January 2005 Kukai

The results of the voting have been tabulated and are listed below. Congratulations to bmm, the winner of our Kigo section, and to Ron Moss, the winner of our Free Format section!


In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point points were cast for this poem by the other participating poets.

(214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.

January 2005 Kukai Results
Kigo Theme: Celestial Bodies
Free Format Theme: Coffee

First Place -- 36 Points

glassy lake
a sudden icy wind
wrinkles the stars

bmm
(4,7,10) = 36


Second Place -- 19 Points

nightfall
a firefly blinks its way
toward Mars

Ed Markowski
(0,4,11) = 19


Third Place -- 15 Points

polaris--
a north wind levels
the chimney smoke

DeVar
(1,2,8) = 15


Fourth Place -- 13 Points

cloudless night…
a plane flies into
the Big Dipper

Marie Summers
(0,3,7) = 13

a cat prowls
the midnight fence
milky way

Allen McGill
(0,2,9) = 13

cold harbor . . .
the blind girl's hand
twirls a star

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(1,4,2) = 13

long journey--
a distant star becomes
a porch light

Earl Keener
(1,3,4) = 13

midnight mass
Orion rises low
over the fields

Agnes Eva Savich
(0,5,3) = 13


Fifth Place -- 10 Points

celestial map
she finds a planet
with her name

Carmel C. Lively
(1,1,5) = 10


Sixth Place -- 9 Points

summer night--
Sagittarius fires
a shooting star

Tristan Coleridge
(1,0,6) = 9

fast moving comet
a cluster of aid workers
eyes the dark sea

Angèle Lux
(1,1,4) = 9


Seventh Place -- 8 Points

star glow -
a pitched tent
on the ridge

ron moss
(0,4,0) = 8

cloudless sky
walking home
down the Milky Way

Flatline
(0,3,2) = 8


Eighth Place -- 7 Points

midnight pleasure
viewing Orion with
her naked eye

Carol Raisfeld
(0,2,3) = 7

star chart
my son finds
the little dipper

Meredith
(0,3,1) = 7


Ninth Place -- 6 Points

a frog croak -
galaxies inside and
outside the lake

brahman~narayanan
(0,1,4) = 6

housebond and waiting
for winter's end--
Canis Major

susan bond
(0,2,2) = 6

spaceship on Titan
my sons crash-land
after school

Deborah P Kolodji
(0,1,4) = 6


Tenth Place -- 5 Points

the north star
through dotted lace curtains--
her son's birthday

Laryalee Fraser
(0,1,3) = 5

In the dead of night
a sleepless puppy barking
towards The Great Dog

Vasile Moldovan
(0,1,3) = 5

new zealand -
one curled frond encircles
saturn

Kathy Earsman
(1,1,0) = 5

Christmas Eve--
through the shepherd's crook
the Star of David

Nancy Smith
(1,0,2) = 5

that evening
during a romantic walk
a clear Venus

Cornelia
(1,0,2) = 5

wrapped in a blanket
in the gently rocking boat--
Orion sparkles

Raven
(1,0,2) = 5

big talker
he woos her with his tall tales
under Taurus

Linda Warner
(0,0,5) = 5


Eleventh Place -- 4 Points

marriage date
the astrologer checks
their stars

john tiong chunghoo
(0,1,2) = 4

more war dead…
over the tv tower
orion

roberta beary
(0,0,4) = 4

Almost dawn--
a bright meteor flashes
into a summer sea

Zhanna P. Rader
(0,0,4) = 4


Twelfth Place -- 3 Points

at each window
looking for winter stars
abandoned hut

Israel Lopez Balan
(0,1,1) = 3

airplane light
blinking
eyes of the Twins

Mark Hollingsworth
(0,0,3) = 3

celestial map
with Orion missing
jigsaw puzzle

Origa
(1,0,0) = 3

a view of Mars
until it turned on
its landing lights

Owen Burkhart
(0,1,1) = 3

winter night hunt
Orion and wolf howls
prowl the sky

Edward
(0,0,3) = 3

shorter nights
Mars and Jupiter
aligned

teri
(0,0,3) = 3

shooting star!
make a wish
too late

lucindab
(0,0,3) = 3


First Place -- 35 Points

autumn wake--
the widow's tremor
in her coffee

Ron Moss
(4,5,13) = 35


Second Place -- 26 Points

talking divorce
he pours his coffee
then mine

roberta beary
(1,8,7) = 26


Third Place -- 14 Points

morning rain. . .
aftershocks
in my coffee

Marie Summers
(0,3,8) = 14

scent of coffee…
my cat opens
one eye

Marili Deandrea
(2,0,8) = 14


Fourth Place -- 13 Points

coffee stains
on a paper napkin--
her goodbye note

Darrell Byrd
(0,4,5) = 13


Fifth Place -- 12 Points

winter night storm--
the coffee grows colder
chapter by chapter

Edward
(0,3,6) = 12


Sixth Place -- 11 Points

grandpa's coffee rings
with a yellow marker
she makes smiley faces

pamela molhuysen
(0,3,5) = 11


Seventh Place -- 10 Points

writer's block--
stale coffee
and cigarettes

Tristan Coleridge
(1,2,3) = 10

old love letter--
how this coffee steam
blurs my vision

susan bond
(1,1,5) = 10


Eighth Place -- 8 Points

sunrise coffee--
horses graze the meadow
dusted with frost

bmm
(0,3,2) = 8

cold morning walk
steam from coffee cup
fogs my glasses

Terry Ingram
(0,3,2) = 8

melancholy morning
black coffee engulfs
a pour of cream

Agnes Eva Savich
(0,2,4) = 8


Ninth Place -- 7 Points

blind date
each eyes the other
over coffee

ushi
(1,0,4) = 7

night classes:
the professor first in line
at the coffee machine

oino sakai
(0,1,5) = 7

black coffee
darker than the nights
without you

Vic Gendrano
(1,0,4) = 7


Tenth Place -- 6 Points

new year's eve
waitress pours coffee
in my tea cup

Audrey Downey
(0,1,4) = 6

the phone still silent…
she scatters coffee grounds
by the rose bush

Laryalee Fraser
(0,1,4) = 6

wood stove--
the enamel coffee pot
heavier each day

Owen Burkhart
(1,0,3) = 6

family news
the new bride
refuses coffee

Kylie Hooklyn
(0,0,6) = 6

my manuscript back,
a coffee ring on page two--
someone got that far

Paul O. Williams
(0,0,6) = 6

coffee aroma-
morning birds drift in
spring breeze

brahman~narayanan
(0,2,2) = 6


Eleventh Place -- 5 Points

dark coffee bar
the moth-eaten deer head
misses a glass eye

Angèle Lux
(0,1,3) = 5

morning coffee
the night lights up
with each sip

Grzegorz Sionkowski
(0,0,5) = 5

skylight rain . . .
a morning of coffee clouds
and your silence

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(0,2,1) = 5

five day forecast--
the weatherman grips
his coffee mug

jt
(0,1,3) = 5

new widower
looking for a coffee cup,
only his wife's is clean

Zhanna P. Rader
(0,0,5) = 5


Twelfth Place -- 4 Points

empty office
still in the air
smell of coffee

Israel Lopez Balan
(0,1,2) = 4

after your news
a second coffee
…a third

Irene Golas
(0,0,4) = 4

coffee break--
ants mountain climbing
among sugar cubes

Nancy Smith
(0,1,2) = 4

alien cultures
worlds bizarre and wonderful
god i miss coffee

eric marin
(1,0,1) = 4

sudden change--
the coffee we shared
frozen to the cup

Earl Keener
(0,1,2) = 4


Thirteenth Place -- 3 Points

sound of coffee poured--
tinging of the stirring spoon-
swirling mist above

Linda Warner
(1,0,0) = 3

winter bus stop
twilight floats
in the coffee cup

martin
(0,1,1) = 3

early morning--
waking to the smell of coffee
I make green tea

Origa
(0,0,3) = 3

back from vacation--
the grey-bearded coffee grounds
left in the pot

Glen Keener
(0,0,3) = 3

Alone at morning
grasp dark bitter company--
warmth in a cup.

Sandra Lee Friedlander
(1,0,0) = 3

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