In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point votes were cast for this poem by the other participating poets. (214 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.

August 2004 Kukai Results
Kigo Theme: Dog Days
Free Format Theme: Cookies

First Place -- 28 Points

dog days
the old fence leans towards
its shadow

Sue Stanford
(2,4,14) = 28


Second Place -- 19 Points

dog days
a copperhead slithers
out of its skin

Robert
(0,6,7) = 19


Third Place -- 18 Points

dog days--
a fly in the lemonade
rests now and then

DeVar
(1,5,5) = 18


Fourth Place -- 17 Points

dog day afternoon -
he preaches salvation
over mint juleps

sara winteridge
(1,5,4) = 17


Fifth Place -- 14 Points

Dog day…
a bank of clouds
stalls on the horizon

Ed Markowski
(0,4,6) = 14

dog days
once again the cicada's cry
fills the cemetery

Earl Keener
(0,2,10) = 14


Sixth Place -- 13 Points

dog day night ---
I dream, covered
by the moon

Carol Raisfeld
(0,4,5) = 13

dog day stillness -
a horse blinks away
his flies . . .

Carole MacRury
(0,2,9) = 13


Seventh Place -- 12 Points

dog days --
in each shadow
a stray

Nancy Smith
(0,5,2) = 12

dog days
the vulture sits
motionless

Peter H. Pache
(0,2,8) = 12


Eighth Place -- 10 Points

dog days
a tree frog leaps
from its shadow

martin
(1,1,5) = 10


Ninth Place -- 9 Points

head propped
on the empty water dish
dog days

Allen McGill
(0,0,9) = 9

dog days
a mirage shimmers
the highway

Carmel C. Lively
(0,2,5) = 9

dog days
the suction cup lets go
of the suncatcher

Joann
(0,1,7) = 9


Tenth Place -- 7 Points

dog days --
a whiff of my neighbor's
barbecue

Laryalee Fraser
(0,3,1) = 7

dog day--
I pull a red dress
from the closet

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(0,1,5) = 7

dog day heat---
a wasp makes us alive
one by one

Grzegorz Sionkowski
(0,2,3) = 7


Eleventh Place -- 6 Points

dog days:
my computer
freezes up

oino sakai
(0,0,6) = 6

Tucson dog days
a poplar growing through
a rusted sun roof

linda galloway
(0,2,2) = 6

dog days
an air-conditioner whines
at the sunrise

Mark Hollingsworth
(0,2,2) = 6

dog day . . .
blossom to blossom
a hummingbird

H. Gene Murtha
(0,2,2) = 6

a hound snores
under the porch . . .
dog days of summer

David Bewley
(1,0,3) = 6


Twelfth Place -- 5 Points

his tongue hangs out
twice as long as usual--
these dog days

Paul O. Williams
(0,1,3) = 5

dog days
I save a wasp from drowning
in the salad dressing

Tore Sverredal
(1,0,2) = 5

dog days
the cat laying under the AC
till dusk

kawazu
(0,1,3) = 5


Thirteenth Place -- 4 Points

dog day blue
the calm
in the heat

john tiong chunghoo
(0,1,2) = 4

the same sentence
over and over --
dog day haze

roberta beary
(0,1,2) = 4

sunlight filled
with cicada buzz
dog day haze

greg lammers
(0,1,2) = 4

dog days--
a chorus of crickets
each night

Owen Burkhart
(0,0,4) = 4


Fourteenth Place -- 3 Points

dog days of summer
rabbits remain
in the shade

Audrey Downey
(0,1,1) = 3

dog days
cat and I footprint
the flagstones

sheila windsor
(0,0,3) = 3

iced tea glasses sweat
rocking in the moonlight
dog day evening

Rose Marie Stutts
(0,0,3) = 3

dog days
the chow seeking
the tree's shadow

bre ;^)
(0,0,3) = 3

dog day golf
a pup stretches his belly
on the damp green

Darrell Byrd
(0,0,3) = 3

lazy dog days
Sirius rises with the sun
as I turn over

Deborah P Kolodji
(1,0,0) = 3

dog days hang
on winds from the south
green thunderclouds

J Blain
(0,0,3) = 3


First Place -- 20 Points

day moon
a tray of cookies cools
on the window sill

Sue
(0,4,12) = 20


Second Place -- 17 Points

distant crow---
my last cookie falls
from its beak

Israel L. Balan
(2,3,5) = 17

sermon over --
on a back pew
cookie crumbs

Laryalee Fraser
(2,2,7) = 17

wanting to write
a haiku about cookies,
I eat the whole jar

Zhanna P. Rader
(1,3,8) = 17


Third Place -- 14 Points

cookies
our footsteps
quicken

sheila windsor
(1,3,5) = 14


Fourth Place -- 12 Points

January moon
in the office window
an almond cookie

J Blain
(0,4,4) = 12


Fifth Place -- 11 Points

Oaschsmeal cookie…
remembering grandmother's
broken english

Ed Markowski
(1,1,6) = 11

cookie crumbs
a finger finds the hole
in my pocket

Darrell Byrd
(0,2,7) = 11

tattered diary--
cookie crumbs and memories
beneath lock and key

Kathy Lippard Cobb
(1,2,4) = 11

remembering
cookies and milk--
a mother cries

Owen Burkhart
(1,3,2) = 11


Sixth Place -- 10 Points

toothless
spitting pecans out of
her shortbread cookie

bre ;^)
(1,2,3) = 10

stop light
brushing cookie crumbs
off my sunburn

ushi
(0,3,4) = 10


Seventh Place -- 9 Points

summer comfort --
warm sugar cookies
dipped in cold milk

Carol Raisfeld
(0,2,5) = 9

one cookie
two children
the puppy snatches it

Janet Parker
(1,2,2) = 9

bits of conversation
from cell phones in the park--
cookie crumbs

DeVar
(1,2,2) = 9

half-eaten cookie
a chocolate fingerprint
on the lace curtain

Deborah P Kolodji
(1,0,6) = 9

after the picnic
three magpies scrap
over cookie crumbs

Peter H. Pache
(1,2,2) = 9


Eighth Place -- 8 Points

leaving home
mothers cookie secrets
smudged with tears

Kylie Hooklyn
(1,1,3) = 8

little finger
scooping cookie dough
Mom's half smile

greg lammers
(0,1,6) = 8

holiday cookies-
maintaining their
shape

Aparna Iyer
(1,1,3) = 8


Ninth Place -- 7 Points

in the crease
between chin and jowl
a cookie crumb

Sue Stanford
(1,1,2) = 7


Tenth Place -- 6 Points

Patio tray,
three raisin cookies.
Are those ants?

Trevor Camp
(1,1,1) = 6


Eleventh Place -- 5 Points

after tea -
a fly is taking a bite
from a last cookie

Cornelia
(0,2,1) = 5

the lost child found
in the smell of cookies--
Christmas Eve

Dan Schwerin
(0,1,3) = 5

fortune cookie advice
everything will be fine
learn chinese

angelee deodhar
(1,0,2) = 5

porch screen--
cookie crumbs scattered
on the moon

martin
(1,0,2) = 5

a cookie lies
trampled down in the grass
thunderclouds

Tore Sverredal
(0,1,3) = 5


Twelfth Place -- 4 Points

break-up lunch
for once no one splits
the last cookie

roberta beary
(0,1,2) = 4

picking cookie crumbs
from my shirt pocket lint--
that hungry

Paul O. Williams
(0,1,2) = 4

grocery store tantrum
the teenage mother heads for
the cookie aisle

Edward
(0,0,4) = 4

stubborn itch
remnants of last night's
cookies in bed

Allen McGill
(0,1,2) = 4

midterm exams
he eats the last
chocolate chip cookie

Carmel C. Lively
(0,0,4) = 4

late night movie -
waking up with
cookie crumbs

Ao Tomato
(0,0,4) = 4


Thirteenth Place -- 3 Points

camper making friends
with fortune cookies
from home

Nancy Smith
(0,0,3) = 3

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