First Place -- 21 pts
sudden downpour
bleeding on a concrete sky
the chalk rainbow
Laura Orabone
(3,1,10) = 21 pts
rainbow's end. . .
the trawler's gillnet
drawn tight
Carole MacRury
(2,3,9) = 21 pts
Second Place -- 19 pts
the arc
of his line at sunrise
rainbow trout
Susan Constable
(2,3,7) = 19 pts
The peacefulness of early morning fishing well-depicted.
Almost too poetic but firmly grounded in the real.
after a storm
the rainbow bending over
what's left
Bill Kenney
(1,4,8) = 19 pts
Third Place -- 16 pts
double rainbow
her second wish
a small one
--Irene Golas
(2,2,6) = 16 pts
Were it in my power, I'd grant her a big one.
She sounds like the sort of person who ought to
write haiku.
autumn stillness —
rainbow trout
bump my waders
John Healey
(0,5,6) = 16 pts
For me, the bump only deepens the stillness.
Fourth Place -- 15 pts
tisk tisk of sprinklers —
over suburban lawns
look-a-like rainbows
Neil Muscott
(3,2,2) = 15 pts
Nice use of sound in this one.
Reminds me of that old song about ticky-tacky.
Light satirical touch.
greens and browns —
the painted rainbow
of the bullied child
Paul Hodder
(2,3,3) = 15 pts
Very astute and tender observation.
Fifth Place -- 14 pts
fast train...
trying to catch
the rainbow
Carol Pearce-Worthington
(0,2,10) = 14 pts
Sixth Place -- 13 pts
rainbow
a dragonfly visits
the lily
Earl Keener
(1,2,6) = 13 pts
in a dew drop
on the white rose
a rainbow
Peter Macrow
(0,3,7) = 13 pts
A white rose is a lovely, romantic image all by itself.
Add to it a rainbow in a dew drop and it becomes all the
more enchanting. An exquisite demonstration of poetic
alchemy.
Seventh Place -- 11 pts
salmon run
just where they must leap
rainbow
Bruce Ross
(1,3,2) = 11 pts
The imagery of this dynamic haiku is so vivid; I could
clearly see the salmon leaping across the rainbow created
by sunlight hitting the spray of water. So much action
packed in so few words – well done!
sudden rainbow —
the bus arrives
almost empty
Israel Lopez Balan
(1,1,6) = 11 pts
I wanted to give this one a point because of the two
mysteries: the 'sudden' rainbow and the 'almost empty' bus
and how they interact. Together they help build a sense of
waiting and the boredom and entertainment that gets noticed
therein. Something exciting in the rainbow unexpected,
something disappointing in the bus, probably empty of
the one waited for.
Eighth Place -- 10 pts
brief rainbow
a dragonfly
lingers
Ann K. Schwader
(0,3,4) = 10 pts
A nice haiku moment of transition.
sunny morning —
a new spider web shines
with rainbow colors
Zhanna P. Rader
(0,3,4) = 10 pts
double rainbow
the unopened letter
on her desk
Sjs (Stevie)
(0,0,10) = 10 pts
Ninth Place -- 9 pts
on the wall
of her doll house
she paints a rainbow
Betty
(1,2,2) = 9 pts
A tender moment of a child's rendering of the reality.
an old printer
all colours of the rainbow
on his hands
--Jacek M
(0,2,5) = 9 pts
Tenth Place -- 8 pts
a rainbow arcs
the summer sky —
blunted crayons
Collin Barber
(1,1,3) = 8 pts
I love this image!! The description
is exactly like it always feels for me, now
painted in words.
tracing a rainbow
across the sand
a peacock
Pris Campbell
(0,2,4) = 8 pts
water sprinkler
counting the splashes
to the next rainbow
Juliusz Wnorowski
(0,2,4) = 8 pts
urban day camp
a rainbow of children
spill down the hill
Elizabeth Fanto
(0,1,6) = 8 pts
Eleventh Place -- 7 pts
sleet on the window —
my niece's rainbow
on the fridge
Keith Heiberg
(1,0,4) = 7 pts
lollipop
her rainbow
tongue
Beverley George
(0,1,5) = 7 pts
rainbow —
somehow the magic
still there
Mary Lee McClure
(0,0,7) = 7 pts
Twelfth Place -- 6 pts
rainbow . . .
Dad's fish
a 'catch and release'
Alice Frampton
(1,0,3) = 6 pts
such a long journey
from the primordial ooze
to the rainbow’s end
Deirdre Godwin
(1,1,1) = 6 pts
long rainy day ~
he depicts a rainbow
I don't see
Ana Cadarin
(1,1,1) = 6 pts
this rainbow
like me . . .
just dust in the wind
-- Richard Kay
(1,0,3) = 6 pts
for a moment —
painting the sky
...rainbow
maria
(1,0,3) = 6 pts
It is the line “for a moment” that makes this poem
resonate, for it is the transient nature of rainbows
that makes their beauty poignant and magical. If they
lasted years they would not be so special. But no,
rainbows in the sky appear infrequently and disappear
too quickly. The lives of great men and woman are the
same. Princess Diana, Marilyn Monroe, Luciano Pavarotti,
and Martin Luther King, Jr., they came and went, painting
our world with their glorious colorful lives and dis
appeared too quickly from our sight. But, just as
rainbows are unforgettable, so are they. “For a moment”
we see rainbows but for a lifetime we remember them.
Of course some rainbows, like Martin Luther King, Jr.,
never truly disappear because of how profoundly they
touched our lives.
falling leaves
each tree sheds
a rainbow
Karen Briggs
(0,2,2) = 6 pts
Indian summer —
faded into the rocks,
the rainbow trout
Dejah Leger
(0,1,4) = 6 pts
posing
just under
the rainbow
Beth Powell
(0,1,4) = 6 pts
afternoon showers —
a plane droning
across the rainbow
~ Vivian Adhiambo
(0,1,4) = 6 pts
special child . . .
a rainbow breaks open
her smile
Ron Moss
(0,1,4) = 6 pts
Misty September
a rainbow connects
the two islands
Angelika Coloma Bygott
(0,0,6) = 6 pts
Thirteenth Place -- 5 pts
rainbow arching
above the mud
where soldiers lie
Leslie Montgomery
(0,2,1) = 5 pts
fading rainbow
pouring all of its colors
into hot air balloon
Kurt R. W.
(0,2,1) = 5 pts
fading rainbow
nobody touches
her wet hair
Petar Tchouhov
(0,2,1) = 5 pts
last farewell
the highway's end turns up
into a rainbow
Lech Szeglowski
(0,2,1) = 5 pts
night rainbow
far away on a hill
the temple lamps
Kala Ramesh
(0,1,3) = 5pts
kindergarten
a student paints a rainbow
on her dress
Carmel Lively Westerman
(0,0,5) = 5 pts
rusty Ford
in a puddle
rainbow
gourdman
(0,0,5) = 5 pts
anniversary
crystal necklace
a rainbow on her chin
andrea
(0,0,5) = 5 pts
in the splash
from the car wheel,
a little rainbow
Tom Maretic
(0,0,5) = 5 pts
Fourteenth Place -- 4 pts
rainbow haiku —
I earnestly gaze
at the sky
~ Catherine Maina
(1,0,1) = 4 pts
deep into summer
storm clouds pause for the rainbow
a dance with no lead
Harvey Jenkins
(1,0,1) = 4 pts
prism's rainbow —
classroom eyes
on the bright playground
- Munzar
(1,0,1) = 4 pts
see the rainbow
all the colors of the crayons —
daughter tells us
jill
(1,0,1) = 4 pts
Yes, kids do say the darnedest things,
don’t they? That was a dandy.
oil slick
children stare at
the rainbow
Allen McGill
(0,1,2) = 4 pts
double rainbow ...
I need a new pair
of lenses
Ella W.
(0,1,2) = 4 pts
wet shoes —
street musician is looking
at the rainbow
Ivana Vanja Nikovic
(0,1,2) = 4 pts
violent prairie storm
he tells his little sister
it leaves rainbows too
Edward
(0,1,2) = 4 pts
I find kiddie ku ludicrously easy to resist,
but this one tells its story elegantly and economically.
harbor seal —
motor oil rainbows spin
in the boat's wake
aom (tim)
(0,1,2) = 4 pts
Rainbow Bridge...
even this river
not filling the sea
George Hawkins
(0,0,4) = 4 pts
thruway north —
a mile of apple trees
before the rainbow
Ami
(0,0,4) = 4 pts
Fifteenth Place -- 3 pts
gay pride —
a parade of rainbow flags
dancing past
~ Isabelle Prondzynski
(1,0,0) = 3 pts
Of the two parade poems in the list, I like this one
because of the exuberance it shows, a real celebration
of identity comes out in the word 'dancing'.
summer cleaning
a rainbow above
the manure spreader
Janice
(0,1,1) = 3 pts
Her scarf —
a rainbow of flowers
moving in the sky
--R.K.SINGH
(0,1,1) = 3 pts
deep hammock
complete
with a rainbow
Scott Mason
(0,1,1) = 3 pts
Beneath the rainbow
lost in morning fog drifts
ghost trees walking
LaVerna B. Johnson
(0,1,1) = 3 pts
love parade —
everywhere
colors of the rainbow
-- Derwisz
(0,1,1) = 3 pts
'Love parade' is a little abstract, but I like
the sense of feeling that saturates the poem with
the word 'everywhere', it seems to instantly cause
the mind to look around and confirm that all around
happiness that might occur at such a parade.
acrobatic feats —
the kitten wildly pouncing
sun-catcher rainbows
~fedelmia
(0,1,1) = 3 pts
now running free
beyond the Rainbow Bridge
the dog I put to sleep yesterday
angelee deodhar
(0,1,1) = 3 pts
in the fountain
on the hand organ's music
rainbows dance
max verhart
(0,0,3) = 3 pts
horizon
and rainbow
in the mist
Cornelia
(0,0,3) = 3 pts
a rainbow
splashes the seawall
yawning seals
eddybacher
(0,0,3) = 3 pts
Sixteenth Place -- 2 pts
father's funeral —
triple rainbow follows
us to his grave
Audrey Fitzgerald
(0,1,0) = 2 pts
a stork gliding
bellow, above, around
the rainbow
D.V. Rozic
(0,1,0) = 2 pts
a newborn squints
after all that dark —
the rainbow
Barbara Snow
(0,1,0) = 2 pts
mixed blessing
oily rainbows in the
parking lot puddle
Meredith Stern Cavalieri
(0,1,0) = 2 pts
rainbow
you guess by your fingers
the color of my eyes
Dorota Pyra
(0,0,2) = 2 pts
midsummer drought —
downwind of the hose spray
half a rainbow
anonymous
(0,0,2) = 2 pts
sunset
the rainbow with us
beneath the clouds
Michael Baribeau
(0,0,2) = 2 pts
Fall shower,
gold leaved oak trees
rainbow's end.
Trevor Camp
(0,0,2) = 2 pts
shower's end
a rainbow spot
on the street
RaV
(0,0,2) = 2 pts
Seventeenth Place -- 1 pt
three rainbows across the bow
my sweetheart asleep down below
should I wake him?
Yositaka
YES, WAKE HIM! How often does one get to see
triple rainbows in the sky?
three quarter
rainbow arches into
grand canyon
Jim Applegate
drop of rain
splatters the rainbow
a child’s lost painting
Mark Hollingsworth
after the storm
dirt road puddle
holds a muddy rainbow
April Serock
drizzly evening —
a colourful rainbow
across the sky
~ Walter Ochola
rainbow:
a red ribbon falls
from her hair
anonymous
The Gasoline
in the pothole
reflected rainbow colors
-Yoshi
Well, in Mankato,
Rainbow also tried a store.
It didn't make it.
Horst Ludwig
This only works in the context of this kukai.
Surrounded by well over a hundred mostly very earnest
rainbow ku, it's deadpan funny. And Mankato is somehow
the perfect setting. The whole thing sounds so, well,
Minnesotan.
hot afternoon rain —
rainbow curving across
the cloudy sky
~ Irene Muthengi
her two fingers
outside the plaster cast
"shoot" the rainbow
marlène buitelaar
cool morning —
I dig in the closet for
my rainbow jacket
Marylouise Knight
light afternoon showers —
the rainbow joins two
separate horizons
~ Walter Otieno
rainbows everywhere
even in my wet sink
first day of summer
anonymous
rainbow
topsy-turvy in the lake
I am surprised
radhey shiam
rainbow arcing
over the willow —
time for a smoke
-- LGD
Nice juxtaposition -- this haiku is far
from twee! I can see the reflective smoker,
enjoying the view while also enjoying the fag.
spindrift after spindrift
a bitter salt rainbow
bobs across the sky
anonymous
scribblers and new crayons
on the students’ desks
rainbow wallpaper
DeVar
Eighteenth Place -- no points this time, sorry!
Hiking up the North Face
into the rainbow eyes of morning
--Lorene
rain every day but
trees hide the bows
close green sky
assu
Lovers entwined
Sandy beach beneath
Double rainbow above
anonymous
like fame
there not there
-- rainbow
miriam chaikin
my lips stick
to her dimpled cheek
rainbow sherbet
Josh Wikoff
rainbow....
I close my eyes and imagine
the bluebirds fly
anonymous
a knock on the door-
the rainbow coalition
rep pays a visit
Glen Keener
your reflections
rainbow falls in candle light
sunflower bright
Ben Gieske
Rainbows shine true
like good friends
the search continues...
Joshua Borges
Rainbow in the sky
arch of Bifrost
polarized water
Ashi
garden hose spray
makes a fine rainbow —
ephemeral, too
P. O. Williams
thunder storm cedes
spanned in a silent cloudy sky
a rainbow
gillena
plays of rays —
the rainbow of the fountain
in the rainy rainbow
Jacek Kielich
rainbow
me and you connected
by colorful threads
Tanya Dikova
poor painter
on the fresh picture
faded rainbow
Norsto
rain slashes across
a beautiful rainbow —
evening sunshine
~ John Mwangi
smudge on my glasses
captures a ray of sunlight
grains of a rainbow
~ mechaieh
bright showery evening —
the sun shines across
the rainbowed sky
~ Jeniffer Mumbua
August rain —
a colourful rainbow curves
across the sky
~ Bilher Wanjiku
birds flying
high above the sky —
a rainbow
~ Samuel Ndung'u
silent rally
white balloons shroud the sky
rainbow banner
anonymous
compound word —
rain plus sunlight
equal rainbow?!
Daniela Bullas
Saratoga sunset —
She pulls a rainbow
from out of her box
Glenn Laundre
rain ends…
the glint
of a rainbow trout
Keiko Izawa
wonderful!
even shines in asphalt:
the rainbow
Jordi Climent
swelter —
a rainbow grows
in the car's leak
Agnes Eva Savich
summer afternoon —
embracing the sky from the east
a turn down rainbow
miorita
rainy afternoon —
curved colourful
rainbow
~ T.W.K
summer vacation —
the accidental rainbow
on the rainbow
Mike Montreuil
beautifully curved
colours across the sky —
the rainbow
~ Tomothy Wambua
a giant semi-circle
colouring the evening sky —
the rainbow
~ Raymond Otieno
such a dry month
today a storm front
rainbow in the east
Jeanne Jorgensen
Squawk of joy amongst
droplets and sunlight —
Rainbow preen
- Leena Halych
tumor markers drop
on leaden skies a rainbow
of possibility
Ruth Powell
midday shower —
double rainbow shimmers
in runoff
Hazel A. Witherspoon
rising rainbow — --
for the first time, a baby sits up
in his stroller
anonymous
General Comments:
Once again it's quite difficult to cut out haiku that I like.
Somehow I didn't respond to most of the rainbow poems--even mine
deserved only 4 or 5 points :)