July 2005 Kukai

The results of the voting have been tabulated and are listed below. Congratulations to Owen Burkhart, the winner of our Kigo section, and to Irene Golas, the winner of our Free Format section!


In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point points were cast for this poem by the other participating poets.

(214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.

July 2005 Kukai Results
Kigo Theme: Heron
Free Format Theme: Eating Out / Takeout

First Place -- 26 Points
origami class
a purple heron nests
on every desk

Owen Burkhart
(4,4,6) = 26 pts


Second Place -- 24 pts
highway rest stop--
a heron stretches
its neck

Laryalee Fraser
(2,5,8) = 24 pts


Third Place -- 19 pts
red tide--
a lone heron circles
the lighthouse

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(2,2,9) = 19 pts


Fourth Place -- 18 pts
morning breeze
the heron's shadow curves
in the reeds

Martin
(0,6,6) = 18 pts


Fifth Place -- 16 pts
setting sun--
the heron's silhouette
outlined in red

Zhanna P. Rader
(0,5,6) = 16 pts


Sixth Place -- 11 pts
a fish in the shade
of a heron's outspread wing--
summer is over

William M. Gottlieb
(1,3,2) = 11 pts


Seventh Place -- 10 pts
paper lanterns...
white herons settle
over pampas grass

Earl Keener
(1,2,3) = 10 pts

sundown--
the blue heron
gulps a frog

Dave Bacharach
(1,3,4) = 10 pts

a heron's eye--
the branch with a lizard
now bare

Francis Masat
(0,3,4) = 10 pts


Eighth Place -- 9 pts
night heron--
a singing frog
silenced

lorin ford
(0,2,5) = 9 pts


Ninth Place -- 7 pts
afternoon--
goldfish
in the heron's shadow

aom (tim)
(1,2,0) = 7 pts

stillness
till the heron's S
strikes

Flatline
(0,1,5) = 7 pts

a flock of heron
around the bend
I quiet my oars

Agnes Eva Savich
(0,1,5) = 7 pts

first time on the river...
i fish the spot
the heron fished

ed markowski
(0,1,5) = 7 pts


Tenth Place -- 6 pts
summer clouds
a heron sifts through
white pebbles

Abigail
(1,1,1) = 6 pts

heron in the pond
and its reflection joined
by the same leg

Tomislav Maretic
(0,1,4) = 6 pts


Eleventh Place -- 5 pts
twilight river bank--
a blue heron fishes
while I fry my catch

john daleiden
(0,2,1) = 5 pts

weedy pond:
a heron and I
out fishing

--oino sakai
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

deep ocean fog
the dark heron emerges
and disappears

---Bruce Ross
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

flying up
the many shapes
of the heron

max verhart
(0,1,3) = 5 pts


Twelfth Place -- 4 pts
strong current
the heron's nest
cradled on a buoy

Marie Summers
(1,0,1) = 4 pts

heron plume
a wispy cloud drifts
past the bayou

Allen McGill
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

fishing nets . . .
heron's wings dip and rise
a slow deep beat

Kala Ramesh
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

wind in the swamp--
the only still thing
the old blue heron

Paul O. Williams
(0,0,4) = 4 pts

low tide
blue heron and i
wade in

roberta beary
(0,0,4) = 4 pts


Thirteenth Place -- 3 pts
amongst lilies
a heron's curved neck
our feet in mud

--ushi
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

river boat trip
the horn sounds before the bend
blue heron flies

Meredith
(1,0,0) = 3 pts

between reeds
the neck of a heron...
daylight ebbs

Scott Mason
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

blue heron fledgling
nothing in the rookery
but feathers

Deborah P Kolodji
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

canoes drift by
a blue heron
in the cattails

Carmel Lively Westerman
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

great blue heron
looking for its reflection
in alfalfa

Mark Hollingsworth
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

afternoon wind
dragonflies notice even
the heron's stillness

Edward
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

water over stones
under sycamore branches
around heron stalks

Gourdmad
(1,0,0) = 3 pts

screeching in twilight
a heron on a streetlight
driving the cat away

Cornelia
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

heron
sunning himself
on top of the boat

Patricia A. Laurent
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

grandpa's fishing pole
casting shadows in the reeds
the great blue heron

Paul R
(0,1,1) = 3 pts


First Place -- 19 pts
Mother's Day:
my son serves the takeout
on china

Irene Golas
(1,4,8) = 19 pts


Second Place -- 16 pts
restaurant chatter--
a child grins through
the goldfish

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(2,3,4) = 16 pts

sidewalk café
the mosquito's dinner
is free

Owen Burkhart
(0,5,6) = 16 pts


Third Place -- 15 pts
pizza delivery--
opening the door
to Orion

Scott Mason
(1,2,8) = 15 pts

Chinese takeout--
once again she prefers
my order

Dave Bacharach
(0,4,7) = 15 pts


Fourth Place -- 13 pts
custody night
standing in line
for takeout

roberta beary
(0,3,7) = 13 pts


Fifth Place -- 12 pts
cute waitress
again i empty
my cup

riley penaluna
(0,3,6) = 12 pts


Sixth Place -- 11 pts
outside the restaurant
a stray dog sniffs
my doggy bag

Petar Tchouhov
(0,1,9) = 11 pts


Seventh Place -- 9 pts
unbuttoning my pants--
the waitress asks,
"dessert?"

shane gilreath
(1,2,2) = 9 pts


Eighth Place -- 8 pts
drive-thru
short line
long wait

Linda Warner
(1,1,3) = 8 pts

stars
on the night's platter
. . . . dining out

Kala Ramesh
(1,1,3) = 8 pts


Ninth Place -- 7 pts
fast food restaurant:
two orders of hasty pudding
to go

Nancy Smith
(2,0,1) = 7 pts

tides out --
the line at the hot dog stand
lengthens

Carmen Sterba
(0,1,5) = 7 pts


Tenth Place -- 6 pts
fries with that
moon-viewing burger?
Tokyo night

lorin ford
(1,1,1) = 6 pts

carryout menu
waiters doze at the
empty tables

Allen McGill
(0,2,4) = 6 pts

mommies' night out
I carefully unswaddle
the cutlery

Agnes Eva Savich
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

table for one
I hesitate
at the last prawn

Mark Hollingsworth
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

pizza delivery--
tomato sauce all over
my keyboard

Zhanna P. Rader
(0,1,4) = 6 pts


Eleventh Place -- 5 pts
our children's food
on the floor...
famine in Africa

Rose Marie Stutts
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

dinner for two. . .
the romantic mood broken
by birthday clapping

Marie Summers
(0,0,5) = 5 pts

sushi takeout--
three in line wear
Japanese sandals

Audrey Downey
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

New Year's Eve
a fish tank shrimp
looks around

Bruce Ross
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

rooftop restaurant--
he fingers the new ring
in his pocket

Laryalee Fraser
(0,0,5) = 5 pts

drive-thru--
the intercom asks if I'd like
some igitly-botch

Earl Keener
(0,1,3) = 5 pts


Twelfth Place -- 4 pts
in the morning--
Drake Diner dumpster crows
wait for take out

john daleiden
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

Key West café
a rainbow of colors
on the waiter's arm

Edward
(1,0,1) = 4 pts

full moon--
eating an ordered pizza
on the balcony

Cornelia
(1,0,1) = 4 pts

pizza!
the family portrait
by the front door

Ami
(0,0,4) = 4 pts


Thirteenth Place -- 3 pts
wolf's howl
the sound of meat
in the camp fire

Martin
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

friday party
the pizza face
multiplies

Flatline
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

greeting at the door:
just Chinese takeout
and a smile

oino sakai
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

smorgasbord outdoors--
even the sparrows
wait their turn

Tomislav Maretic
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

Thank you for your participation and willingness to share your work. We hope that no matter how your entry fared this time, you will continue to participate. And we look forward to seeing additional poets in future kukai as well.

Robert and Jennie, co-secretaries
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