In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point votes were cast for this poem by the other participating poets.

(214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.

November 2002 Kukai Results
Kigo Theme: Deer
Free Format Theme: Hat (or type of hat)


First Place - 20 points

on spread legs
the deer is drinking
it's reflection

Emile Molhuysen
(246 = 20)



Second Place - 16 points

midsummer sunrise
deer tracks criss-cross
the daylily beds

Ellen Compton
(315 = 16)



Third Place -- 13 points

deer tracks -
imagining my garden
beneath the snow

Carol Raisfeld
(045 = 13)



Fourth Place -- 11 points

harvesting
the remaining spinach:
deer

Joe Kirschner
(043 = 11)



Fifth Place -- 10 points

harvest moon--
deer eat all the tops
off the carrot row

DeVar
(050 = 10)



Sixth Place -- 9 points

blue sky
the black eyes of a deer

martin
(033 = 9)

waiting for you-
the echo of deer hooves
along the creek bed

Earl Keener
(122 = 9)



Seventh Place -- 8 points

autumn sun rides through
on the backs of school children --
Nara Koen deer

Debra Woolard Bender
(202 = 8)

winter garden
the statue of a deer
stands watch

kathi rudawsky
(024 = 8)

light snow
frozen in my headlights
a startled deer

Gene Williamson
(113 = 8)



Eighth Place -- 7 points

dry spell -
in the hunter's backyard
deer tracks

aruna
(031 = 7)

crusty snow
a whitetail deer
eats dead leaves

Angèle Lux
(023 = 7)



Ninth Place -- 6 points

deer tracks
through the old-growth forest
echoes of birdsong

Billie Wilson
(006 = 6)

a lone raft
on an autumn lake
deer pause to listen

allen mcgill
(006 = 6)

snow tracks
from mailbox to creek
I follow the deer

Cindy Tebo
(112 = 6)

a gray morning
deer pass through
garden by garden

Joann
(111 = 6)

afternoon ginko
deer and I
rest in the clearing

Hazel
(111 = 6)



Tenth Place -- 5 points

deer trail ~
fallen pinon seeds
in the snow

Darrell Byrd
(013 = 5)

moonlit night
trailing a deer
in the snow

Patricia A. Laurent
(005 = 5)



Eleventh Place -- 4 points

the deer takes
a small step forward--
shutter click

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(004 = 4)

indian summer
deep in the forest
a deer's bedding

Janet Parker
(012 = 4)

stalker's aim
a leaf falls behind~
the deer

gillena cox
(012 = 4)

dusk
the elbow grease it takes
to get deer off headlights

gary steinberg
(012 =4)



Twelfth Place -- 3 points

spring snow ~
a deer antler etched
by mice

Peter
(011 = 3)

morning chill
a deer lies dead
at the roadside

Celia Crook
(011 = 3)

In the morning
deer tracks through dusted snow--
we heard nothing

L Papanicolaou
(011 = 3)



First Place -- 19 points

departing train--
flies swarm around
the tipped sombrero

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(245 = 19)



Second Place -- 15 points

village heat--
a donkey's ear twitches
out of its hat

martin
(144 = 15)



Third Place -- 12 points

canyon rim
raindrops fall from the brim
of my hat

Darrell Byrd
(125 = 12)



Fourth Place -- 11 points

graveside -
she hugs his fireman's hat
and the crying baby

Carol Raisfeld
(132 = 11)



Fifth Place -- 10 points

under
his hard hat
his bald head

Charles Trumbull
(115 = 10)

first snow day--
the garden buddha
wears a toque

DeVar
(212 = 10)



Sixth Place -- 9 points

lying trampled
after the loss -
a home team cap

aruna
(025 = 9)

a long winter--
remnants of a mouse nest
in my old cap

Billie Wilson
(114 = 9)

another season...
the rusted trout fly
on his hat

Earl Keener
(122 = 9)



Seventh Place -- 8 points

"Claire de Lune"
the subway busker's cap
begins to fill

Ellen Compton
(210 = 8)



Eighth Place -- 7 points

siesta time
under the sombrero
loud snores

peigi
(023 = 7)

men in black hats
stare at the sea
east wind

Joe Kirschner
(112 = 7)

holes in my scarf
like holes in my memory
approaching ninety

Edith Muta
(112 =7)



Ninth Place -- 6 points

few hairs poked out -
the old man wears
his cap backwards

Emile Molhuysen
(200 = 6)



Tenth Place -- 5 points

November morning
a blast of cold wind
snatches his hat

Janet Parker
(021 = 5) wicked wind
the old man's favorite hat
flipping out to sea

Gene Williamson
(013 = 5)

graduation gift
grandpa's old felt fishing hat
now his tackle box

Edward
(110 = 5)



Eleventh Place -- 4 points

Moscow winter
mens earflapped fur hats
doffed to babushkas

allen mcgill
(101 = 4)



Twelfth Place -- 3 points

mother's red hat
years of wanting
years of having

roberta beary
(011 = 3)

cloud floats
overtop the mountain--looking for
my winter hat

Meryl Duprey
(100 = 3)

Veteran's Day ~
helmet atop rifle
unknown solder

Peter
(011 = 3)

picking cherries -
a hat full and many more
in the grass

gillena cox
(011 = 3)

cowboy hat
bucked from the rider
one bald head

James M. Thompson
(011 = 3)

moving day
a blue hat on the porch
with leaves stuck to it

Cindy Tebo
(003 = 3)

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