July 2006 Kukai

Dear haiku friends,

The results of the voting have been tabulated and are listed below. Congratulations to Laryalee Fraser , the winner of both our Kigo section and Free Format section!

Here are the results for the July 2006 Kukai, wherein our Kigo subject was "Watering the Lawn / Garden" and our Free Format subject was "Any Named Bird"

The haiku are listed in order of total points received from voters. The numbers reflect the number of voters who gave the haiku either three points, two points, or one point -- followed by the total points for all votes.

Those who were given less than three points and who requested anonymity in such a case are so noted.

The results of the voting have been tabulated and are listed below.


In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point points were cast for this poem by the other participating poets.

(214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.

July 2006 Results
Kigo Theme:
Watering the Lawn / Garden
Free Format Theme:
Any Named Bird

First Place -- 19 pts
mother-in-law...
he adjusts the sprinkler
for the fourth time

Laryalee Fraser
(3,3,4) = 19 pts


Second Place -- 18 pts
rooftop garden
she collects the rain
in saucepans

Tom Painting
(0,5,8) = 18pts

drought restrictions
a bowl of dishwater
for her begonias

-- ushi
(0,5,8) = 18pts


Third Place -- 17 pts
high tea . . .
a broken sprinkler
waters the sun

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(2,1,9) = 17 pts


Fourth Place -- 16 pts
drought
feral cats, licking
the seeper hose

Rose Marie Stutts
(1,3,7) = 16 pts


Fifth Place -- 14 pts
watering the garden
the scent of cilantro
and a different place

Mary Lee McClure
(0,4,6) = 14 pts

May deluge —
the forgotten sprinkler
joins in

Audrey Downey
(0,2,10) = 14 pts


Sixth Place -- 13 pts
landscaping laborers
a migrant drinks
from the water hose

carmel lively westerman
(1,2,6) = 13 pts


Seventh Place -- 12 pts
daddy's helper:
watering impatiens…
and her own shoes

Zhanna P. Rader
(0,3,6) = 12 pts


Eighth Place -- 11 pts
fading day
crickets echo
lawn sprinklers

RaV
(1,3,2) = 11 pts


Ninth Place -- 10 pts
water restrictions ~
the coiled hose
waits for dark

Paul Hodder
(1,1,5) = 10 pts

summer of Alzheimer's
grandmother's watering cans
filled with dust

Mark Smith
(0,3,4) = 10 pts


Tenth Place -- 9 pts
barefoot —
a maid waters
the roses

Ami
(0,2,5) = 9 pts

fading arc
of the sprinkler
summer dusk

Ann K. Schwader
(1,2,1) = 9 pts

water shortage
rustling garden whispers
grow louder

paula dee fisher
(0,4,1) = 9 pts

watering ban
sneaking a bucket or two
for the roses

--Irene Golas
(0,3,3) = 9 pts

lawn sprinkler —
children try to touch
the rainbow

Israel L๓pez Balan
(0,1,7) = 9 pts

watering the lawn —
where to scatter
her ashes

Nardin Gottfried
(1,2,2) = 9 pts

desert monsoon
under the downspout
a garbage can

Karen Cesar
(1,2,2) = 9 pts


Eleventh Place -- 8 pts
her first sip
from my garden hose
...step-child

roberta beary
(0,1,6) = 8 pts

the yard sprinkler
doesn't reach me here — except
this slight coolness

P. O. Williams
(1,1,3) = 8 pts


Twelfth Place -- 6 pts
shrill laughter
as the green hose dances
snake-like on the grass

Meredith
(0,3,0) = 6 pts

watering the lawn —
a butterfly's erratic flight
over a rainbow

Ang่le Lux
(1,0,3) = 6 pts

after the rain
over the secret garden
a drift of fireflies

angelee deodhar
(0,1,4) = 6 pts

water-wise
I xeriscape
but dream of lady's slipper

lmp
(1,1,1) = 6 pts

lawn sprinkler
a toad licks
a wet blade of grass

Edward
(0,1,4) = 6 pts

garden hose at rest
a coiled snake
in the rain

Simply Maire
(0,1,4) = 6 pts

in and out
of the sprinkler,
children's laughter

Darrell Lindsey
(1,1,1) = 6 pts

summer time
he waters the lawn
from his wheelchair

Vic Gendrano
(0,1,4) = 6 pts


Thirteenth Place -- 5 pts
high summer
the groundsman scatters sunlight
with his hose

Hugh Waterhouse
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

remembering
lost summer loves,
he overwaters the lawn

-- mike franco
( 0,1,3) = 5 pts

watering the garden —
a soaked cricket
jumps off

Tom
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

lawn sprinklers
crystal clear chirp
of a robin

john tiong chunghoo
(0,1,3) = 5 pts


Fourteenth Place -- 4 pts
water pulses
through the garden hose
sultry afternoon

Bill Kenney
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

the back lawn
watered...one boy wins
the contest

Vaughn Seward
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

straw hat shade ...
a rabbit noses
the garden spigot

usumomiji
(0,0,4) = 4 pts

after the sprinkling
spider shakes the drops
from its web

Origa
(0,0,4) = 4 pts

my two kids
watering the garden
and each other

max verhart
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

grandmother
watering the seedlings
she hums.

Zaida Lysle
(0,2,0) = 4 pts

jumping through the mist,
children find the rain bow's end:
pivoting sprinkler

Linda Warner
(0,2,0) = 4 pts


Fifteenth Place -- 3 pts
storm bent bamboo
drips rain under the eaves
watering the mint

gourdmad
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

a burst of laughter...
she turns on the water
as I move the sprinkler

Paul R
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

butterflies gather
after evening watering
to drink from puddles

-raven
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

visit over . . .
missing their laughter
around the sprinkler

Warren Gossett
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

wet dream
you cool off in the sprinkler's mist
wearing just a rainbow

Karen Briggs
(0,0,3) = 3 pts


First Place -- 21 pts
campfire chili
a loon's call stirs
the darkness

Laryalee Fraser
(3,4,4) = 21 pts


Second Place -- 17 pts
custody battle
two magpies squabble
over a french fry

Warren Gossett
(0,4,9) = 17 pts


Third Place -- 16 pts
between bait bucket
and fisherman
the egret's long neck

doris kasson
(2,4,2) = 16 pts


Fourth Place -- 15 pts
sudden downpour
huddled on the step
with a sparrow

Paul Hunter
(1,2,8) = 15 pts


Fifth Place -- 13 pts
silent pier
a gull's shadow
flowing

Darrell Lindsey
(1,2,6) = 13 pts

long before dawn
a cardinal calls the day
sweet sweet sweet

Mary Lee McClure
(1,1,8) = 13 pts


Sixth Place -- 12 pts
morning stillness —
a young kingfisher dives
into sunlight

Origa
(1,2,5) = 12 pts


Seventh Place -- 11 pts
pelicans drift
in the receding tide —
distant thunder

Bruce H. Feingold
(1,2,4) = 11 pts

a white heron
glides low over the swamp —
cypress shadows

Zhanna P. Rader
(0,2,7) = 11 pts


Eighth Place -- 10 pts
Fort Niagara
a wren sizes up
a knothole

Tom Painting
(1,3,1) = 10 pts

Grandma's room ~
geese migrate
across the window

Paul Hodder
(1,2,3) = 10 pts

spring calving —
more and more vultures
join the circle

Edward
(0,2,6) = 10 pts


Ninth Place -- 9 pts
sea and lavender skies
pelicans coasting
I dream of peace

elaine mokhtefi
(3,0,0) = 9 pts

early morning square
the stillness of the doves
Hiroshima Day

Keiko Izawa
(1,1,4) = 9 pts

moving day —
favorite pigeon on the kitchen ledge
one last time

~Devika
(0,3,3) = 9 pts

beak in the mud
butt in the air —
an elegant swan

-- Butterfly
(0,2,5) = 9 pts

looking over the side
the last fledgling
in the nest

-me
(0,2,5) = 9 pts

lunch break
seagulls on the roof
of the seafood restaurant

Marica Kolcheva
(0,2,5) = 9 pts

tough question
the same old fib
about the stork

RaV
(0,1,7) = 9 pts


Tenth Place -- 8 pts
drowsy day
even the hummingbird
asleep on a branch

Karen Cesar
(1,1,3) = 8 pts

park bench —
pigeons keep an
old man company

Tristan Coleridge
(0,2,4) = 8 pts


Eleventh Place -- 7 pts
amputated tree —
the crow atop what was once
his branch

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(1,1,2) = 7 pts

a heron
cleans its wings...
autumn shoreline

Edward Weiss
(1,0,4) = 7 pts

Sunday morning
a pigeon
on the mailbox

Petar Tchouhov
(0,1,5) = 7 pts

a caterpillar
hangs from its middle...
robin's beak

Vaughn Seward
(0,1,5) = 7 pts


Twelfth Place -- 6 pts
pompous pigeons coo
dropping whitewash
on the gargoyles

Simply Maire
(1,1,1) = 6 pts

hospital window
a seagull
riding an updraft

Bill Kenney
(1,0,3) = 6 pts

hammock siesta
the woodpecker hammers
an afternoon

Earl Keener
(0,3,0) = 6 pts

summer heat...
a wren sings
in the brambles

Hugh Waterhouse
(0,1,4) = 6 pts


Thirteenth Place -- 5 pts
dawn breaking...
a stray rooster on
top of the haystack

K. Ramesh
(1,0,2) = 5 pts

amid the rocks
of the jetty,
an absence of herons

~K~
(0,2,1) = 5 pts

mourning dove . . .
the monotony
of gone

Ann K. Schwader
(0,2,1) = 5 pts

frozen reservoir
a crow
blown by

Allan Burns
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

lengthening shadows
the circles of two buzzards
intersect

polona
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

cormorants
on islanded rocks
high tide

Deborah P Kolodji
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

morning moon
a single robin
on the wire

Marie Summers
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

thunder —
the one remaining crow
chuckles

Ami
(0,1,3) = 5 pts


Fourteenth Place -- 4 pts
age compensates
the lark sings less frequently
but now I listen.

Zaida Lysle
(1,0,1) = 4 pts

high above the sacred city
her eyes follow
the hummingbird

Janet Brof
(0,2,0) = 4 pts

light and shadow —
cattle egrets fly before
a thunderstorm

Nancy Smith
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

untended garden...
not hearing the robin
until it rains

--Irene Golas
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

thunderstorm:
finches take shelter
in the feeder

-- oino sakai
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

fragrant dusk
the dragonfly becomes
a hummingbird

Paul R
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

seagulls
in the parking lot
predicting a storm

smzang
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

Three crows strut
in the early mist.
You're not there.

Trevor Camp
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

all day long
sparrow couples
visiting my birdhouse

susan delphine delaney
(0,0,4) = 4 pts


Fifteenth Place -- 3 pts
flower fair —
looking up to the flight
of paper cranes

Ellen Compton
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

spring sun —
two male blackbirds fight
for my garden

max verhart
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

the lone goose
honks for her mate
hunters rejoice

Mr PC
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

pub lunch
by the Avon
swans beg for bread

-- ushi
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

Thanks for another good month of haiku and comments, it keeps the kukai vibrant. We will be posting the next Call for Submissions on or about the first Monday of August. We look forward to hearing from you!

Robert and Jennie, co-secretaries
Gary Warner, web host

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