In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point points were cast for this poem by the other participating poets.

(214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.


December 2003 Kukai Results
Kigo Theme: First Snow
Free Format Theme: Heirloom

First Place -- 13 Points

recess
the first snow
already gone

Michael Baribeau
(0,4,5) = 13


Second Place -- 12 Points

first snow
the frozen shadow
of the steeple

Carol Raisfeld
(0,4,4) = 12

soup line--
a tattered child makes
the first snow angel

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(1,2,5) = 12


Third Place -- 11 Points

first snow
already yellow--
neighbor's dog

oino sakai
(0,3,5) = 11

first snow
a hopping sparrow
prints arrows

Grzegorz Sionkowski
(1,0,8) = 11

first snow
on the rusted pump
sunset

Larry Gross
(2,1,3) = 11


Fourth Place -- 9 Points

meowing
at the back door--
first snow

Robert Mestre
(0,2,5) = 9

pink tongues
of the pre-schoolers
first snow

Allen McGill
(0,3,3) = 9

scent of woodsmoke
last leaf falling
with the first snow

Kurumi
(0,2,5) = 9

first snow
on the baby's nose . . .
crossed eyes

ushi
(0,2,5) = 9


Fifth Place -- 8 Points

the leaves
I've neglected--
first snow

Toshiro Takeshita
(0,1,6) = 8

first snow--
the suckling lapses
into deep slumber

an'ya
(1,2,1) = 8

this path
that we always walk
first snow

Tiong Chunghoo
(1,1,3) = 8

first snow
the cat door remains
firmly closed

celia crook
(0,3,2) = 8

first snow
everywhere
so much quieter

Richard Goring
(0,1,6) = 8


Sixth Place -- 7 Points

early morning
paw prints in first snow
from tree to tree

Dusko Matas
(0,2,3) = 7

first snow
today I'll wash
the dishes by hand

Joann
(1,1,2) = 7


Seventh Place -- 6 Points

first snow
his tiny face crinkles
with the touch of it

Earl Keener
(0,0,6) = 6

sea gulls huddled
on the parking lot . . .
first snow

Darrell Byrd
(0,1,4) = 6


Eighth Place -- 5 Points

first snow
sound of a zipper
the laughing boy

emile molhuysen
(0,2,1) = 5

first snow
not quite believing
the white

Mary Lee McClure
(0,1,3) = 5

first snow --
the bright red
of a cardinal

Janet Parker
(0,1,3) = 5


Ninth Place -- 4 Points

first snow
every word jingles
in december

Owen Burkhart
(0,1,2) = 4

first snow . . .
the kids' upturned heads
and open mouths

Zhanna P. Rader
(0,0,4) = 4


First Place -- 23 Points

attic dust
bronze baby shoes
and a purple heart

Carol Raisfeld
(1,8,4) = 23


Second Place -- 16 Points

late dad's rolex
the time he promised
to spend with me

Tiong Chunghoo
(1,2,9) = 16


Third Place -- 14 Points

wedding day
grandmother's gown
walks again

Kylie Hooklyn
(0,3,8) = 14


Fourth Place -- 13 Points

after sixty years
grandpa's pocket watch still set
on Berlin time

c. lee robinson
(2,2,3) = 13


Fifth Place -- 10 Points

yellowed paper
bound with darning thread
gran's recipes

ushi
(0,2,6) = 10

my sister's house
realizing who got
grandmother's silver

roberta beary
(0,3,4) = 10


Sixth Place -- 8 Points

above the mantle
our family's legacy
a clock with no hands

Owen Burkhart
(0,2,4) = 8

my mother's face
looks back at me
from the mirror

Helen Ruggieri
(2,0,2) = 8


Seventh Place -- 7 Points

grave marker
the family history
carved in stone

Allen McGill
(0,2,3) = 7

hardened leather now -
grandad's razor strop
curled in a trunk

Glen Keener
(0,2,3) = 7

heirloom smile
the curve
of her mother's lips

J Blain
(1,2,0) = 7

year on year
more of my mother
in her mirror

Hugh Waterhouse
(1,1,2) = 7


Eighth Place -- 6 Points

wishing we had
a little more time--
dad's pocket watch

Toshiro Takeshita
(0,0,6) = 6

a squirrel's heirloom
from one buried acorn
this oak full of new nests

Tim Singleton
(1,1,1) = 6

pine and cinnamon
centering the punch bowl
on mother's old lace

Kurumi
(0,2,2) = 6

winter wedding
grandmother's ring
in a new setting

Joann
(0,1,4) = 6

in the bottom drawer
flowers stitched on fine linen --
my grandmother's hand

Marylouise Knight
(0,0,6) = 6

on the flyleaf
my name under hers -
Gramma's Bible

oino sakai
(0,1,4) = 6


Ninth Place -- 5 Points

Christmas week
each watch comes with a story
crowded pawn shop

Edward
(0,0,5) = 5

moon shadows stir
on the bedroom wall--
lace doilies

DeVar
(0,2,1) = 5

grandma's quilt
how faint the stars
in the evening night

Angèle Lux
(0,1,3) = 5


Tenth Place -- 4 Points

cleaning out our stuff
everything that's hers
is an heirloom

soji
(0,2,0) = 4

tiffany lamp --
remembering her from
the patterns on the wall

mike farley
(0,1,2) = 4

knob-footed--
grandma's footstool
still four-square

Mary Lee McClure
(0,2,0) = 4

the youngest's letter
browning on the Yule log:
Please Santa, be real . . .

Nancy Smith
(0,1,2) = 4

his graduation gift --
a gold pocketwatch
engraved 1902

Janet Parker
(0,0,4) = 4

my first grandchild
wearing the christening robe
worn by my grandmother

Richard Goring
(0,0,4) = 4

silver earrings
from my great grandmother -
still kept in their case

Zhanna P. Rader
(0,0,4) = 4

old turquoise
catches winter light
inherited sky

Ann K. Schwader
(1,0,1) = 4

mother's hat box--
my childhood captured
in black and white squares

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(1,0,1) = 4

a magpie nest
in the old silver fir
granny's wedding ring

Tore Sverredal
(0,2,0) = 4

at her funeral
mother's best china dishes
on the table

Lesley Dahl
(0,1,2) = 4

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