May 2005 Kukai

The results of the voting have been tabulated and are listed below. Congratulations to Dave Bacharach, the winner of our Kigo section, and to Linda Chambers, the winner of our Free Format section!


In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point points were cast for this poem by the other participating poets.

(214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.

May 2005 Kukai Results
Kigo Theme: Robin
Free Format Theme: Water

First Place -- 25 Points
first robin--
a gift from
the cat

Dave Bacharach
(1,7,8) = 25 Points


Second Place -- 22 Points
first robins...
still no letter
from the front

Zhanna P. Rader
(1,6,7) = 22 Points


Third Place -- 17 Points
Mother's Day--
a bit of sky
in the robin's nest

George Hawkins
(2,2,7) = 17 Points

small town gossip--
a pair of robins fly
from tree to tree

DeVar
(0,6,5) = 17 Points

little league tryouts
a robin
in the outfield

Mark Hollingsworth
(0,3,11) = 17 Points


Fourth Place -- 15 Points
equinox
a robin bows
to a worm

Earl Keener
(1,5,2) = 15 Points

robin song
he wears a red vest
to the prom

Deborah P Kolodji
(1,3,6) = 15 Points


Fifth Place -- 11 Points
small hands
cradle a pine seedling --
robin's song

Laryalee Fraser
(1,1,6) = 11 Points

early spring
the robin carries
icy twigs

Owen Burkhart
(1,2,4) = 11 Points

school bell--
the robin's egg
safe in her palm

aom (tim)
(0,2,7) = 11 Points


Sixth Place -- 10 Points
robin song
the blush on a
baby's cheek

Allen McGill
(1,1,5) = 10 Points

early evening
the baby robins
still hungry

Edward
(0,1,8) = 10 Points


Seventh Place -- 9 Points
city cafe garden
a robin pecks at the joints
between bricks

Alan Summers
(0,3,3) = 9 Points

moonlit bough . . .
a robin's nest becomes
the dark

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(1,2,4) = 9 Points


Eighth Place -- 6 Points
fragrant breeze -
a robin vanishes
with a clear song

brahman~narayanan
(1,1,1) = 6 Points

cold breeze
a robin hops
between the blossoms

martin
(1,0,3) = 6 Points

thundershower
the robin wins a tug of war
with an earthworm

Linda Chambers
(1,0,3) = 6 Points

horn solo
an audience
of robins

Kate (Steere)
(0,1,4) = 6 Points

hopping robin -
an exuberant boy
on his pogo stick

Audrey Downey
(0,2,2) = 6 Points

first robin
the clatter of a smoky
lawn mower

Darrell Byrd
(0,1,4) = 6 Points


Ninth Place -- 5 Points
after the rain
a robin shakes
its wings

Zeta
(1,1,0) = 5 Points

twilight shadows
the pip-pip of robins
behind the house

Irene Golas
(1,1,0) = 5 Points

enraptured by its song
the robin doesn't notice
how close I am

Tomislav Maretic
(1,1,0) = 5 Points

morning light
on the robin's back
worm shadows

peigi
(0,2,1) = 5 Points

the third graders prayed
when their baby robin died -
I sprayed for bird lice

Bill Tallmadge
(0,2,1) = 5 Points

mountain calm
a bush robin
pads its hole

Paul Pfleuger, Jr.
(0,2,1) = 5 Points

the smell of mown grass--
a robin singing
his rain song

Paul O. Willliams
(0,1,3) = 5 Points

robin redbreast
a Christmas card
from home

ushi
(0,1,3) = 5 Points

after the rain -
robins listen for
the sound of worms

Jim Swift
(0,1,3) = 5 Points


Tenth Place -- 4 Points
a robin
listens - then flies off
the swing sways

Hugh
(0,2,0) = 4 Points

planting seeds . . .
the little robin hops
just a little ahead

kala ramesh
(0,0,4) = 4 Points

two robins
tug of war
the worm lost

Brenda Roberts
(0,0,4) = 4 Points

forest trail -
a robin keeps 10 feet
ahead of me

yasuko z
(0,0,4) = 4 Points


Eleventh Place -- 3 Points
stoic in hard rain
robin perches on boulder --
new garden statue

Sandy Friedlander
(1,0,0) = 3 Points

fussy wet
sparrows scatter
bathing robin

Ann K. Schwader
(1,0,0) = 3 Points

old graveyard:
robin hops between
pitching tombstones

Linda Marucci
(1,0,0) = 3 Points

a robin builds her nest
in the old apple tree --
an old swing rides the breeze

Janet Parker
(1,0,0) = 3 Points

robin hatchlings. . .
no worms left
for fishing

Marie Summers
(0,0,3) = 3 Points

leaving for work
a robin on the lawn
not moving

Bill Kenney
(0,0,3) = 3 Points


First Place -- 36 Points
still water
a dragonfly holds tightly to
it's reflection

Linda Chambers
(4,10,4) = 36 pts


Second Place -- 23 Points
watercolor class--
everyone starts
with blue

Ami
(0,4,15) = 23 pts


Third Place -- 21 Points
first hot day
the splat
of a water balloon

Ed Markowski
(0,7,7) = 21 pts


Fourth Place -- 15 Points
horizon
bit by bit the ship emerges
from the water

john tiong chunghoo
(0,5,5) = 15 pts


Fifth Place -- 14 Points
morning haze---
mayflies adrift
in the watering trough

Andrew Riutta
(1,3,5) = 14 pts


Sixth Place -- 13 Points
moonlight
on the lake water
a leaf falls

Patricia A. Laurent
(1,3,5) = 13 pts

hole-in-one
at the water wheel --
grandpa's grin

Laryalee Fraser
(1,1,8) = 13 pts


Seventh Place -- 12 Points
rushing water
up and down the canyon
rainbows

Edward
(1,2,5) = 12 pts

a water spaniel. . .
pulling his wake
through sunrise

Nancy Smith
(0,2,8) = 12 pts


Eighth Place -- 11 Points
lazy afternoon
a pond skater
dimples the water

Owen Burkhart
(1,0,8) = 11 pts

Easter Sunday
Father throws holy water
a little boy ducks.

Denise Lizarraga
(1,3,2) = 11 pts


Ninth Place -- 10 Points
filling the kettle—
the water's sound
deepens

Bill Kenney
(0,2,6) = 10 pts


Tenth Place -- 8 Points
naptime
I tiptoe from the crib
to water seedlings

Agnes Eva Savich
(0,2,6) = 8 pts

fishing season...
pulling water bottles
from the creek

Irene Golas
(0,1,6) = 8 pts


Eleventh Place -- 7 Points
beach sunset--
she admires the water
that ruined her home

bmm
(0,1,5) = 7 pts

wattle birds!
no need to water the herbs
around the birdbath

Lorin Ford
(0,3,1) = 7 pts

dry spell
naked boys take turns
at the water pump

Ito
(0,1,5) = 7 pts


Twelfth Place -- 6 Points
in deep water-
shouting their vows
over the thunder

Kate (Kate Steere)
(2,0,0) = 6 pts

rising water
the sun ripples
between the reeds

martin
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

writer's block
forgetting to water
the houseplants

riley penaluna
(1,0,3) = 6 pts


Thirteenth Place -- 5 Points
mirror water
at last a frog
breaks it

sheila windsor
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

spring swim--
water dripping off
the goosebumps

Dave Bacharach
(0,0,5) = 5 pts

kukai deadline...
the sound of water
keeps me awake

Earl Keener
(0,0,5) = 5 pts

sweaty socks--
creek water cools
my rubber boots

DeVar
(0,1,3) = 5 pts


Fourteenth Place -- 4 Points
symphony concert
his suit sprayed with water
from the fountain

Deborah P Kolodji
(0,1,3) = 4 pts

water's sound:
a loon becomes
cloud-whorls

George Hawkins
(0,0,4) = 4 pts

Old horologe-
a droplet of water
again and again

Vasile Moldovan
(0,2,0) = 4 pts

“water...”
his lips barely move -
a wounded soldier

Zhanna P. Rader
(0,2,0) = 4 pts

ALL ABOARD--
ripples in the water cooler

aom (tim)
(1,0,1) = 4 pts

sunday mass--
water collects
in the tent folds

Paul R
(0,1,2) = 4 pts


Fifteenth Place -- 3 Points
dripping stalactite
the cavern holds tribal water
unseen

-sakyu-
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

sunlight
seeping from the cliff
this water

Mark Hollingsworth
(1,0,0) = 3 pts

a head pops up
from still water
the seal and I stare

ushi
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

a dark well
disk of clouds and sky
floats on water

Terry Ingram
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

spring shower -
birdbath collects
fresh water

Audrey Downey
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

closing my eyes:
seagulls’ circling cries
above the water

Linda Marucci
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

leaking tap
drops of water
play with silence

Flatline
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

at the trailhead
this mystery --
water, ice, and mist

Mark Knickelbine
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

after the storm
water everywhere --
birds bathe in the puddles

Janet Parker
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

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