In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point votes were cast for this poem by the other participating poets. (214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.

July 2003 Kukai Results
Kigo Theme: Ant
Free Format Theme: Music

First Place - 18 points
in the throat
of a white blossom
busy black ants

gillena cox
(0-6-6 = 18)


Second Place - 16 points
the sun is setting -
even an ant on the wall
has a long shadow

Tomislav Maretic
(0-5-6 = 16)


Third Place - 12 points
new job--
an ant visits
on coffee break

Stephen Amor
(2-1-4 = 12)


Fourth Place - 11 points
long day
a trail of ants
into tall grass

w.f. owen
(1-2-4 = 11)


Fifth Place - 10 points
evening stroll
we step across
the ant parade

OwenB
(0-3-4 = 10)

in the tool box
looking for a way out
carpenter ants

peigi
(0-3-4 = 10)

yard work -
an ant lurches past
carrying a leaf

Carole MacRury
(0-3-4 = 10)


Sixth Place - 9 points
a line of ants
threading themselves
through shadows

r. wilson
(1-2-2 = 9)

wood ant
the toddler
strokes it flat

ushi
(2-1-1 = 9)

six ants
come out of his laptop -
summer school

Deborah P Kolodji
(0-3-3 = 9)

paper boats
the black ant clings
to its matchstick

Johannes Manjrekar
(1-3-0 = 9)


Seventh Place - 7 points
circle of giggles ~
guessing which ant will carry
the largest bread crumb

deborah russell
(0-2-3 = 7)

Buddha's thoughts--
a column of ants in the
furrow of his brow

Mike
(1-1-2 = 7)

recycling center -
a thousand ants
on a pepsi can

Earl Keener
(0-1-5 = 7)


Eight Place - 6 points
old sidewalk
ants cover a ball
of ice cream

martin
(0-2-2 = 6)

cool grass
a red ant crawling
between each toe

oino sakai
(1-0-3 = 6)

blood test -
red ants invade
the broken tile

roberta beary
(1-1-1 = 6)

picnic blanket
the toddler's stomp
misses all the ants

DeVar
(0-1-4 = 6)


Ninth Place - 5 points
little brother
tries out my glasses --
ant burning !

jane burton
(0-2-1 = 5)

traffic jam
an ant crawls
up my leg

Tore Sverredal
(0-1-3 = 5)

hidden park
ants find the picnic
in the woods

Patricia A. Laurent
(0-1-3 = 5)

the peony,
must not be ticklish --
all those ants

Zhanna P. Rader
(1-0-2 = 5)


Tenth Place - 4 points
feeding ants-
Lord Buddha accepts
my offering

Robert John Mestre
(0-2-0 = 4)

summer cabin
replace the old
ant traps

Audrey Downey
(0-0-4 = 4)

on the table
a vase of peonies
and tenant ants

zeyda
(0-0-4 = 4)


Eleventh Place - 3 points
garden hose
ants stream the other way
above the flood

mark e
(0-0-3 = 3)

out of the ground
another grain of sand
dropped by an ant

Peter H. Pache
(0-1-1 = 3)

the feet of a tree
ants are creeping between roots
on a summer day

Cornelia
(0-0-3 = 3)

city sidewalk
ants surround a fugitive
chocolate melt

Darrell Byrd
(0-0-3 = 3)

a new puppy
digs up the
anthills

Carmel C. Lively
(1-0-0 = 3)

ants march one by one
feasting on picnic delights
a summertime feast

Judi Honiker
(0-1-1 = 3)

a picnic table
long trails of ants collect
the left overs

late bloomer
(0-1-1 = 3)

clover-filled flower pot ...
in and out
ants

Keith Tobin
(0-1-1 = 3)

midday sun
on the concrete sidewalk
two ants

Horst Ludwig
(0-0-3 = 3)


First place - 19 votes
open windows
a lullaby sung
in Cantonese

ushi
(3-2-6 = 19)


Second place - 16 votes
summer music --
pebbles being carried
in and out with the tide

Rosa Velt
(2-3-4 = 16)


Third place - 12 votes
empty bandstand
the sounds of crows rise
to the treetops

martin
(1-2-5 = 12)

heatwave
the painful sound
of violin practice

celia crook
(1-1-7 = 12)


Fourth place - 10 votes
clink of coins
the same few notes
from the blind boy's flute

Johannes Manjrekar
(1-2-3 = 10)


Fifth place - 9 votes
summertime blues
small fingers tap rhythms
of falling rain

deborah russell
(0-2-5 = 9)

Wind guiding one chime
gently into another -
Eclipse of the moon.

Kareeda
(0-2-5 = 9)


Sixth place - 8 votes
summer dusk -
two guitars seek each other
in clear tones

Tomislav Maretic
(1-1-3 = 8)

a falling drop
out of the bamboo flute
circles in the pond

emile molhuysen
(1-1-3 = 8)

flute song--
the woodpecker changes
its tempo

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(0-3-2 = 8)

summer sunset
falls on a blue note --
park jazz

Ann K. Schwader
(0-2-4 = 8)


Seventh place - 7 votes
drips in the bowl
an octave higher . . .
steady rain

jane burton
(1-0-4 = 7)

hungry
drumming on the table
boy's camp

sakyu
(0-2-3 = 7)

evening's close--
the plucked pangs
of a koto

Mark E. Smith
(0-2-3 = 7)

candles snuffed--
plainsong in the voice
of a mockingbird

Ellen Compton
(0-2-3 = 7)


Eight place - 6 votes
afterwards
the sounds of violins
continued in my mind

N. Beck
(0-1-4 = 6)

cell phone
plays Ode to Joy
class dismissed

oino sakai
(1-1-1 = 6)

concert in the park--
canvas sneakers
soak up the dew

DeVar
(1-1-1 = 6)


Ninth place - 5 votes
whistling flute
sea breeze
through the beach grass

Audrey Downey
(0-2-1 = 5)

la la... la la... la
that tune that goes on and on
all day long

Betty
(0-1-3 = 5)

beer party
her eyes connect with the
saxophone player

Carmel C. Lively
(0-1-3 = 5)

birds chirrup dripping
through the leafy silence
before the sunrise

Ruzica Mokos
(0-2-1 = 5)


Tenth place - 4 votes
straining his ears
for the right notes
the tuner talks about weather

john tiong chunghoo
(0-1-2 = 4)

dimmed hibachi
the faint tune from a koto
somewhere . . . .

Darrell Byrd
(0-1-2 = 4)

empty park;
on a stiff Northern wind
a flute solo

Keith Tobin
(0-2-0 = 4)

harvest festival--
the silent moon above
the taiko drummers

Earl Keener
(0-2-0 = 4)


Eleventh place - 3 votes
oh, stick bug -
I hear the piccolo
in your body

Carole MacRury
(0-1-1 = 3)

playing flute...
ants march through the window
to my kitchen sink

Zhanna P. Rader
(0-1-1 = 3)

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