December 2005 Kukai

The results of the voting have been tabulated and are listed below. Congratulations to j. blain, the winner of our Kigo section, and to Irene Golas, the winner of our Free Format section!


In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point points were cast for this poem by the other participating poets.

(214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.

December 2005 Kukai Results
Kigo Theme: Midwinter
Free Format Theme: Shasei

First Place -- 22 pts
quiet evening
the weight of snow
before the snow

j. blain
(2,5,6) = 22 pts


Second Place -- 17 pts
snowy night
a passing train tunnels
into silence

Laryalee Fraser
(0,5,7) = 17 pts


Third Place -- 15 pts
shooting stars--
we flick our ashes
into snow

Earl Keener
(0,5,5) = 15 pts


Fourth Place -- 14 pts
dawning --
a squirrel robs the snowman
of his hazel-nut buttons

Zhanna P. Rader
(2,2,4) = 14 pts


Fifth Place – 12 pts
first snow--
she powders her face
in the morning mirror

Audrey Downey
(1,3,3) = 12 pts


Fifth Place -- 11 pts
starless night--
the Christmas tree
at my neighbor's home

Israel López Balan
(0,2,7) = 11 pts

first snow
halfway across the porch
the cat turns around

Edward Dallas
(0,1,9) = 11 pts


Sixth Place -- 10 pts
fresh snowfall
the dog follows
in the boys footprints

Carmel Lively Westerman
(1,2,3) = 10 pts

cancer ward
a little girl hugs her
stuffed snowman

Dave Bacharach
(1,1,5) = 10 pts

snowy day
with each step his sneakers
blink on blink off

Peggy Heinrich
(0,3,4) == 10 pts

winter solstice--
the sun warms a spot
on the hardwood floor

DeVar
(0,2,6) = 10 pts


Seventh Place -- 9 pts
furtively grazing
the winter pastures--
shreds of haze

max verhart
(1,1,4) = 9 pts

winter fog--
the path toward home
becomes clear

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(1,1,4) = 9 pts

first snow
morning papers' skid marks
on the driveway

Richmond Williams
(0,3,3) = 9 pts

long night moon
one more load of wood
before dark

Ann K. Schwader
(0,1,7) = 9 pts


Eighth Place -- 8 pts
first snow
a white mound
in my parking place

--oino sakai
(0,2,4) = 8 pts

cold day
between the graves
a snowman

Petar Tchouhov
(0,2,4) = 8 pts


Ninth Place -- 7 pts
moon shadows
a rabbit emerges
from the snowman's top hat

ed markowski
(1,1,2) = 7 pts

gently covering the
curves of her body
snow

Bill Hudson
(1,1,2) = 7 pts

first frost
a butterfly
on the steamy bus pane

RaV (Flatline)
(0,1,5) = 7 pts


Tenth Place -- 6 points
season of lights. . .
blue spruce scents
the stillness

Nancy Smith
(1,1,1) = 6 pts

December
The sound of rain
Through the air conditioner

martin
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

frozen ruts
in the old dirt road
first snow

Bruce Ross
(0,1,4) = 6 pts


Eleventh Place -- 5 pts
drifting snow
the scent of roses
long forgotten

Linda M. Chambers
(1,0,2) = 5 pts

countless stars--
a snowflake lets go
of the bamboo rake

Andrew Riutta
(0,2,1) = 5 pts

dark lake
slow fish--
scales of ice

Ginka Biliarska
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

dead of winter --
graveyard holly
teems with robins

--dah
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

shadows
on the snow...
juncos too

Ami
(1,0,2) = 5 pts


Twelfth Place -- 4 pts
desert heat
borne to me
winter wind

peter
(0,2,0) = 4 pts

winter stillness...
steady in the sky
a distant ferris wheel

Keiko Izawa
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

carrying
out cookie crumbs
ant parade

doris kasson
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

longest night--
more time now
for counting stars

Barbara Campitelli
(0,0,4) = 4 pts


Thirteenth Place -- 3 pts
Auld Lang Syne
this year's bells ring out
over last year's snow

angelee deodhar
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

sandhill crane's
cries and sunrise
lost in low fog

Jim Applegate
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

snow flurries--
a far off freight train
splits the sky

ron moss
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

under all that snow --
a snowman
sleeping

--Irene Golas
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

icy wind
tears rolls down
each cheek

Allen McGill
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

snowy park
a squirrel jumps
in total silence

Origa
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

passing quarters
to a stranger--
one breath cloud

aom (tim)
(0,1,1) = 3 pts


First Place -- 23 pts
farmer's market --
the sour old woman
selling honey

--Irene Golas
(1,6,8) = 23 pts


Second Place -- 21 pts
blueberries --
my children compare their tongues
in the mirror

Zhanna P. Rader
(1,5,8) = 21 pts


Third Place -- 15 pts
on the last page
of the calendar, a cat
looking back

Keiko Izawa
(2,1,7) = 15 pts

icy windshield
a Santa scrapes off
the parking ticket

Dave
(1,1,10) = 15 pts


Fourth Place -- 12 pts
unemployed--
same place as yesterday
that frozen tumbleweed

Andrew Riutta
(1,2,5) = 12 pts


Fifth Place -- 11 pts
white dogwood--
a withered black man
tunes his guitar

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(0,3,5) = 11 pts


Sixth Place -- 9 pts
December rain
buzzards drip
from the water tower

martin
(0,4,1) = 9 pts

darkening sky
a loon's wail bounces
off the pilings

Laryalee Fraser
(0,3,3) = 9 pts

clearest night
venus rests in the arms
of a sequoia

Denise Lizarraga
(0,2,7) = 9 pts


Seventh Place -- 8 pts
about to snow -
all the color
on the woodpecker's head

-dah
(1,1,3) = 8 pts

moon!
shadows of trees
prostrate

Bill Gottlieb
(0,3,2) = 8 pts

stone shadows--
only the sun
seems to move

Israel López Balan
(0,2,4) = 8 pts


Eighth Place -- 7 pts
Ripening fruit
Haiku
Pulled at author's request

frosty morning ...
the dead cat's paw
reaching to the sun

Gabriel Rosenstock
(0,2,3) = 7 pts

bird nests
among bare branches
white sky

- riley penaluna
(0,1,5) = 7 pts


Ninth Place -- 6 pts
mountain snow
becomes the horizon
winter haze

Ann K. Schwader
(0,2,2) = 6 pts

mid-December--
two deer disappear
into twilight

Marjorie Buettner
(0,0,6) = 6 pts


Tenth Place -- 5 pts
the screech
of a rusty gate hinge
wind gust

Allen McGill
(0,2,1) = 5 pts

December--
paper snow flakes
decorate school windows

Audrey Downey
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

from your white breath
the Chinese word
for this height

Paul Pfleuger, Jr.
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

brittle leaves...
the wild roses
have caught them

Ami
(0,1,3) = 5 pts

tall evergreen
atop a fast-moving car
bound for Christmas

Peggy Heinrich
(0,0,5) = 5 pts


Eleventh Place -- 4 pts
hibernation
a tortoise digs
his cave deeper

Carmel Lively Westerman
(0,2,0) = 4 pts

snowy pines
she longs for
his return

Linda M. Chambers
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

frozen pond
a skater slips
sound of ice

max verhart
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

on the ledge
outside the classroom
pigeons mate

Mykel Board
(0,1,3) = 4 pts

December wind
another canvas fish house
slides into the bay

Edward
(0,0,4) = 4 pts

insurance cards--
police lights flicker
in the black ice

aom (tim)
(0,0,4) = 4 pts


Twelfth Place – 3 pts
prairie harvest--
the steeple bell
pierces sunset

Paul R.
(1,0,0,) = 3 pts

packed malls--
a last coat of paint
dries on the piñata

DeVar
(1,0,0) = 3 pts

malay village wedding
between giant pots and pans
women smile

john tiong chunghoo
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

cookie crumbs
Christmas
damaged in transit

doris kasson
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

pacific northwest
gray & rain swallow the world--
winter sloshes on

Sandy Friedlander
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

frozen afternoon
in the deep stillness
seated Buddha

Bruce Ross
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

morning glories
a petal drains colour
into a puddle sky

ron moss
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

by the road
unfurling colors
a peacock

James M. Thompson
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

prayer plant
leaves align
to the grow-light

--ushi
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

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