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The Shiki Monthly Kukai

September 2007 Kukai

Dear Haiku Friends,

Here are the results for the September 2007 Kukai, wherein our Kigo subject was "MORNING GLORIES" and our Free Format word was "RAINBOW".

Congratulations to Laurene, winner of our Kigo section; and to Laura Orabone AND Carole MacRury, winners of our Free Format section!


The haiku are listed in order of total points received from voters. The numbers reflect the number of voters who gave the haiku either three points, two points, or one point -- followed by the total points for all votes.

Those who were given less than three points and who requested anonymity in such a case are so noted.


In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point points were cast for this poem by the other participating poets.

(214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.

September 2007 Results
Kigo Theme:
Morning Glories
Free Format Theme:
Rainbow

First Place -- 28 points
new neighbors —
blue morning glories
in the weed pile

Laurene
(1,5,15) = 28 pts

An effective, simple way to show how people differ.

First impressions. And, if I think of the morning glories as the neighbors, what's the weed pile?


Second Place -- 26 points
summer's end
the morning glories
enter the mailbox

RaV
(1,6,11) = 26 pts


Third Place -- 24 points
morning glories
in the chain link fence
an inmate's finger

Josh Wikoff
(0,5,14) = 24 pts

Unusual image and it conveys the isolation nicely.


Fourth Place -- 17 points
leaning together
beside her grave
morning glories

Neil Muscott
(2,2,7) = 17 pts

monastery ruins
an old trellis supports
morning glories

tom painting
(1,4,6) = 17 pts

The things that last . . .

I liked this poem’s richness of texture. On one level, the phrases “monastery ruins” and “old trellis” evoke a sense of rustic beauty. On another level, the contrast of a monastery’s weighty stonework against the light frame of a trellis makes the image of trellis and morning glories seem all the more delicate. On a deeper level, the old trellis supporting morning glories can be seen as a metaphor for how a monastery supports spiritual growth. On yet another level, the poem speaks of how something old and abandoned, such as an ancient ruins, can still support life and still have aesthetic value for those sensitive and poetic enough to see it.

Reymond B.


Fifth Place -- 14 points
hunting cabin —
morning glories cover
the outhouse

-- LGD
(0,4,6) = 14 pts

A bow to Basho's contrast of high and low.


Sixth Place -- 12 points
morning glories
closed tightly
against the night

Beth Powell
(0,5,2) = 12 pts

wind tunnel . . .
a hummingbird fans
the morning glory

Kala Ramesh
(0,3,6) = 12 pts

wild morning glory
binds a thistle
to a thistle

Mark Hollingsworth
(0,2,8) = 12 pts


Seventh Place -- 11 points
morning glories
continue to climb
toward the full moon

Harvey Jenkins
(1,0,8) = 11 pts

again I survive
dying in a dream . . .
morning glories

Collin Barber
(0,3,5) = 11 pts


Eighth Place -- 10 points
the last guest —
morning glories fading
to almost white

Cherie Hunter Day
(1,2,3) = 10 pts


Ninth Place -- 9 points
the old wall —
hiding its holes
morning glory

Maria
(0,2,5) = 9 pts

I know how the old wall feels, and I envy the quality of its cover. The dash at the end of line 1 could be dispensed with.

garden wedding —
morning glories trumpet
the bride's arrival

Tristan Coleridge
(0,2,5) = 9 pts

children laughing
near the school entrance
morning glories

gillena
(0,0,9) = 9 pts


Tenth Place -- 8 points
morning glories —
what can I say of them
that Issa hasn't

Mary Lee McClure
(1,0,5) = 8 pts

stillborn
morning glories taken
by an early frost

Karen Briggs
(1,0,5) = 8 pts

shaking moth balls
from our frayed blue quilt —
morning glories

Beverley George
(0,2,4) = 8 pts

outside pre-school —
morning glories
all lined up

Paul Hodder
(0,2,4) = 8 pts

I enjoyed the comparison of the children to the flowers.

morning glories
last night’s jazz
blares in my mind

eddybacher
(0,2,4) = 8 pts

I like the way the flare and the blare of these two are juxtaposed.


Eleventh Place -- 7 points
immigration raid
kudzu and morning glories
strangle their garden

Carmel Lively Westerman
(1,1,2) = 7 pts

morning glories
the bone trees twined
with stars

Laura Orabone
(1,1,2) = 7 pts

another day
with no dog barking —
morning glories

Israel Lopez Balan
(0,2,3) = 7 pts

just five seeds
and the morning glories
rule the garden

Glen Keener
(0,2,3) = 7 pts

coastal fog —
the morning glories
unopened

Dejah Leger
(0,0,7) = 7 pts

A nice observation.


Twelfth Place -- 6 pts
morning glories
stone still and deadly
the mantis waits

Edward
(1,1,1) = 6 pts

This juxtaposition of one of nature’s most efficient killers (the praying mantis) against delicate flowers effectively summaries the dichotomy of nature, for that is what nature is - something beautiful and deadly, something to be admired and respected. We think of ourselves as being separate from nature, but in fact mankind too is a living expression of nature; mankind too is capable of creating great beauty and great destruction. We are, perhaps, the most glorious and most terrible manifestation of nature’s dichotomy.

Reymond B.

the shadow
of a late bee
sunlit morning glory

Carole
(1,0,3) = 6 pts

the old shed —
don't let it fall
morning glories

Ann K. Schwader
(1,0,3) = 6 pts

too late
for the morning glories —
autumn wedding

Carol Pearce-Worthington
(0,1,4) = 6 pts

Having been married a couple times I know what it's like trying to find in season flowers you like for the bridal bouquet.


Thirteenth Place -- 5 points
sunrise —
the morning glories and I
wake up together

Betty
(1,1,0) = 5 pts

in the park —
morning glories idling
on a mango tree

~ Bilha Wanjiko
(1,0,2) = 5 pts

I just love "idling".

a damselfly
in the morning glories
dying breeze

Susan Constable
(1,0,2) = 5 pts

blue morning glories
bask in the remaining heat —
with them my old cat

jill
(0,2,1) = 5 pts

Sensual images; nice juxtaposition of the flowers and cat; effective use of "remaining heat" to suggest the change of season.

mourning doves
among the morning glories —
infinite blues

--Lorene
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

neighbours
peep through the fence
morning glories

Tanya Dikova
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

I couldn't resist the potential cheekiness.

last date —
morning glories
in his eyes

Ivana Vanja Nikovic
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

camouflaged
in the morning glories
Bindweed

gourdman
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

indian summer
morning glories twine
'round the pumpkin patch

~fedelmia
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

Good seasonal images.

dewdrops
on the morning glory
scattered sun

Tom Maretic
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

steel town dawn . . .
a glow of morning glories
through the smog

Nancy Smith
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

morning glories —
no space for me to
jump over the fence

~ Catherine Maina
(0,0,5) = 5 pts

This echoes the essence of a classic.


Fourteenth Place -- 4 points
Grampa disapproved
of Gramma’s morning glories
they wasted water

Deirdre Godwin
(1,0,1) = 4 pts

She brushes the hair
from her eyes
trails of morning glories

Glenn Laundre
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

morning glory
on the old paling —
the smile of grandma

miorita
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

A lovely metaphor.

A break in the clouds;
suddenly in the spotlight:
morning glories

Rey Barreto
(0,0,4) = 4 pts

colonial town
on a simple white fence
morning glories

Bruce Ross
(0,0,4) = 4 pts

windy evening —
morning glories
curve inwards

~ Anne Wairimu
(0,0,4) = 4 pts

Seeing what's there, and letting it speak.

war telegram —
morning glories
in cold glass

Ron Moss
(0,0,4) = 4 pts

old garden
the hoe's handle
winded with morning glories

Dorota Pyra
(0,0,4) = 4 pts

first kiss
morning glories
by the door

Meredith Stern Cavalieri
(0,0,4) = 4 pts

A perfectly captured moment.


Fifteenth Place -- 3 pts
sunlit
morning glories
traffic slows

Allen McGill
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

first sunbeam
through the knothole
bud of a morning glory

---Jacek M.
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

first frost
tangle of morning glory vines
still green

Jeanne Jorgensen
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

Grandma's house —
Morning glories twine
over faded paint

-- Leena Halych
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

Heavenly Blue —
flashbacks
of morning glories

--Autumn Moon
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

school bus coming
on a cloudless day
morning glories

Bill Kenney
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

chanting our prayers
in vacation bible school
morning glory

Pris Campbell
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

morning glories
my granny replays
a Satchmo record

Petar Tchouhov
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

morning glories —
the seed of yet
another haiku

-- Richard Kay
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

summer's end —
sapphire morning glories
curl around bronze mums

Hazel A. Witherspoon
(0,0,3) = 3 pts


Sixteenth Place -- 2 pts
the morning glory's fading blossoms —
your parting kiss
damp on my lips

anonymous
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

after reading Chiyo's poems
not wanting to prune them ever
-those morning glories

angelee deodhar
(0,1,0= 2 pts

The poet in me loves this one!

Soft September sky
a mist on the morning glories
her new young eyes

Angelika Kolompar Bygott
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

labor day
curtain of morning glories
frames the sunrise

Janice
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

shoreline flags
catching the early sun
morning glories

anonymous
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

the morning glories
raise their faces —
warm sunrise

Keith Heiberg
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

morning glories…
she applies for
another audition

Keiko
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

morning glory —
a flash of red on the
way to church

anonymous
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

cloudy morning —
a chameleon hanging
on the morning glory

~ Elkana Mogaka
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

afternoon sunshine —
my father resting under
morning glories

~ Makila Moses
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

morning glories
climb over the board fence — -
mountains beyond

Zhanna P. Rader
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

a fresh grave —
the heart shaped leaves
of a morning glory vine

DeVar
(0,0,2) = 2 pts


Seventeenth Place -- 1 pt
untwisting spirals —
morning glory blues expose
stamens moist with dew

LaVerna B. Johnson

gray aunt
final season of
morning glories

John Healey

September smiles
blushing morning glories
her bus stop

Ben Gieske

morning glories
climbing high as
days grow shorter

Leslie Montgomery

Recognizing autumn
in coloured sunrise
morning glories

Ashi

evening watering —
morning glory umbrellas
furled tight shut

P. O. Williams

mass gathers the flock
sunset closes silent bells
of morning glories

Boris Nazansky

in the swamp —
morning glories flower
everywhere

~ Jane Njeri

Morning Glories:
the first cloud
in the sky

Raquel D. Bailey

Only change is permanent.

morning glories
white clouds graze
the sky

Earl Keener

as blue as the blue
of the sky and your eyes
morning glories

max verhart

morning glory —
my hand keeps reaching
for the phone

Marylouise Knight

at dawn
as moonflowers close
morning glories unfold

Elizabeth Fanto

through morning glories
the pickup's orange rust
Color 101

Barbara Snow

Morning glories
cover the wormhole
of the fence

Magdalena Dale

braided weeds :
a crown of morning glory
for the princess

-- andrea

compost pile —
a rising Morning Glory
catches sunbeam

anonymous

full moon
frosted with a cold silver
the morning glories vines

anonymous

car after car —
everybody admires
someone’s morning glories

Ami


Eighteenth Place -- no points awarded this time, sorry
to strangle flowers
replace them with pale trumpets
in morning glory

assu

fence post morning glories
dead squirrel on the porch
Miles Davis plays the blues

yositaka

lost hiker —
morning glories closed
to rescue workers

Alice Frampton

vines already brown
she paints the last morning glories
from a snapshot

mechaieh

Her smile
arrival of morning glories
at the bower

--R.K.SINGH

dark and light blue
morning glories
cover stone fence

Jim Applegate

As colors change
morning glories
petals wave hello

Jozuah Darksong

Hydro pole,
blue Morning Glories
energy.

Trevor Camp

morning sunshine —
morning glories decorate
our balcony

~ Okochil Jacob

ripe grapes
on the trellis blossom
with morning glory

D.V. Rozic

Visitors tally
array of morning glories
dogs hunt chipmunks

anonymous

morning glories
entwined in the citrus tree
garage sale today

Sjs (Stevie)

face to face
bees and morning glories
…yummy honey!

Daniela Bullas

from the old vine
one last morning glory —
rainy morning

Agnes Eva Savich

in the late night —
morning glories
curve inwards

~ T.W.K

dew on the petals
of the morning glories —
chilly sunrise

~ Nicholas Mutua

entwining fingers
steady ascend to the top
morning glories

marlène buitelaar

your springtime smile —
morning glories

Mike Montreuil

morning glories —
in garden under sunbeams
only single morning

Cornelia

predawn temple bell
wakes me up
to enjoy sun-rise

radhey shiam

pipettes of dew —
convolute morning glories
issue drops

Jacek Kielich

folding the sky
the storm front...
the morning glory

George Hawkins

window pane
lit up with sunshine —
morning glories

Dany Fisher

cool dawn mist
morning glories open
on my fence

Ruth Powell

above a pile
of wilted petals
morning glories

Michael Baribeau

so soon prepared
for public viewing,
a morning glory

Ana Cadarin


General Comments:

There are getting to be so many poems each month that it is quite a task to sort them out. Lots of good morning glory poems, though.


First Place -- 21 pts
sudden downpour
bleeding on a concrete sky
the chalk rainbow

Laura Orabone
(3,1,10) = 21 pts

rainbow's end. . .
the trawler's gillnet
drawn tight

Carole MacRury
(2,3,9) = 21 pts


Second Place -- 19 pts
the arc
of his line at sunrise
rainbow trout

Susan Constable
(2,3,7) = 19 pts

The peacefulness of early morning fishing well-depicted.

Almost too poetic but firmly grounded in the real.

after a storm
the rainbow bending over
what's left

Bill Kenney
(1,4,8) = 19 pts


Third Place -- 16 pts
double rainbow
her second wish
a small one

--Irene Golas
(2,2,6) = 16 pts

Were it in my power, I'd grant her a big one. She sounds like the sort of person who ought to write haiku.

autumn stillness —
rainbow trout
bump my waders

John Healey
(0,5,6) = 16 pts

For me, the bump only deepens the stillness.


Fourth Place -- 15 pts
tisk tisk of sprinklers —
over suburban lawns
look-a-like rainbows

Neil Muscott
(3,2,2) = 15 pts

Nice use of sound in this one.

Reminds me of that old song about ticky-tacky. Light satirical touch.

greens and browns —
the painted rainbow
of the bullied child

Paul Hodder
(2,3,3) = 15 pts

Very astute and tender observation.


Fifth Place -- 14 pts
fast train...
trying to catch
the rainbow

Carol Pearce-Worthington
(0,2,10) = 14 pts


Sixth Place -- 13 pts
rainbow
a dragonfly visits
the lily

Earl Keener
(1,2,6) = 13 pts

in a dew drop
on the white rose
a rainbow

Peter Macrow
(0,3,7) = 13 pts

A white rose is a lovely, romantic image all by itself. Add to it a rainbow in a dew drop and it becomes all the more enchanting. An exquisite demonstration of poetic alchemy.


Seventh Place -- 11 pts
salmon run
just where they must leap
rainbow

Bruce Ross
(1,3,2) = 11 pts

The imagery of this dynamic haiku is so vivid; I could clearly see the salmon leaping across the rainbow created by sunlight hitting the spray of water. So much action packed in so few words – well done!

sudden rainbow —
the bus arrives
almost empty

Israel Lopez Balan
(1,1,6) = 11 pts

I wanted to give this one a point because of the two mysteries: the 'sudden' rainbow and the 'almost empty' bus and how they interact. Together they help build a sense of waiting and the boredom and entertainment that gets noticed therein. Something exciting in the rainbow unexpected, something disappointing in the bus, probably empty of the one waited for.


Eighth Place -- 10 pts
brief rainbow
a dragonfly
lingers

Ann K. Schwader
(0,3,4) = 10 pts

A nice haiku moment of transition.

sunny morning —
a new spider web shines
with rainbow colors

Zhanna P. Rader
(0,3,4) = 10 pts

double rainbow
the unopened letter
on her desk

Sjs (Stevie)
(0,0,10) = 10 pts


Ninth Place -- 9 pts
on the wall
of her doll house
she paints a rainbow

Betty
(1,2,2) = 9 pts

A tender moment of a child's rendering of the reality.

an old printer
all colours of the rainbow
on his hands

--Jacek M
(0,2,5) = 9 pts


Tenth Place -- 8 pts
a rainbow arcs
the summer sky —
blunted crayons

Collin Barber
(1,1,3) = 8 pts

I love this image!! The description is exactly like it always feels for me, now painted in words.

tracing a rainbow
across the sand
a peacock

Pris Campbell
(0,2,4) = 8 pts

water sprinkler
counting the splashes
to the next rainbow

Juliusz Wnorowski
(0,2,4) = 8 pts

urban day camp
a rainbow of children
spill down the hill

Elizabeth Fanto
(0,1,6) = 8 pts


Eleventh Place -- 7 pts
sleet on the window —
my niece's rainbow
on the fridge

Keith Heiberg
(1,0,4) = 7 pts

lollipop
her rainbow
tongue

Beverley George
(0,1,5) = 7 pts

rainbow —
somehow the magic
still there

Mary Lee McClure
(0,0,7) = 7 pts


Twelfth Place -- 6 pts
rainbow . . .
Dad's fish
a 'catch and release'

Alice Frampton
(1,0,3) = 6 pts

such a long journey
from the primordial ooze
to the rainbow’s end

Deirdre Godwin
(1,1,1) = 6 pts

long rainy day ~
he depicts a rainbow
I don't see

Ana Cadarin
(1,1,1) = 6 pts

this rainbow
like me . . .
just dust in the wind

-- Richard Kay
(1,0,3) = 6 pts

for a moment —
painting the sky
...rainbow

maria
(1,0,3) = 6 pts

It is the line “for a moment” that makes this poem resonate, for it is the transient nature of rainbows that makes their beauty poignant and magical. If they lasted years they would not be so special. But no, rainbows in the sky appear infrequently and disappear too quickly. The lives of great men and woman are the same. Princess Diana, Marilyn Monroe, Luciano Pavarotti, and Martin Luther King, Jr., they came and went, painting our world with their glorious colorful lives and dis appeared too quickly from our sight. But, just as rainbows are unforgettable, so are they. “For a moment” we see rainbows but for a lifetime we remember them. Of course some rainbows, like Martin Luther King, Jr., never truly disappear because of how profoundly they touched our lives.

falling leaves
each tree sheds
a rainbow

Karen Briggs
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

Indian summer —
faded into the rocks,
the rainbow trout

Dejah Leger
(0,1,4) = 6 pts

posing
just under
the rainbow

Beth Powell
(0,1,4) = 6 pts

afternoon showers —
a plane droning
across the rainbow

~ Vivian Adhiambo
(0,1,4) = 6 pts

special child . . .
a rainbow breaks open
her smile

Ron Moss
(0,1,4) = 6 pts

Misty September
a rainbow connects
the two islands

Angelika Coloma Bygott
(0,0,6) = 6 pts


Thirteenth Place -- 5 pts
rainbow arching
above the mud
where soldiers lie

Leslie Montgomery
(0,2,1) = 5 pts

fading rainbow
pouring all of its colors
into hot air balloon

Kurt R. W.
(0,2,1) = 5 pts

fading rainbow
nobody touches
her wet hair

Petar Tchouhov
(0,2,1) = 5 pts

last farewell
the highway's end turns up
into a rainbow

Lech Szeglowski
(0,2,1) = 5 pts

night rainbow
far away on a hill
the temple lamps

Kala Ramesh
(0,1,3) = 5pts

kindergarten
a student paints a rainbow
on her dress

Carmel Lively Westerman
(0,0,5) = 5 pts

rusty Ford
in a puddle
rainbow

gourdman
(0,0,5) = 5 pts

anniversary
crystal necklace
a rainbow on her chin

andrea
(0,0,5) = 5 pts

in the splash
from the car wheel,
a little rainbow

Tom Maretic
(0,0,5) = 5 pts


Fourteenth Place -- 4 pts
rainbow haiku —
I earnestly gaze
at the sky

~ Catherine Maina
(1,0,1) = 4 pts

deep into summer
storm clouds pause for the rainbow
a dance with no lead

Harvey Jenkins
(1,0,1) = 4 pts

prism's rainbow —
classroom eyes
on the bright playground

- Munzar
(1,0,1) = 4 pts

see the rainbow
all the colors of the crayons —
daughter tells us

jill
(1,0,1) = 4 pts

Yes, kids do say the darnedest things, don’t they? That was a dandy.

oil slick
children stare at
the rainbow

Allen McGill
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

double rainbow ...
I need a new pair
of lenses

Ella W.
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

wet shoes —
street musician is looking
at the rainbow

Ivana Vanja Nikovic
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

violent prairie storm
he tells his little sister
it leaves rainbows too

Edward
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

I find kiddie ku ludicrously easy to resist, but this one tells its story elegantly and economically.

harbor seal —
motor oil rainbows spin
in the boat's wake

aom (tim)
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

Rainbow Bridge...
even this river
not filling the sea

George Hawkins
(0,0,4) = 4 pts

thruway north —
a mile of apple trees
before the rainbow

Ami
(0,0,4) = 4 pts


Fifteenth Place -- 3 pts
gay pride —
a parade of rainbow flags
dancing past

~ Isabelle Prondzynski
(1,0,0) = 3 pts

Of the two parade poems in the list, I like this one because of the exuberance it shows, a real celebration of identity comes out in the word 'dancing'.

summer cleaning
a rainbow above
the manure spreader

Janice
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

Her scarf —
a rainbow of flowers
moving in the sky

--R.K.SINGH
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

deep hammock
complete
with a rainbow

Scott Mason
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

Beneath the rainbow
lost in morning fog drifts
ghost trees walking

LaVerna B. Johnson
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

love parade —
everywhere
colors of the rainbow

-- Derwisz
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

'Love parade' is a little abstract, but I like the sense of feeling that saturates the poem with the word 'everywhere', it seems to instantly cause the mind to look around and confirm that all around happiness that might occur at such a parade.

acrobatic feats —
the kitten wildly pouncing
sun-catcher rainbows

~fedelmia
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

now running free
beyond the Rainbow Bridge
the dog I put to sleep yesterday

angelee deodhar
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

in the fountain
on the hand organ's music
rainbows dance

max verhart
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

horizon
and rainbow
in the mist

Cornelia
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

a rainbow
splashes the seawall
yawning seals

eddybacher
(0,0,3) = 3 pts


Sixteenth Place -- 2 pts
father's funeral —
triple rainbow follows
us to his grave

Audrey Fitzgerald
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

a stork gliding
bellow, above, around
the rainbow

D.V. Rozic
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

a newborn squints
after all that dark —
the rainbow

Barbara Snow
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

mixed blessing
oily rainbows in the
parking lot puddle

Meredith Stern Cavalieri
(0,1,0) = 2 pts

rainbow
you guess by your fingers
the color of my eyes

Dorota Pyra
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

midsummer drought —
downwind of the hose spray
half a rainbow

anonymous
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

sunset
the rainbow with us
beneath the clouds

Michael Baribeau
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

Fall shower,
gold leaved oak trees
rainbow's end.

Trevor Camp
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

shower's end
a rainbow spot
on the street

RaV
(0,0,2) = 2 pts


Seventeenth Place -- 1 pt
three rainbows across the bow
my sweetheart asleep down below
should I wake him?

Yositaka

YES, WAKE HIM! How often does one get to see triple rainbows in the sky?

three quarter
rainbow arches into
grand canyon

Jim Applegate

drop of rain
splatters the rainbow
a child’s lost painting

Mark Hollingsworth

after the storm
dirt road puddle
holds a muddy rainbow

April Serock

drizzly evening —
a colourful rainbow
across the sky

~ Walter Ochola

rainbow:
a red ribbon falls
from her hair

anonymous

The Gasoline
in the pothole
reflected rainbow colors

-Yoshi

Well, in Mankato,
Rainbow also tried a store.
It didn't make it.

Horst Ludwig

This only works in the context of this kukai. Surrounded by well over a hundred mostly very earnest rainbow ku, it's deadpan funny. And Mankato is somehow the perfect setting. The whole thing sounds so, well, Minnesotan.

hot afternoon rain —
rainbow curving across
the cloudy sky

~ Irene Muthengi

her two fingers
outside the plaster cast
"shoot" the rainbow

marlène buitelaar

cool morning —
I dig in the closet for
my rainbow jacket

Marylouise Knight

light afternoon showers —
the rainbow joins two
separate horizons

~ Walter Otieno

rainbows everywhere
even in my wet sink
first day of summer

anonymous

rainbow
topsy-turvy in the lake
I am surprised

radhey shiam

rainbow arcing
over the willow —
time for a smoke

-- LGD

Nice juxtaposition -- this haiku is far from twee! I can see the reflective smoker, enjoying the view while also enjoying the fag.

spindrift after spindrift
a bitter salt rainbow
bobs across the sky

anonymous

scribblers and new crayons
on the students’ desks
rainbow wallpaper

DeVar


Eighteenth Place -- no points this time, sorry!
Hiking up the North Face
into the rainbow eyes of morning

--Lorene

rain every day but
trees hide the bows
close green sky

assu

Lovers entwined
Sandy beach beneath
Double rainbow above

anonymous

like fame
there not there
-- rainbow

miriam chaikin

my lips stick
to her dimpled cheek
rainbow sherbet

Josh Wikoff

rainbow....
I close my eyes and imagine
the bluebirds fly

anonymous

a knock on the door-
the rainbow coalition
rep pays a visit

Glen Keener

your reflections
rainbow falls in candle light
sunflower bright

Ben Gieske

Rainbows shine true
like good friends
the search continues...

Joshua Borges

Rainbow in the sky
arch of Bifrost
polarized water

Ashi

garden hose spray
makes a fine rainbow —
ephemeral, too

P. O. Williams

thunder storm cedes
spanned in a silent cloudy sky
a rainbow

gillena

plays of rays —
the rainbow of the fountain
in the rainy rainbow

Jacek Kielich

rainbow
me and you connected
by colorful threads

Tanya Dikova

poor painter
on the fresh picture
faded rainbow

Norsto

rain slashes across
a beautiful rainbow —
evening sunshine

~ John Mwangi

smudge on my glasses
captures a ray of sunlight
grains of a rainbow

~ mechaieh

bright showery evening —
the sun shines across
the rainbowed sky

~ Jeniffer Mumbua

August rain —
a colourful rainbow curves
across the sky

~ Bilher Wanjiku

birds flying
high above the sky —
a rainbow

~ Samuel Ndung'u

silent rally
white balloons shroud the sky
rainbow banner

anonymous

compound word —
rain plus sunlight
equal rainbow?!

Daniela Bullas

Saratoga sunset —
She pulls a rainbow
from out of her box

Glenn Laundre

rain ends…
the glint
of a rainbow trout

Keiko Izawa

wonderful!
even shines in asphalt:
the rainbow

Jordi Climent

swelter —
a rainbow grows
in the car's leak

Agnes Eva Savich

summer afternoon —
embracing the sky from the east
a turn down rainbow

miorita

rainy afternoon —
curved colourful
rainbow

~ T.W.K

summer vacation —
the accidental rainbow
on the rainbow

Mike Montreuil

beautifully curved
colours across the sky —
the rainbow

~ Tomothy Wambua

a giant semi-circle
colouring the evening sky —
the rainbow

~ Raymond Otieno

such a dry month
today a storm front
rainbow in the east

Jeanne Jorgensen

Squawk of joy amongst
droplets and sunlight —
Rainbow preen

- Leena Halych

tumor markers drop
on leaden skies a rainbow
of possibility

Ruth Powell

midday shower —
double rainbow shimmers
in runoff

Hazel A. Witherspoon

rising rainbow — --
for the first time, a baby sits up
in his stroller

anonymous


General Comments:

Once again it's quite difficult to cut out haiku that I like.

Somehow I didn't respond to most of the rainbow poems--even mine deserved only 4 or 5 points :)

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