November 2006 Kukai

Dear Haiku Friends,

Here are the results for the November 2006 Kukai, wherein our Kigo subject was "Autumn Light" and our Free Format subject was "Bedtime".

Congratulations to DeVar Dahl and Karen Briggs , the winners of our Kigo section and to Zhanna P. Rader, winner of our Free Format section!


The haiku are listed in order of total points received from voters. The numbers reflect the number of voters who gave the haiku either three points, two points, or one point -- followed by the total points for all votes.

Those who were given less than three points and who requested anonymity in such a case are so noted.


In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point points were cast for this poem by the other participating poets.

(214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.

November 2006 Results
Kigo Theme:
Autumn Light
Free Format Theme:
Bedtime

First Place -- 19 pts
autumn light--
the smell of tomato vines
on my fingers

DeVar
(2,4,5) = 19 pts

*Racing to beat the first frost, were we? A great image for gardeners.

taking a bow
in the late autumn light
sunflowers

Karen Briggs
(1,3,10) = 19 pts


Second Place -- 14 pts
autumn light --
the onyx heron
turn to amber

-- Karen Cesar
(0,5,4) = 14 pts

autumn light ...
squeak of an empty swing
in the breeze

Boris Nazansky
(0,4,6) = 14 pts


Third Place -- 11 pts
the hair
between the cat's toes
autumn light

---Autumn Moon
(1,2,4) = 11 pts

a dew drop
full
of autumn light

Helge Torvund
(1,1,6) = 11 pts


Fourth Place -- 10 pts
autumn light --
shadows reach new places
on the stream

Andria Plowman
(1,2,3) = 10 pts

autumn light –
the silence
of the moon

il.balan
(0,4,2) = 10 pts

autumn light . . .
polishing the brass
candlesticks

Susan Constable
(0,4,2) = 10 pts


Sixth Place -- 9 pts
autumn light--
the florist's window
flush with roses

aom (tim)
(1,2,2) = 9 pts

autumn light ~
silver
in my daughter's hair

Paul Hodder
(1,1,4) = 9 pts

a white sail
at the far shore
autumn light

Bill Kenney
(1,1,4) = 9 pts

the crease
when she smiles
autumn light

-Deborah P Kolodji
(0,3,3) = 9 pts


Seventh Place -- 8 pts
autumn light
redness of the bougainvilleas
softened

Bill Hudson
(1,1,3) = 8 pts

autumn light
shivering
in the sunshine

Shanna
(0,2,4) = 8 pts


Eighth Place -- 7 pts
autumn light --
i too grow dim
and wait for spring

miriam chaikin
(1,2,0) = 7 pts

autumn light
the red in her hair
electric

Meredith
(1,1,2) = 7 pts

autumn light--
in the spiders web
a moth's struggle

Gillena
(1,1,2) = 7 pts

autumn light -
white shows at the roots
of her auburn hair

Laurene
(1,1,2) = 7 pts

* I liked the way this poem connected the idea of a woman's auburn red hair turning white in the autumn of her life with snow and a pile of autumn leaves. It seemed very earthy and moving.

autumn light-
on bare corn fields
the cranes land

Leslie Montgomery
(1,0,4) = 7 pts

autumn light
fire cracking through
a pile of leaves

john tiong chunghoo
(0,3,1) = 7 pts

autumn light
the cobweb is still
colorless

Jul
(0,3,1) = 7 pts

autumn light -
entering the room
without knocking

max verhart
(0,2,3) = 7 pts

fading autumn light -
an egret stands one-legged
at the dark lake's edge

Johannes Manjrekar
(0,1,5) = 7 pts


Ninth Place -- 6 pts
autumn light –-
the rustle of leaves
ready to fall

Marylouise Knight
(1,0,3) = 6 pts

fading autumn light
walking in the tracks
of last week's hayride

April Serock
(1,0,3) = 6 pts

Autumn light --
yellow-leafed aspens
mirrored in the lake

Zhanna P. Rader
(1,0,3) = 6 pts

autumn light...
the backyard maple
as old as our child

Roberta Beary
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

the look
in father's cloudy eyes;
autumn light

--Irene Golas
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

autumn light:
face in shades of gold
as she brings the oil lamp

Kala Ramesh
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

naked trees beg
for a warm green blanket
autumn light

Nalini Hebbar
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

autumn light
slim shadows
stripe the plains

Terry Ingram
(0,1,4) = 6 pts


Tenth Place -- 5 pts
evening walk -
my grandmother's smile in
the autumn light

Jim Swift
(1,1,0) = 5 pts

Through the bare branches
pieces of starry sky-
autumn light

Don Basilio
(1,0,2) = 5 pts

late autumn light
through bare branches
the owl's hoot

Kate Creighton
(1,0,2) = 5 pts

dusk falls
we continue our picnic
under autumn light

Betty Kaplan
(0,2,1) = 5 pts

the gravedigger's
five o'clock shadow
autumn light

tom painting
(0,0,5) = 5 pts


Eleventh Place -- 4 pts
ripe autumn light
setting into the sea
silence of the soul

D.V. Rozic
(1,0,1) = 4 pts

Golden leaves,
silver-barked tree-
autumn light

Vasile Moldovan
(1,0,1) = 4 pts

autumn light
the dream between
a sleep and a sleep

Suzume
(0,2,0) = 4 pts

autumn light -
wave after wave crash
on the exposed reef

Bruce H. Feingold
(0,2,0) = 4 pts

taking a book
from a dusty shelf...
autumn light

Polona
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

autumn light
the frost kissed rose
still glows

Soji
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

autumn twilight -
the flash
of a snowbird's tail

Don Holt
(0,0,4) = 4 pts

autumn light -
is that ice
on the puddle?

--Aalix Roake
(0,0,4) = 4 pts


Twelfth Place -- 3 pts
Japanese maple
autumn light
dry leaves curl inward

yoshitaka
(1,0,0) = 3 pts

still forest pool
slowly darkening in the
fading autumn light

--Senile Butterfly
(1,0,0) = 3 pts

Only autumn light
lingers again on the leaves…
nobody on the bench

Magdalena Dale
(1,0,0) = 3 pts

Autumn light
shows through bare maples,
mottled birds.

Trevor CAMP
(1,0,0) = 3 pts

eyes looking upward
under yellow foliage
enjoying autumn light

emile molhuysen
(1,0,0) = 3 pts

autumn light—
a pelican dives
into the shallows

doris kasson
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

* pure picture, but the suggestions go on and on.

autumn light--
a squirrel selects from
the last apples

-- LGD
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

autumn light
the eyes of a doe shine
in my face

Darrell Byrd
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

autumn light
the homeless man wrapped
in spider silk

Petar Tchouhov
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

shards
of autumn light
puddle ice

Ann K. Schwader
(0,0,3) = 3 pts


First Place -- 30 pts
bedtime -
a yawn travels
around the room

Zhanna P. Rader
(1,9,9) = 30 pts


Second Place -- 17 pts
bedtime-
she asks if her doll can stay
awake a little longer

Kala Ramesh
(1,5,4) = 17 pts


Third Place -- 16 pts
bedtime:
even the moon snuggles
under a cloud

--Karen Cesar
(3,1,5) = 16 pts

bedtime . . .
a half-moon cradles
the crow's nest

sheila windsor
(1,5,3) = 16 pts

bedtime
the cat already sprawled
where my feet should go

Beverley George
(1,5,3) = 16 pts

bedtime
the book she knows
by heart

tom painting
(0,6,4) = 16 pts


Fourth Place -- 15 pts
bedtime
his hand
in mine

Roberta Beary
(0,5,5) = 15 pts


Fifth Place -- 14 pts
bedtime story
the last sentence
silently

Jul
(1,3,6) = 14 pts

* not the concept, as in most of the poems on this overworked subject, but the moment itself.


Sixth Place -- 11 pts
bedtime --
mosquitoes on the ceiling
waiting till I sleep

Cornelia
(2,1,3) = 11 pts

bedtime
the next chapter
by flashlight

-- ushi
(0,4,3) = 11 pts

bedtime ~
I sing a lullaby
down the phone

Paul Hodder
(0,3,5) = 11 pts


Seventh Place -- 10 pts
bedtime story -
the moon disappears
into a cloud

il.balan
(1,1,5) = 10 pts

bedtime --
the man in the mirror
wishes me goodnight

max verhart
(0,3,4) = 10 pts


Eighth Place -- 8 pts
bedtime...
flashlight monsters dance
on the bedroom wall

pris campbell
(1,1,3) = 8 pts

bedtime
my to-do list
mostly undone

Susan Constable
(0,3,2) = 8 pts


Ninth Place -- 7 pts
Icy bed:
moving the pillow
closer to hers

R.K.Singh
(1,2,0) = 7 pts

bedtime --
still repeating the speech
for tomorrow

Jure
(0,1,5) = 7 pts

bedtime
another night of romance
on television

Carmel Lively Westerman*
(0,1,5) = 7 pts

widowhood
dreading his empty space
at bedtime

Meredith
(0,2,3) = 7 pts


Tenth Place -- 6 pts
long past bedtime
the silence absorbs
a lone bird's call

Johannes Manjrekar
(1,1,1) = 6 pts

bedtime--
a lullaby
between storms

Darrell Lindsey
(1,1,1) = 6 pts

above my pillow
a spider on the wall --
bedtime

Marylouise Knight
(1,1,1) = 6 pts

bedtime
a cricket bounces
off the door

Martin
(1,0,3) = 6 pts

winter stars
this house only settles
at bedtime

Marie Summers
(1,0,3) = 6 pts

Thanksgiving night
the children wake grandpa
for a bedtime story

Soji
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

bedtime . . .
just a drop
in her cocoa

Ann K. Schwader
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

bedtime
two cats curl
between us

Beth Powell
(0,3,0) = 6 pts


Eleventh Place -- 5 pts
Love story
without end...
bedtime

Don Basilio
(1,1,0) = 5 pts

My old pillow
is alone again-
bedtime

Vasile Moldovan
(1,0,2) = 5 pts

bedtime
from behind the closed door
smothered giggles

doris kasson
(0,1,3) = 5 pts


Twelfth Place -- 4 pts
bedtime --
praying he did not forget
the puppy

ANA CADARIN
((0,2,0) = 4 pts

bedtime
for him and his
wooden legs

Dusko Matas
(0,2,0) = 4 pts

a long night --
the dead poets under
my bedside lamp

Tom
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

at bedtime
blown leaves tick
at the pane

Terry Ingram
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

bedtime...
and the aftertaste
of the late news

--Irene Golas
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

bedtime story ...
your moon
or mine?

Ella Wagemakers
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

bedtime story
father fell asleep
before the end

Maria Kowal
(0,1,2) = 4 pts


Thirteenth Place -- 3 pts
he reads
one more bedtime story
for the third time

Karen Briggs
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

Bedtime--
only a frantic fly
shares the room

Aalix Roake
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

bedtime --
jasmine over the window
more fragrant

Jacek
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

an empty bottle
and a nodding head . . .
bedtime

shane gilreath
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

leaping
into a pile of leaves --
Mom calls, "bedtime!"

-- LGD
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

midwatch coffee
the sound of a boatswains pipe
at bedtime

Darrell Byrd
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

Well, that was November's kukai and thanks not only to the poets who participated but to Nancy Smith, our guest secretary who did a wonderful job from start to finish! Thank you, Nancy!

Next month, please watch for the change in the length of time we will be accepting entries. It will be considerably shortened in order to have the kukai completed before Christmas.

Thanks again to you all!

With appreciation,

Nancy, Jennie and Robert -- co-secretaries
Gary Warner, web host

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