fools
Laughing at children
In search of nothing

Max Zontini

A quiet family dinner.
Salt and sugar swap over
on April Fools’!

Daniela Bullas

clouds of petals
above dozing April fools?
toilet-paper bows!

mechaieh

he decides
to read the lips well...
last year's April Fool

Rita Odeh

on a dry branch
two ring-doves in love-
April fools

Vasile Moldovan

a false magician
collects cash from viewers —
April fools

Hussein Haji

April Fools
sitting on the couch
and whoopie cushion

Susan Sanchez-Barnett

Quacking ducks
making spring an April fool
swim throughout the night

purush

April Fool's
the first robin is greeted —
by a snowstorm!

manoj saranathan

April fools day —
only birds of passage know
this new snow is a joke

Li Ree

Late April,
the weather is warm —
April Fool.

Trevor Camp

oh no, snow!
on the peach blossoms
April fool from nature

Rose Marie Stutts

April Fools —
Cinderella’s shoe
as large as a little Chinese

Dan Norea

How are we?
Fine thanks, and how are we?
April Fools Day

Peter Macrow

being told
I had won a scholarship —
April fool

~ Jefferson Ambooka

April Fools —
a frightened old woman
turns back from her way

Ioan Marinescu-Puiu

April Fool’s Day joke
yet another day of snow
in this long winter

Deirdre Godwin

new calendar changes
april fish to new year's goats.
fish fools still party!

dragonfly

fools' party —
soda bottles in crates
full of water

~ Khadijah Rajab

April Fools
the too early daffodils
under snow

Jeff Hanson

pool splash
when he's tossed in
April Fools

Deborah P Kolodji

april fools —
snow-on-ice-on-pond
melts for the Canadas

jill

April Fools —
riding cardboard boxes
winters white rabbit

Mary Chapman

april fools
flowering with
ice covered petals

eric


Participants’ General Comments:

How few were those who read or followed the instructions about the subject line.

After reading all of these, I concluded that having a term like "april fool" for a kigo doesn't work very well.

Some of the submissions lack the full kigo (#37, 90,92) or don’t use it as required (#22).

The kigo seems to have baffled our poets. So many variations (and not so varied as all that) on a few themes. I'm not excluding myself from this judgment, but I decided not to submit in this category.

As it turned out the poem I submitted was turned in with slight variations by 8 of us. Ooops. Cliche, cliche.

Very entertaining!



First Place – Twenty-six Points
garden wall —
enough moon
to go around

Francine Banwarth
(2,5,10) = 26 pts

Elegant in its simplicity!


Second Place – Twenty Points
picket fence
she repaints his dream
each spring

Terra Martin
(2,4,6) = 20 pts


Third Place – Eighteen Points
between the fog
and the fence
daffodils

Kate Creighton
(1,3,9) = 18 pts

The problem with perfection in haiku is that it's very hard to talk about. But the consonance here is beautifully controlled, and the splash of bright color introduced by the daffodils brings the poem to a refreshing and satisfying finish.

I like the simplicity of this one; also that, for me at least, it illustrates a feeling of finding a bit of gladness between anxiety and limitation. Wish there was a good way to format it pictographically; it would sort of break up the one-sentence effect: between fog and fence daffodils


Fourth Place – Seventeen Points
rickety fence
held together
by jasmine

Andre Surridge
(0,6,5) = 17 pts


Fifth Place – Sixteen Points
checkpoint ...
fireflies, back and forth
through the fence

Carol Raisfeld
(1,2,9) = 16 pts


Sixth Place – Fourteen Points
No fence —
Just an open
gate

helge t.
(1,3,5) = 14 pts

This says so much in so few words. It's the one that makes me stop and think, and stop and think again.

stone wall
the glimmer of snail trail
crossing over

polona
(1,3,5) = 14 pts

Origami-
the shadow of a butterfly
flickering on the wall

Vasile Moldovan
(1,3,5) = 14 pts

I find the uncertain relationship between the two parts of this intriguing. The poem does not leave me satisfied, but, in this case, that's not a bad thing.

dark horizon...
a sea eagle climbing
a wall of wind

Li Ree
(0,5,4) = 14 pts


Seventh Place – Thirteen Points
graveyard wall —
on the street side
cherry blossoms

Gautam Nadkarni
(0,3,7) = 13 pts


Eighth Place – Twelve Points
monastery wall
a monk strolls
the quiet side

tom painting
(0,3,6) = 12 pts

Simple and effective.

moonlit prison
the clematis quietly climbs
over the wall

Tore Sverredal
(0,3,6) = 12 pts


Ninth Place – Eleven Points
old fence
apricot blossoms fall
on both sides

Ella Wagemakers
(1,2,4) = 11 pts

Simple, effective and a nice twist on “the grass is always greener on the other side.”

a row of sparrows
white-washing
the picket fence

Terri French
(1,2,4) = 11 pts

Interesting though perhaps a little…ah, earth (which certainly never stopped the Japanese masters.

border town
a tumbleweed escapes
over a rusty fence

Garry Eaton
(0,4,3) = 11 pts

a neighborhood
of high fences —
the scent of lilac

Bill Kenney
(0,2,7) = 11 pts


Tenth Place – Ten Points
across the grass
and up the wall
a swallow's shadow

Paul Hodder
(0,3,4) = 10 pts

seawall
thoughts drifting
along

Roberta Beary
(0,1,8) = 10 pts

An effective juxtaposition.


Eleventh Place – Nine Points
new neighbor
he adds another row
to the wall

Ben Gieske
(1,2,2) = 9 pts

memorial wall
echoes of soldiers
dying

Don Baird
(1,2,2) = 9 pts

Poignant and thought-provoking.


Twelfth Place – Eight Points
neighborhood gossip
another patch of couch grass
creeps under the fence

Susan Constable
(0,3,2) = 8 pts

spring moss —
a hole in the wall
between us

Nelson
(0,2,4) = 8 pts

old stone fence
deep in the woods —
a trace of snow

Joyce Clement
(0,2,4) = 8 pts

dry-stone walls...
the signature of ancestors
across the valley

Dejan Pavlinovic
(0,1,6) = 8 pts

The use of 'signature' and the link between L1&3 make this special.


Thirteenth Place – Seven Points
barbed wire fence
the cows have all summer
to find its weakness

Harvey Jenkins
(0,2,3) = 7 pts

library wall ... I leave a pseudonym

Helen Buckingham
(0,0,7) = 7 pts


Fourteenth Place – Six Points
chain link fence —
a hog nose snake
weaving himself in

Barbara Campitelli
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

April morning —
dew hangs on the
barbed wire fence

~ Malombe Johnson
(0,1,4) = 6 pts

coming home
a row of schoolboys
on the orchard wall

Terry O'Connor
(0,1,4) = 6 pts


Fifteenth Place – Five Points
anniversary —
flowers
for the sea wall

aom (tim)
(1,0,2) = 5 pts

morning glories
flying off the fence —
two butterflies!

Tomislav
(1,0,2) = 5 pts

I think the kire would work better, placed after glories in Line 1

roofless house —
walls between the tree
and its apples

Gosia Zamorska
(0,2,1) = 5 pts

longer, the rains
shorter
the fence

Barbara Snow
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

spring cleaning
he throws his voice
over the fence

Mary Davila
(0,1,3) = 5 pts


Sixteenth Place – Four Points
beyond the fence
ranks of gravestones
dad among them

if
(0,2,0) = 4 pts

link by link
the snow peas climb the fence
headed for the sun

jeff hanson
(0,2,0) = 4 pts

cooky-baking
the wall between us
crumbles

Ellen Compton
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

old battlefield...
rooted in the crumbling wall
a bleeding heart

Janice Hornburg
(0,0,4) = 4 pts

grandma's last photo
strings hold the hollyhocks
against the fence

Carmel Lively Westerman
(0,0,4) = 4 pts

prisoners
from morning till evening —
the school fence

~ Lucy Nyambura
(0,0,4) = 4 pts

Effective in the way it mirrors how some kids feel. I was (and had) one.

wind gust —
the rusty fence hooks
a white shirt

Caleb David Mutua
(0,0,4) = 4 pts

lowing calf
the moon is caught
in the barbed wire fence

Earl Keener
(0,0,4) = 4 pts


Seventeenth Place – Three Points
behind the fence…
the two sways settle down
separated

Rita Odeh
(1,0,0) = 3 pts

posts with barbed wire
now and then
still above the snow

Horst Ludwig
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

moonlit night...
illicit lovers sharing a kiss
over the fence

Patrick Wafula
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

a drip of coffee
blurring the silky napkin
cat - behind the fence

oana posnaies
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

Graveyard —
high wall separating
the quick from the dead

Virginia Popescu
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

new neighbors
a straight line of foliage
where the fence was

j blain
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

lizards sheltering
under the block wall —
hot afternoon

~ Abraham Muuo
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

hot afternoon —
a green lizard peeps through
cracks on a rusty wall

~ Otinga
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

realtor’s office
with the image of a door
painted on the wall

ARW
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

open sky
the sun climbs
over the privacy fence

Beth Powell
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

knotted rope
behind the sea wall
memories of winter

Patrick M. Pilarski
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

split-rail fence —
a billy goat and
the greener grass

Carolyn Coit Dancy
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

pile of bricks
in the shadows
Berlin Wall

Susan Sanchez-Barnett
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

more stones
to add to the pasture wall
spring thaw

Catherine J.S. Lee
(0,0,3) = 3 pts


Eighteenth Place – Two Points
across the wall —
the yellow center of
a white plumeria

gillena
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

under the faded fence
earthworms tunnel
noses to coffee grounds

mechaieh
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

spring cleaning
the separating wall
taller than ever

Elena Naskova
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

feet wet with dew
she climbs back over
her father's fence

Ruth Powell
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

a blind wall
between you and me
no opening

natalia kuznetsova
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

wisteria
covering the fence
a waterfall of purple

Rose Marie Stutts
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

the neighbors
good fences make
fresh paint

Ann K. Schwader
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

confederate jasmine
climbs up
the yankee's wall

Judi Honiker
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

shadow-dancing
gladness on a building wall
— the leafy tree

miriam chaikin
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

stonehenge forget-me-nots each side of the fence

anonymous
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

Shadow of age
on the wall —
second full moon

R.K.Singh
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

timid ivy
chatters to stone deaf
granite walls

Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

spring showers
the old stone wall comes alive
with yellow blossoms

anonymous
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

autumn breeze
tiny spiders add glitter
to an old fence

Mac Miller
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

rusty fence
from apple-tree to apple-tree
rotten apples

Dorota Pyra
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

our fence
for humans a barrier
a highway for cats

Elaine Riddell
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

a cuckoo's song. . .
the shock of bougainvilleas
above a brick wall

anonymous
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

"shock" is the choice that puts us in the moment and makes the moment resonate.

First day in school —
in the hollow of a wall
two satchels hidden

Dan Norea
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

boom-boxes
herald exam week :
my office wall shakes

LGD
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

fence is loaded
by the white dahlias —
my father alone

miorita
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

pasture fence
it leans towards
alfalfa blooms

andrea
(0,0,2) = 2 pts


Nineteenth Place – One Point
erratic field
some of the boulders
in its fence

Bruce Ross

"erratic" is (to me, at least) an unusual choice and an effective one. I think the placing of "the" and "its" might be reversed.

Driven up the wall —
Am I coming or going?
Who, on earth, can tell?

Tanja

the worn path
between the wall and fence
where worlds collide

Bill Hudson

straddling the fence
ball lightening
was achieved

A. Bodhi

behind the wall
of indifference and pain
living a lie

Keith A. Simmonds

Wired out birds gossip
cows chatting online happy
keeping fence posted

Erling Larsen

cattle country
barbed wire fences keep the herds
from becoming one

Edward

my new neighbor's kid
peeking through the picket fence —
a billy goat!

Bridget Cougar

wall of silence
while they dry dishes —
kitchen tap drips, drips

Leslie Montgomery

equinox
building the fence myself
I bring it level

Thomas Heffernan

remember
my love messages
on that wall?

meow

a patch of mint
thriving, near
an ancient stone wall

Stella

The widow's house —
only the neighbors' boys
jump the fence

Ioan Marinescu-Puiu

Holding Hills so tight
Undulating barbed wire webs
Keeping flocks from flight

Pat

summer dusk
one wall of a pre-war house
still warm

Juliusz Wnorowski

almost tangible —
this wall growing
between us

John Soules

our stroll
becomes a quarrel,
fence after six foot fence

Laurene Post

the war
between two neighbours
a fence

Hermione

elaborate
castle walls ruined
by only wave

anonymous

brown fence
the cardinal sings
early spring

Mary Chapman

Jumping
imaginary walls —
finding

Tina


Twentieth Place – Sorry, no points this time.
Ireland's gorse-hedge fences —
sheep on one side
tourist on the other

Bre

early spring
day lilies peek
over the cold stone wall

sakyu

the smell of dust
sharp thorns on
a split rail fence

Linda Pilarski

Leant to the wall
clothes wet in spring drizzle
love words broken

Max Zontini

Do I really like him?
I wish I were a fly
on the wall…

Daniela Bullas

Lichen and moss
Guarded by neglect and decay
Battered gates and walls

James Sawers

broken limbs
scattered bits of fence
wind subsides

James M. Thompson

black fort wall —
moss shimmers in
sunlight

Sunil Uniyal

last staple pounded
into the 8 foot high
deer fence

gourdman

dandelions —
on all cracks in the wall
this spring

Jacek M.

many rose buds
lean on memorial walls
to bloom as bouquets

purush

oblique fence —
between the wooden slats
blossom wildflowers

Andrzej Dembonczyk

this winter vine
monstrously reeling round high walls:
she's gone she's gone

Sheila K. Barskdale

April moon,
five foot garden fence,
ten foot shade.

Trevor Camp

the Separation Wall
blocks the way —
crocuses blossoming

Deanna Tief

tangled sheep hair
in the fence on the fold
of the map

Jon Baldwin

April rain —
a canopy of trees rejuvenates
along the fence

~ Pauline Peter

April rain —
students plant flowers along
the barbed wire fence

~ Alex Wanambisi

quarry blasts —
a crack in the wall of
our house

~ Lucy Waithera

students buying
foodstuff through the fence —
break time

~ Elizabeth Wakesho

April rain —
the wall of our classroom
caves in

~ Ruth Maloba

holiday tuition —
a student escapes
over the fence

~ Nyamai Nthunga

April sunshine —
hawkers spread their wares
near the fence

~ Emmanuel Mwita

the long neck
through the fence —
a maize plant

~ Winslause Yamame

painting the fence
the silvered grain
turns golden

Andrew Shimield

vaulting a wire fence
I almost miss a barb
last nip of winter

Tom Genovese

my grandpa built this
toiling in the summer heat
fitting rails on rails

Deirdre Godwin

cold wall of silence
comes down to make way for a
warm fence of flowers

dragonfly pitch black—where's the door
to the bathroom—only wall
anxiety mounts

Paul O. Williams

uninvited visitor
scaling my neighbour's wall —
a bat flees

~ Catherine Njeri Maina

fairytale —
the scary character peeps
through the cracked wall

Hussein Haji

security —
a thin fence between me and
my favourite ship

anonymous

ghost town —
this fence
between neighbors

anonymous

on the garden wall
in spreading middle age
dappled ivy clings

Frances McCarthy

hillside tilt —
old stone wall
mortared with shadows

Gene Doty

newly empty nest —
we decide to abandon
the old brick wall

anonymous

footprints on snow —
on the fence wire carelessly
swings my life.

Krzysztof PL

the butterfly
hovers about the fence
the poison oak

Marylouise Knight

well-known wisdom
"good fences make good neighbours"
but Frost disagreed

frederick gier

window cat's siren
scares possible trespassers
off his invisible fences

Jon Espen Vassbotn

Spring Fever
squatting against the wall
a stripped-to-waist tramp

anonymous

faded graffiti
morning glories climb
the repainted wall

Deborah P Kolodji

fence on the border
Oh Mr. Frost —
makes poor neighbors

jill

after frost
neighbors argue
over the wall

Bill Pauly

flow of bricks
in flemmish bond
a serpentine garden wall

eric

neighbour's pigeons
think nothing of
my fence

Iga


Participants’ General Comments:

While kigo section left something to be desired (for my taste at least), free format section offered quite a few strong haiku, which made the decision much more difficult. On a different day I might have decided differently.

Other points given back. I've only done that once before (comment on free format votes)

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